Less Dsmashes. You used way too many, and if that fox was really trying to punish, you would've gotten messed up. Don't charge smashes if your opponent has a good chance to retaliate. You'll get killed for doing it, or you'll get combo'd out of your ***.
Work on your ECE more. You were pretty inaccurate when you could've added at least like 12% dmg. Watch your spacing when you use Bair. You can get shield grabbed alot more then what your friend really did. If you know the you're getting too close to your opponent after your attack, go for a quick pivot grab.
Last but not least, watch your opponent more carefully. You can see that he was spamming Usmash out of his *** to kill you. You can take advantage of that if you bait the move out. Also, start DIing out of those moves quicker. You're getting too much dmg from small time attacks that shouldn't be that big of a factor.
BTW, this was from watching the first vid. Hope you like the critque.
