0:19 you guessed the roll in place, you had two options here though, hold him and backthrow him once the wind pushed you to the edge, yomi and dash attack for the killhttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QvGrWGUrf5o&feature=BFa&list=FLWHCXPl_FEgq4_cRw_jQ98A
critique?
at least the first two matches
this is a lil old but i want to see what you guys have to say
0:25 also you coulda grabbed -> gimp here
0:47 why did you wd here? And when you do this you put yourself a million years behind tech chasing so next time you try to follow up run up and wait (probably run up shield, because they're gonna either spot dodge or attack you)
0:57 that wd back utilt was wicked smart (even though he landed and shielded at the perfect spacing for both hits to tap his shield, but he spot dodges opening up for a grab), same as 0:19 here, if you guessed the tech away in either situation you could have run up dsmashed or dash attacked and winner would have been you
1:10 call everything else nitpicking, idc, but this stood out to me a lot. Fade back those defensive nairs (unless htis was offensive, and which case space those cause you landed RIGHT infront of his shield)
1:20 was really smart, at first I was confused why you stepped forward after he started side b, but it was to cover him shortening it (cause the shorten right to the edge was the hardest to cover) you still get the punish (idk how i feel about that second dair but I don't really dair mid combo so that's me)
also, in this whole sequence, this was the first tech chase that you've gotten on the edge (1 of 3), Idk what I'm trying to convey with this, I think it was a slip up on vanz part, he techs towards the edge twice and 100% of the time you don't capitalize, and then doesn't and get's punished lolol
1:40 why you throwin' needles when he's full jumping?
1:55 you run back in to punish an aerial wif. Now, I'm sure sheik can do this, but you got shined out of it, I can't say "run in and shield" cause it's not like a space animal commits to anything when they shine, i'm also sure this isn't the only time this happens
2:00 was the di intentional? Smart as **** (you di'd the nair up so he shined you off the ground and you converted what could have been a nasty combo into a grab)
2:20 why did you nair and why did it work? (legit question, i honestly don't know lol)
2:20 (and on) so you nair him and he's on the edge, you start zoning him out with a few bairs (he appraoches the second one then backs up) THEN you turn around, full jump nair, and you give him the rest of the stage to run to and laser camp
2:30 I assume this was suppose to be a dair, but if not, why the **** did you turn around dsmash? (again, legit question, I'm highly perplexed)
2:32 I guess dsmash was the "safe" option, but when/where he dj'd, you def had enough time to run off nair (and maybe throw some needles). Do you use run off nair for edge guards?
2:36 that nair was okay but if vanz had landed on the platform? fall through uair ez
2:40 the needle was good, upon further review you were like, 2-3 frames behind on that fair (literally), and just because I'm being nitpicky, ledge-hop bair would have been a better choice
2:55 I think you died here because you did the same thing last stock when you had to get off the edge, infact it looks like vanz full hopped just to wait out your roll animation
3:09 you got shined again for trying to punish a missed aerial
3:19 AWWW YEAH GOT THAT TECH TOWARD THE EDGE, except idk if regrab was your best choice
3:47 since you only had one needle, run off nair or dsmash was a better option
3:53 that nair felt so unsafe, like, if instead of dj'ing, if he had just flat out baired, you would have been dead
3:55 he shields here, instead of a full hop nair (which felt dangerous cause you were in the **** zone) you could have ran right out of the corner (unless he shield dropped). I guess fox might have been able to wd out of shield and caught you but you could have reacted to that. Lucky for you vanz just conceded the rest of the stage to you though >_>
4:28 if you had kept dashing you could have dsmashed or dash attacked the bounce
....I forgot how exhausting this is. I'll keep going if you want me to but I'm taking a break and going to bed right now