can someone critique my sheik? sorry, i only have one 1 on 1 with my sheik, others are team battles or 3 ways. so i will just post this one. sheiks my #2 character, but i will get more 1v1s with her saved and uploaded.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rxhD21j-wns
0:11 to 0:15 You are using the Ftilt at 0%, Sheik ftilt does not combo at that percentage so it's better to use something like jabs, utilt, dtilt, and grabs. Using something like ftilt into rapid jabs at that percentage can work but it's not a true combo. It also looks like you weren't buffering your ftilts as well which allowed him to air dodge and get behind you. Even at 5% Sheik ftilt still isn't good and worst yet you now have some decay on it so it wouldn't true combo to at least 16% compared to 13% you would have waited for if it was fresh.
0:18 Fsmash sucks, it's slow, it can be shield grabbed even between hits, and the cool down is easy to punish. It might work now because he's side stepping the first kick but later on people will always just shield it. It's best to just forget about this move for now before it becomes a habit to use it.
0:20 Because all of your damage so far been just the ftilt it continues to not true combo.
0:26 Utilt cool down is punishable so the attack is generally used more precised then spammed 3 times.
0:28 after you missed the dash grab you used either dtilt or dsmash(hard to tell). Dtilt is Sheiks third fastest attack option and dsmash is second the first being jab. Since you missed the grab chances are your going to get punish so as far as offensive options it's best to use your fastest attack possible to interrupt whatever they plan to use to punish you.
0:34 Hit the wrong button?
0:37 Because of all the ftilt use you did earlier even at 50% you can only link Ftilt into other tilts, nothing more.
1:00 Toon link just hit the ground fairly close to you with a dair instead of using dash attack to cause only 7% you should of dash grabbed. Sheik back throw and fthrow does the same amount of damage but since he was near 100% you could of done at least 2 pummels before the throw which would do double the damage of the dash attack overall.
1:20 No idea if you could true combo at that percentage nor do I care enough to look into it but above 100% when using the ftilt if you don't know what your options are just do a uair or nair. Even if they can escape it with an attack or air dodge they might not respond quick enough to avoid the hit.
1:23 you know another move you should forget about, dair. Dair is more useless then fsmash since about 99% of the time you wont be using it for attacking.
1:46 he was at a pretty low % when you did that throw it might of been wiser to walk after him until you enter range to utilt or ftilt so you could start a juggle.
2:30 good gimping is good
3:10 I'ma lovin that dacus kill.
Finally thoughts, you roll too much offensively and defensively you don't use enough needles in fact you barely used them at all, overall you just need more experience in using Sheik. At first using sheik can be really difficult but once you start using the ftilt correctly so you get some nice combos going and start using your speed it becomes a hell of a lot of fun to use her.
Keep practicing that Sheik man =3
edit: Ha, it's amazing what one can accomplish when surrounded by his family unable to play any games.