if you don't mind, PM me a critique on my marth. I'm not actively seeking marth improvement as this tourny pretty much showed me I'm a 1 trick pony and fox is by far my best character (I lost marf vs roy AND dk. what the ****.) but I'd have to be ******** to turn down free advice.
EDIT-@Meneks-if you don't mind, PM me. =D
Ok so here is the Fox critique I promised. I basically watched all of your fights with Captain Falcon. Game 4, on DL...you have excellent pressuring skills. I was very impressed with that. Nice SHFFL nair pressure. But in my opinion, you don't kill quick enough. This is due to a few reasons. One, you weren't very aggressive in your edge guarding in that particular match up. Try to get get some shine spike kills, especially against Falcon. Believe it or not, using ledge hop dairs when your foe is recovering below you is actually pretty useful with Fox. It may not spike but it does push your foe low enough for you to get a shine spike kill, especially when done on another Fox, or a Falco. Forward tilts, down smash and bair also ****. So definitely work on your edge guarding for quick kills/gimps.
The second reason I think you don't kill quick enough is because when you knock your foe high into the air, it seems you get restless and start doing random tech skill until they are close enough for you to land. I'm referring to Falcon's third stock. You up smashed him and instead of jumping up on the platforms to apply pressure you start doing randomness. You should always be applying pressure, and not doing so actually cost you that stock. There is plenty of time to show off when you actually make the kill. lol
Other then that, good job in that match.
Your match with cf on FD: You have this habit that I'm sure all Fox players had at one point, and that's the full jump, to double jump, to bair. This really isn't all that effective, at least when its done multiple times. Instead of doing this just simply run away/or towards your opponent. A few times your reaction speed wasn't too sharp. Like when you did an up throw on Falcon it looked like you hesitated. There is no need to hesitate after you up throw someone with Fox. Fox has more then enough speed to follow up. A full jump nair would have been ideal after that up throw since cf DI-ed a bit.
Also, try and make your wave dashes a tad bit longer. When wave dashing try and angle your analog stick as forward as possible. This will also help when waveshining Marth's as well, and others. Nice combo on Falcon's second. You followed up perfectly. :-)
Also, learn your percents for combos. You attempted a up throw to upsmash on Falcon at 0 percent. In stead of up smash after a up throw at 0%, use up tilts to grab or waveshine. This ***** Falcon's at low percents. Again, try and work on your edge guarding, although the double shine spike at the end was nice. =P
Overall, you have a pretty cool Fox. Just tidy up on the things I and others have suggested and you'll be fine. I think you should contribute to the Fox Forum combo vid, by the way.
