sup guys, can you rate my Fox?
I think some of the mistakes i made was staying in my shield, he was lasering and he shinegrabbed me. And when he was on the ledge i wanted to punish him from the platform, he illusion'd me.
Can some people maybe tell me the other mistakes? or maybe tell me what i did good?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xH4lDGR5nCg
I feel like you dash dance and do nice baiting tactics (like that sort of vertical dash dance on the platforms), but then you go in at the wrong time or when you just shouldn't. For example, at about 4:47-4:51, you dash dance a bit and then do a full hop nair (not sure if it was meant to be a short hop or not). Either way, in that position, the falco can get free hits on you. There's not a TON of this happening, but there is a decent amount of it. I think it happens a lot in game 3. Whether or not it works on this opponent, I don't think it's a good idea to approach like this - move around a bit to mess them up, but then go in kind of blind hoping to surprise them. You want to take advantage of their mistakes after they make them than to try to do things that may invoke mistakes from them that aren't actually safe.
You shielded a bit too much a few times, but it wasn't so much that it is super bad. Just a little bit more practice to find the comfortable ways to avoid those situations.
I think you tried to punish out of shield a bit too much when you couldn't. Falco/fox shield pressure is tough to deal with, and a lot of the time the only way out is to just run away rather than punish them.
Also, is this PAL version? I noticed you never got any upsmash kills and was wondering what's up. It kills easily at like 90, but I know it is nerfed in PAL. If it is PAL, is upsmash not as useful? If it is not PAL, upsmash more, and don't counterpick to dreamland as fox. The high ceiling makes it garbage for fox. I think against falco, FD and pokemon stadium are good choices.
EDIT
I just want to point out that I don't really play fox much and my advice could be a little off. If I said something incorrect, if someone could let me know that would be great.