~ Zelda Video and Critique Archive ~ (obselete thread/check stickies)

[-Tempest-]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LJh3lY9Zmu8&feature=related

Tempest (Zelda) v. Fragbait (Falco). If possible, I'd like this critiqued.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RKvSY9kC2SE&feature=related

Tempest (Zelda) v. Fragbait (Pit). You can critique this one too, but I'm not too worried about it.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_q_SXW59ZQc&feature=related

Tempest (Zelda) v. Mr. Doom (Ike). Please critique.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X2M2W2nc1pA&feature=channel_page

Tempest (Zelda) and Supergamer (Lucario) v. Karmacide (Snake) and Ratman (Snake). Teams match. Please critique.

Thank you for your time.

 

[D0N]

I play DK, but I tried zelda for a few days. I probly suck at it... Please critique this and rip it to shreds. pm me what could have gone better using times and stuff please and it will be appreciated.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c0aUVfaRrio&feature=channel_page D0N vs Wizzlecroff (ROB)

 

[ohaiduhg]

DarkWater (Zelda) vs (Pit)
Offline match

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iChTeQhSW_I

 

[-Mars-]

DarkWater (Zelda) vs (Pit)
Offline match

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iChTeQhSW_I

I definitely need to start seeing some dtilts from you.......seriously it's like her best move. You also can't try to use fsmash for OoS punishment.........it's way too slow for that, use it as a spacing tool and for mid-range punishment only.

 

[-Mars-]

Sorry for the double post, but I have a vid to put up/critique.......not much just a little friendly with a friend.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XVR7_UZZlpY&feature=channel (Toon Link)

 

[NinjaLink]

Sorry for the double post, but I have a vid to put up/critique.......not much just a little friendly with a friend.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XVR7_UZZlpY&feature=channel (Toon Link)

Play better opponents. He plays like he's half asleep. Misses very easy punishs. He spammed bair and u acted like u had no idea what to so. Ur spotdodging bairs thats not even approaching u. U spam dtilt when it isnt safe so TL grabbed u. And he shouldnt even gotten hit by that many dtilts when he coulda blocked.

In short, neither of u looked like u were that involved in that fight. Post up a more serious video.

 

[-Mars-]

I agree, i'll try to get some better games recorded.

 

[GodAtHand]

http://www.youtube.com/user/GodAtHand

New matches up starring me! And others...

Watch enjoy, critic, etc. All are friendlies besides the one where I am at a tournament some of them I am not even Zelda but still watch critic, etc.

If you don't think people will watch unless I post direct links to them tell me and I will do so.

Edit: Direct Links to Zelda Vids for KayLo! (because of lazybones!)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UVwnGc_qq1w Zelda vs Snake
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kIpmy5U7f1A&feature=channel_page Vs Metankight
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_dFAFG2Zpvg&feature=channel_page Vs Pit
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=adRNKrgpmmg&feature=channel_page Vs ZSS
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9jU_jt998r8&feature=channel_page Team Friendly

 

[KayLo!]

If you don't think people will watch unless I post direct links to them tell me and I will do so.

Me. I'm lazy, lol.

 

[-Mars-]

http://www.youtube.com/user/GodAtHand

New matches up starring me! And others...

Watch enjoy, critic, etc. All are friendlies besides the one where I am at a tournament some of them I am not even Zelda but still watch critic, etc.

If you don't think people will watch unless I post direct links to them tell me and I will do so.

Edit: Direct Links to Zelda Vids for KayLo! (because of lazybones!)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UVwnGc_qq1w Zelda vs Snake
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kIpmy5U7f1A&feature=channel_page Vs Metankight
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_dFAFG2Zpvg&feature=channel_page Vs Pit
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=adRNKrgpmmg&feature=channel_page Vs ZSS
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9jU_jt998r8&feature=channel_page Team Friendly

Good s*** man, I really like your style. Not too much that I didn't like with your Zelda, only a couple ill advised Dins Fires here and there. Really if you just cut out a little bit of your Dins usage.....you would start ****** people.

Edit: Oh yea and use bair for momentum cancelling.

 

[Kataefi]

I definitely enjoyed those videos... I think you make some smart choices... you did some really good locks as well that caught people by surprise... like on snake. No wonder your powerranked lol

 

[GodAtHand]

@ Marsulas: Yah, that is one of the reasons I put them up! I like re-watching them to check for what better decisions I could have made. One thing I noticed that you noticed too was that I ALWAYS expect people to want to not role into Zelda because I personally wouldn't want to become smash bait, but when I throw out the Din's to punish their hopeful role away I get punished back...... Something I have to work on.

@Kat: Thanks! I just beat a poweranked Snake at a tournament the other day, we had played before and he beat me, but this time I won! I saved the final match of the set and I will hopefully be able to link to that and some of the team matches I had with Peachkid. The guy I beat still outplaced me though.... I got owned by two Falcos in a row afterwards.... I need tons of help with that matchup.

