daisho
Smash Lord
Cargo releases don't combo into anything actually unless your playing lucas ness or wario (maybe others idk).
I'm gonna go through it second by second and tell you what you did wrong (for the marth video)
Note: I am not a "Good" DK, I am just trying to show you what you may have done wrong. Please don't take any of the following in an insulting way.
I havnt watched the other video, ill watch it later.
08: A) you pummeled at 0, he should have broken out. B) If you do dthrow to Ftilt it will do about 19%. Though you did set up and edgeguarding situation which was good but didnt really do anything to try and keep him off.
11: You could have done Cargo down throw toss, this is your primary toss for getting them off stage, Cargo Fthrow is pretty much useless.
16: You ran away, why?
24: You threw out an Fsmash, if you had hit him it would have done something like 21%. You should have Ftilted which does like 10% and it almost definitely would have hit.
30: Up B has horrible ending lag unless you land on the ground shortly after it is over, next time go for the ledge.
35: Sorry, no combo. Should have pummeled and bthrew.
49: He should have broken out ages before you even got off the stage. It is too risky to attempt a cargo stage spike at that percent let alone pummel him first.
51: While he is dead you should either be A) charging your punch or B) taunting... your taunts are godly, use them to your advantage.
1:06 Try short hopping bairs instead of full hopping, you can hit marth out of a short hopped bair.
1:15 Often after you land laglessly from the Up B they will be confused long enough for you to use the DSmash. It is a good idea to Dsmash right after the Up B.
1:34 You should save the Punch longer and get him scared.
1:37 Way too far to attempt a CSS, your friend should take button mashing 101.
1:41 Usually not a good idea to do a jumping approach while facing forwards.
1:59 I couldn't tell what you used to momentum cancel but it looked like fair. Bair is much better and will save you many lives if you use Bair to Up B momentum cancel.
2:02 Again, you could have used Dthrow to ftilt
2:09 I would have punished with the punch, he should have broken out after the pummels.
2:11 Way too early to attempt CSS
I'm gonna go through it second by second and tell you what you did wrong (for the marth video)
Note: I am not a "Good" DK, I am just trying to show you what you may have done wrong. Please don't take any of the following in an insulting way.
I havnt watched the other video, ill watch it later.
08: A) you pummeled at 0, he should have broken out. B) If you do dthrow to Ftilt it will do about 19%. Though you did set up and edgeguarding situation which was good but didnt really do anything to try and keep him off.
11: You could have done Cargo down throw toss, this is your primary toss for getting them off stage, Cargo Fthrow is pretty much useless.
16: You ran away, why?
24: You threw out an Fsmash, if you had hit him it would have done something like 21%. You should have Ftilted which does like 10% and it almost definitely would have hit.
30: Up B has horrible ending lag unless you land on the ground shortly after it is over, next time go for the ledge.
35: Sorry, no combo. Should have pummeled and bthrew.
49: He should have broken out ages before you even got off the stage. It is too risky to attempt a cargo stage spike at that percent let alone pummel him first.
51: While he is dead you should either be A) charging your punch or B) taunting... your taunts are godly, use them to your advantage.
1:06 Try short hopping bairs instead of full hopping, you can hit marth out of a short hopped bair.
1:15 Often after you land laglessly from the Up B they will be confused long enough for you to use the DSmash. It is a good idea to Dsmash right after the Up B.
1:34 You should save the Punch longer and get him scared.
1:37 Way too far to attempt a CSS, your friend should take button mashing 101.
1:41 Usually not a good idea to do a jumping approach while facing forwards.
1:59 I couldn't tell what you used to momentum cancel but it looked like fair. Bair is much better and will save you many lives if you use Bair to Up B momentum cancel.
2:02 Again, you could have used Dthrow to ftilt
2:09 I would have punished with the punch, he should have broken out after the pummels.
2:11 Way too early to attempt CSS