Dero, needs more quick uairs and retreating fairs vs. fox.
Also, work on your tech skills. For example, you got punished from the ledge a lot, which you really shouldn't, seeing as how ganon has so many options from the ledge. Like if you waveland a little more, you can escape pressure. Just remember not to spam it (like I do) or you'll get burned for that as well.
Tech skill isn't that important (minus your basics, such as wd and l-cancel), but the more you are able to do, the more options you have and the more you can cover.
Vs. falco, I have no idea. But look at linguini's match with shiz lol, that should explain enough.
Haven't checked yours yet, Ian. Bet it will be awesome