 

[Mikey Lenetia]

Hee... I figured you guys would like to see this match and whatnot. Critique and enjoyment are encouraged, especially the second one.

Mikey Lenetia(Zelda) vs. Vayseth(Dedede) [Battlefield]
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ayaI_Mr1viU&feature=channel_page

 

[choknater]

ahhhhh DM i love your zelda

you two Mikey

i wish i could fuse my sheik with your zeldas! ahhhh so good

 

[Kataefi]

Mikey the ending was very funny! I liked how you both ran to and from each other... mindgames much?

 

[KayLo!]

Hee... I figured you guys would like to see this match and whatnot. Critique and enjoyment are encouraged, especially the second one.

Mikey Lenetia(Zelda) vs. Vayseth(Dedede) [Battlefield]
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ayaI_Mr1viU&feature=channel_page

This is late, but I just watched the vid today.

Good ****.

A few things, though: For one, your airdodge.... a lot. And kind of predictably. I noticed it in particular during your first stock.

Also, you didn't pressure DDD when he was off-stage at all. You just kind of sat there when you could have at least Din's'd or something.

End of your first stock, he was being really obvious with trying to land the utilt and you kind of.... uh. Fell into it.

It was a good match, though. I like your Zelda! The LK on his recovery was hilarious, lolol.

 

[Mikey Lenetia]

This is late, but I just watched the vid today.

Good ****.

A few things, though: For one, your airdodge.... a lot. And kind of predictably. I noticed it in particular during your first stock.

Also, you didn't pressure DDD when he was off-stage at all. You just kind of sat there when you could have at least Din's'd or something.

End of your first stock, he was being really obvious with trying to land the utilt and you kind of.... uh. Fell into it.

It was a good match, though. I like your Zelda! The LK on his recovery was hilarious, lolol.

I actually want him to grab the ledge when recovering. I've found that my Zelda has a Marth complex ONLY against his Dedede, because it works a lot. He hasn't found an answer to me standing there before, and he still hasn't found that answer, because I have something for everything he does at that spot. If he takes too long getting to the ledge is when he REALLY should worry. ^.^

Yeah, I don't know what I was doing there. After I dodged the first, I wanted to do a running usmash. Didn't work out that way. Then I full jumped AND landed on the ledge for a brief moment by mistake. Whoopsie. -_-;

Also, I found it really weird that a star didn't come out from where I kicked him, because he very clearly landed right when I kicked... I found that really strange for some reason.

 

[GodAtHand]

Here are some doubles matches from a tournament last weekend. Got Second in teams.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jd4z6Du_pnM&feature=channel_page
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=irzMw7nOVeM&feature=channel_page
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QqmMjW-sM0E&feature=channel_page
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xWm3f-9-6ww&feature=channel_page I do something stupid in this one lol... I know she is slow but I did it anyways...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nrKYsUZwv4k&feature=channel_page
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=20WGpyUepdA&feature=channel_page
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cG1Cd2CA0u4&feature=channel_page

 

[Darkmusician]

I'll update thread today/tomorrow.

 

[#HBC | Scary]

I have so vids that I'd like to get critiqued

Monk (Mario)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g6Q7XhsBZ-E
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aoNRmhJoTL4

Time Runs Away
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AQfQSVpaq0o

TET
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=upp_LsBBfpo

 

[-Mars-]

I have so vids that I'd like to get critiqued

Monk (Mario)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g6Q7XhsBZ-E
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aoNRmhJoTL4

Time Runs Away
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AQfQSVpaq0o

TET
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=upp_LsBBfpo

Scary I like the Zelda. I play very similar to you except I don't use ftilt near as much as you do.

I only watched the Mario matches but your spacing is really good. Hold on let me go watch the other ones before I go any further.

Really good baiting and crossups in the Pit video...that Pit player is nowhere close to your skill level though.

The Marth player is pretty bad as well.

Anyways the only things I would recommend against Monk is maybe mix in a few more empty SH's because he kept tring to shield and punish vs you. Oh and against mario you probably just want to stick to basic edgeguarding instaed of throwing out Dins. Mario has an extremely easy time avoiding it during his recovery.

 

[#HBC | Scary]

Thanks Marsulas!

Monk is usually very difficult for me because he is always able to make some sort of comeback that rattles me just a little bit. Even when I go all Sheik, we go even, minus the vids he recently posted for me on the Sheik boards.

Some strange reason, I really like Ftilt; I cannot explain why, but I love the move lol.

