Slush dont ask for critique and then defend yourself for each instance you did something.
Be open to everything, you arent good yet (even people who have been playing forever should be open to everything).
Game 1:
Firstly, side b is not that good stop getting hit by it (its good but shouldnt hit as often as it does.
:45 airdodging doesnt beat downsmash sorry. Stop momentum cancelling when you arent at kill percents when you are getting juggled, sometimes you want to go further away so that u can not get juggled.
1:33, why would you do that
2:00 why are you pivot grabbing he has been down bing and side bing, pivot grab loses to both, he hasnt gone for dash attack locks like ZSS should, but he doesnt use utilt OOS much, so you should be bairing the crap out of his shield and keeping the pressure on.
2:06 another pivot grab why? Use moves for a purpose, you seem to be throwing out pivot grabs to defend against some dash attack that isnt coming, while the 3 things he is doing are beating you and you arent adapting.
Ok stop going for egg to grab every single time you egg it worked a little bit because he didnt adapt then he did and you kept doing it which is why you lost. You airdodge when you shouldnt, you dont airdodge when hes actually gonna hit you. You didnt bair pressure nearly enough, on a character that hates bair pressure. You egged nicely but again didnt adapt when he adapted. You didnt condition much really, you kinda just did your thing, which is fine, but wont cut it as you play better people.
Your DI is pretty decent so no qualms there
Just so you know if you bair at him he cant side b or take time to down b.
Game 2:
All im gonna say is:
Spamming fsmash doesnt work for killing sorry
Hold shield rather than spotdodge side b imo, easier.
KINZURRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR~
