some new vids please critique everyone, i wanna get better
vs roy r
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eQprVB_8T9k
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XU-D7RRfhso
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RsfLX_vXFbg
vs infinity
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZPU6VeNRC54&feature=related
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZGmmafKbugM&feature=related
i know i got destroyed in the mk vids and i already saw a lot of my mistakes , but any additional critique would be amazing (cough nick/dazwa/snakeee) . Thanks in advance.
vs. RoyR
Match 1:
1:18
Do not sit out there without moving like that. Marth can bair you for charging your paralyzer.
2:05
Random down-B is punishable by law. I don't know why he didn't.
2:24
He should have u-tilted you for that.
You 100% outplayed him this entire match. I could write pages on what HE did wrong. XD
Match 2:
1:00
Jump to immediate down-B? Why?
1:51
D-smash instead of grab in these situations. It actually connects.
3:00
Never retreating side-b when Marth is in your face. His aerial momentum is about the same as ours.
3:38
Don't ever let the one stun per landing slip your mind. If he read you, you would have lost here.
Match 3:
0:36
This is the 2nd or 3rd down-b kick that you did not need to do. Empty ones are fine sometimes, y'know!
0:48
And this is why you don't grab when you are at kill %.
2:04
I'm mad that worked...
2:19
That too.
General notes:
90% of the time when RoyR is in range to throw out a fair/nair, he does. 90% of the time, when he gets hit, he lands with an AD.
Just throwing that out there.
vs. Infinity
Match 1:
Never leave your armor at the beginning unless you are 100% sure the first one will allow you to go back. MK is 100% better with armor than ZSS.
2:30
Don't try to beat high glide with d-smash. As you see here, MK can always angle it up at the end, dodge, and hit you in the mouth.
3:05
ANOTHER grab.
Come on, man. Stop throwing them out, unless you are on the platform, and wanna do silly things.
3:53
Nice read. Why no GR > Regrab for the little extra pummel damage?
You kinda got wrecked this match.
Match 2:
Not going to critique ZSS vs. MK on BF.
Why did you go there?
http://www.youtube.com/view_play_list?p=969ABB3ABFE5E3E5
A bunch of vids of me vs Dark.pch's Peach. He only uploaded the ones in which he won (I did win, it's true lol) but whatever.
I wanna see some where you win.
Also, the quality/blinking made my eyes hurt, so I'm not giong to critique these.
Some videos of me at my latest smashfest.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XdF3d21dJGY
PatG(ZSS) vs Anaki(MK)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k4mifNECja4
PatG(ZSS) vs Anaki(MK)
Match 2: (Halberd)
Nice color.
0:20
You AD through the nado into... nothing?
1:10
No clue why the MK ran in to get hit here... He's clearly winning.
1:34
With no jump, or down-b, you recovered. I envy you.
Stuff ending at 2:08
... You have got to be kidding me...
This MK just really wants to take hits, I guess.
He also does not want to DI your bair... ever...
Only one I'm writing about. You are clearly leagues better than your opponent, so it's not possible for me to write about this at any decent skill level.
Can u critique these matches(below) instead of the ones i posted before excluding the pikachu ones since i need help w/ that match up?
Of course anyone else willing to give me advice is welcome too. I need it :[
Vs Biglou(Luigi, MK) 1, 2, & 3
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AUydB98vgoY
Luigi is dumb and iunno how to fight him at all. Excuse my SD's i was being really dumb for some reason.
Vs Biglou(Snake) 1
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iywKc3hXEmk
Vs Kismet (Falco) 1, 2, & 3----4 & 5
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eo9pHUcgi7o
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EnHYraFLqaY
Ignore my match when im mk, he was showing me falco vs mk cept it was fail since my mk is horribad.
Vs Billy(Snake) 1, 2, & 3
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wsWIOmRk1-s
I'll do yours later.