nvm i'll just double post
its better =D
anyways things to work on -
if those curved lines are pen tooling then good job
one thing ima say you should work on is rendering (if you're doing the rendering, and if you arent you should go over it to make sure its clean.)
idk if its intentional, but it looked out of place how theres a random glow above the egg, behind yoshis head.
if it WASNT intentional, then its mostly likely because there were pixels around that area on the renders layer, so it put a glow around it, =p
but in general try to reeallyyy make sure the renders clean around the edges and in its surroundings,
another example of a not very good render is on your sig.
around him is a black 2-3 pxl stroke , if you notice how its bumpy in some spots, its cuz the render had pixels around there, so it put a stroke around them =p
(i had to fix my old psyduck sig a bunch of times cuz there were random white splotches becase the renders layer had a white stroke around it, causing the little pixels i missed when rendering to stick out like sore thumbs and ruin the sig. T.T
if you're rendering them, idk if you do,
but use the pen tool, there should be a tutorial on the interwebs on what to do if y ou dont know how.
but never
ever
ever
ever ever
use the magic wand tool XD
it only creates problem lmao.
(once again idk what ur using but it looked like u used the wand on the tt sig, and possible that one)
you have those nice curved lines, you may have wanted to shape the text to flow with the lines more in the middle, or on the lines, maybe to look cut out, idk, this is preference.
also around the middle of the sig, the left side of everything thats black becomes grey, everything else just gets lighter,
i think its because the soft brush, but its cut in a completely vertical line where everything gets lighter
(most noticable on the curved lines. right side is lighter than the left side (left is black , right is dark grey)
other wise good job with the bg, and theres a lot more flow to that sig.
but you may want to work on making the focal point more obvious, this could just be me but i found the lighting very distracting
everything else is great,
^_^
got a lot better from the last one.
@ stos sexy sword.
sexier hat 8D <333333
edit: andy got to it first hahaha <3
but yeah im glad it isnt just me who found the lighting distracting