 

[zeldspazz]

Hmm Ive recently battled a very nice Ice-climbers, I should upload some vids of us playing we are pretty even. I'd also like to get critiqued =)

 

[AlMoStLeGeNdArY]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3WIkIgs6lH4&eurl=http%3A%2F%2Fxat%2Ecom%2Fchat%2Froom%2F45059066%2F%3Fp%3D0%26ss%3D4%26m%3Dwww%2Eyoutube%2Ecom%2Fwatch%253Fv%3D3WIkIgs6lH4&feature=player_embedded


Critique my Zelda please.

 

[Elder Sister]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3WIkIgs6lH4&eurl=http%3A%2F%2Fxat%2Ecom%2Fchat%2Froom%2F45059066%2F%3Fp%3D0%26ss%3D4%26m%3Dwww%2Eyoutube%2Ecom%2Fwatch%253Fv%3D3WIkIgs6lH4&feature=player_embedded


Critique my Zelda please.

you have a good zelda(peachs a beast)

i noticed a few things
your not edgeguarding(first stock)
your being edgeguarded too easily(also first)

also noteworthy:
peach:54%-64%
you:60%-170%/death
that was the situation when peach already lost her first stock and you still had your first


all in all pretty good^^
match gets better during the battle

 

[Darkmusician]

Updated first page.

Added critique section for 1 v 1 and 2 v 2.

Please check the critique section guidelines before posting videos to be added.

Thank you.

 

[AlMoStLeGeNdArY]

you have a good zelda(peachs a beast)

i noticed a few things
your not edgeguarding(first stock)
your being edgeguarded too easily(also first)

also noteworthy:
peach:54%-64%
you:60%-170%/death
that was the situation when peach already lost her first stock and you still had your first


all in all pretty good^^
match gets better during the battle

I don't get what you mean about the note worthy parts. But thanks for the feedback and for the compliment on my Zelda.

 

[Elder Sister]

I don't get what you mean about the note worthy parts. But thanks for the feedback and for the compliment on my Zelda.

i mean while she only took 10% damage, you took 110%(till death).
i thought it was questionable, but nevermind^^

 

[sasook]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IByGW1Ojc-w

Just a little something for you all.

 

[AlMoStLeGeNdArY]

i mean while she only took 10% damage, you took 110%(till death).
i thought it was questionable, but nevermind^^

I'm still having trouble following what you mean.

Can someone also give input on my Zelda ?

 

[sasook]

It means that for that one portion, where the opponent took 10% and you took 110%, your opponent read you like a book and you should have changed something up to stop that.

 

[AlMoStLeGeNdArY]

It means that for that one portion, where the opponent took 10% and you took 110%, your opponent read you like a book and you should have changed something up to stop that.

Ah I see I get it now IDK why it didn't click when he said it.

 

[stealth3654]

Please critique my Zelda

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zE-1SAEcJYc

This is a friendly on 7/18/09.

Opponent's name: Octix

 

[Elder Sister]

It means that for that one portion, where the opponent took 10% and you took 110%, your opponent read you like a book and you should have changed something up to stop that.

my sincerest thanks to you<3

Ah I see I get it now IDK why it didn't click when she said it.

fix'd

 

[Darkmusician]

The most epic and important video that any Zelda should watch.
DarkMusician vs NinjaLink
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TBiShzF9kl0

 

[JigglyZelda003]

Please critique my Zelda

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zE-1SAEcJYc

This is a friendly on 7/18/09.

Opponent's name: Octix

ignoring the fact that Lucario didn't try to camp you much....

your kinda stiff, for most of the first minute you didn't move much if at all. nearing the second minute you did you a bit more approaching, but it was a bit over aggresive i think. you also have my problem of challenging the edgehog alot, you barely go for the edge lol.

more often Lucario will try to force an approach so you might want to be a bit more proactive. maybe add a little more aggresiveness when hes offstage even if its just dins harrasment.

um i hope that helped somewhat, i hate lucario

 

[Ochobobo]

The most epic and important video that any Zelda should watch.
DarkMusician vs NinjaLink
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TBiShzF9kl0

Spoiler

**** it, I actually believed that. LOL!

Epic! I especially liked the Reverse Nayru's to spike/uair tradeoff on that second kill. Nice comeback in the end though

 

[Elder Sister]

The most epic and important video that any Zelda should watch.
DarkMusician vs NinjaLink
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TBiShzF9kl0

really epic, especially the kick in tha *** @ 1:35.....

Spoiler

meh, ive been fooledT__T

 

[Kaffei]

Please critique my Zelda

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zE-1SAEcJYc

This is a friendly on 7/18/09.

Opponent's name: Octix

More edge hogging; I saw numerous opportunities for you to hog the ledge, but you never went for it. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-fc7YnJlxIQ#t=1m23s
I think you should move around more... but that's just me.
IDA would work nice too. Land some LKs.

 

[Mr.Ious]

Holy Enchantress: A Zelda Combo Video

A friend of mine made this but she doesn't have an account here so asked me to post for her

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=csZNewjziWA&fmt=18


Hope you enjoy, please leave comments/feedback! =)