Gonzalo: camilo sowed me some of your sets vs zein. They're from a year ago. It looks like you know what you're doing.
Lovage: the only frame traps I can think of is multi-shine, and peach's FC aerial -> d-smash/grab/jab.
There are probably more, but those to stand out for me.
Toph: all this things you did in your set vs peach!!!
More on that later. In too mad
Edit: ok, so I watched the first stock so far and that shine-platform waveland -> drill -> shine -> u-smash was pretty sex.
Anyways, back to watching
Edit 2: since I'm not on a computer, I'm just gonna keep pausing the vid and write down my thoughts to keep em fresh.
I'm 2 stocks in so far. It looks like you lost your lead because your technical errors started adding up. Also, there was one part where you punished his getup on a platform with b-air at low percent instead of u-air. That one moment could've made a huge difference.
Looks like you need more b-air. He's in the air a lot in general, but I see you trying to either jump over him, or n-air (I think?). He keeps hitting you with n-air or b-air though. Something else you could try though is going underneath him with an empty jump, or just drop through a platform and the u-tilt.
That missed edgeguard at the end of game 1 was pretty costly. The shine-turnaround- b-air that you attempted was a pretty good choice. Just barely too late. The safer option would've been to grab the ledge and either b-air, or punish him for going onstage. Peach's recovery when she's lower kinda sucks. Assuming you don't get hit.
Game 2 was a pretty good start. The only problem was not drilling after you hit that first n-air and he missed that d-smash. You did another n-air and then he CC'd that one too and then punished it.
Anyways, so you took the first stock no problem and then another tech skill error costs you a full stock. Also because you didn't Firefox diagonally for the sweetspot, that made things worse.
The next stock, you did great. Good lasering. Good push and pull. Moving in and out, dealing damage and not getting hit (except for tech skill errors). He then did the worst possible option and tried to camp the left side of the wall. I was thinking about how badly I would've ***** him for that. So anyways, solid edgeguard. It was just really good.
So afterwards, you died to a failed ledge WD. On the next stock, you immediately got hit because you laser'd too close, and then the stock went away pretty quickly. It looks like he knew how you were gonna recover. Watch where your opponent is positioned too. It can help you survive and make better recovery choices (I always do this).
After you spawned on your last stock, the lasering was good. But did you notice how he was double jumping offstage? Also with a turnip I his hand? That may have been a potential shine-spike. The rest of the stock you fought hard. Fought well. But just lost in the end. He did catch you with a couple of n-airs while you were above him.
Game 3: the first thing you hit him with was a full-hop n-air. You are lucky that you didn't get ***** for that. Aside from that, another strong start. Good pressure. Landing a lot of hits. Baiting those dash attacks. But then you got hit by that n-air. The DI was pretty bad.
The next stock was rough. He was getting in some pressure and got you to shield. A combination of technical errors and decent punishes got him that stock without much trouble.
So both of you are on your third stock now and I noticed something very odd. You did a drill -> double-shine and the WD past him. He for some reason dropped his shield and then tried to jab as a punish...
Anyways. It looks like he was hitting a lot of n-airs, but then you took the stock first with that u-smash oos. Pretty good.
You had a good comeback on that last stock. It looked like you refused to drill though. There were a lot of chances where you could've and then done a waveshine combo or something.
A bad start in game 4. In the beginning of your next stock, he was spamming d-smash blindly. I was hoping that you wouldn't b-air or n-air him, but you did eventually and you probably know what happened from there.
As the match went on. Things just got worse and worse. It looks like small levels aren't your thing vs him. Seems like you had a tough time playing close-quarters defense vs him. As much as I hate to say it, I think that letting him take you to FD would've been a better choice for you.
Also, what I mean by close-quarters defense is like spacing up close to your opponent, poking with moves, and using your shield from time to time.
