http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RoOyIcIVSNc - Wedge (Sonic) vs Afro (DK)
I fixed the URL since the one in the OP was... kind of not the actual video. Either way, let me see if my advice can be of any use.
Before I go on though, I should give you a fair warning...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3A7Ql93RsDQ
So if you want me to relook at this after I get up from my hangover and finish
my weeklies on my Warrior hanging out with Jerry at the arcade tomorrow I will be more than happy to do people a favor and look at this when it's more believable that I'm coherent even though I'm still fairly confident that I can point out some things.
Okay Wedge, so I'm behind on filling out this request but here goes~!
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Biggest thing I've noticed from watching all these matches:
Y U NO TEC CARGO~!?
*Sob.*
I can only hope you were at least holding up when he had you in a cargo-throw. You fact you even died from an '08 gimmick makes me sadface and that's very hard to do when I've had a drink.
As for everything else, you did okay. You had some stupid deaths though I feel, like on that match on PS1 where he Uair'd you. I don't think that should've happened honestly, and I just said "why?" when you Spring'd, which only further limited your landing options. I figured you were trying to avoid it all-together, but that was not the way to go about it.
You also didn't edgehog him one time where he would've died otherwise. I don't know what happened at that moment, I want to say you did a misinput or a miscalculation and you figured by the time you would've tried to fix it it would've been too late, but still.
Try this on for size actually. Next time you play a Donkey Bong, how about implementing more Fairs in your game? Donkey's a big target, his shield is poop, and your platform pressure with Fair is just awesome. Those matches where I would expect you to do just that, you actually Uair, which is pretty bad in terms of platform pressure. Don't get me wrong though, it's good to juggle him when he's already in the air, but every other time... eh~...
Also beware his Donkey Pawnch. He hit you a lot of the times just because you probably weren't expecting it. Whenever he has it fully charged, always be aware of that last getaway option. I will trust you not to let respect turn into fear but at the same time we can't let you get hit by all this unnecessary bullcrap, 'kay? <3
I will say this though. Kudos to actually using Spindash Roll Spinshot. I thoguht I'd never see a legitimate use for it, but you hit him with a Fair out of it. Wonderful!
D'oh, one more thing before I forget! Drop the running USmash thing. It's not gonna work if Donkey shields it, you're just asking him to pound you with the twin hammers of Africa (DSmash) if you do it and it doesn't hit.
*Hic.*
This wine tasted awful! More bitter than the one's I've had before!
Onto the next one!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_qgrP3MddXY - PfoSonic(Sonic) vs Marcbri (Falco)
This match is from a offline tournament.Please critique it.
(at the end of the match I was really nervous ,thats why I took the f-smash )
I know others have already given you insight, but I would like to look at this myself, since it's always a treat to see Sonics from OoC.
This match was interesting to watch. Here it looks like both players are eve-
No screw that, I'd be willing to put money down that you are actually the better player, but your opponent got off to the fact that he plays a better character, and one who is a bad matchup for Sonic. He was fishing so hard for the USmash kill at first, your Spindash Jumps were getting punished OoS with Bairs, hit you with so many lasers. He didn't do that much work I feel, but you just weren't taking the necessary precautions to avoid them so that's why he won.
Oh also, I don't know about other people, but I would tell you not to spotdodge so much against Falco. His moves are so fast by themselves that he would recover relatively as quick as you would from the spotdodge animation whereas if you let him hit your shield you'll have more time to react, and perhaps more time to punish too.
Other than that good job!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B8NLL5OQuvY - InferiorityComplex (Sonic) vs. Sleeh (Falco) 2
Hey Income~!
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*Watches match.*
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Uhm~, remind me again how long you've been playing this game buddy?
I hate to be a jerk, but this is comparable to watching SK92 if he were somehow not all that good of a player...but because he is, he's forced me to think through my actions, approaching methods, so on so forth. This Falco on the other hand... I'd probably style on him if I had the chance, no lie.
But however much your opponent sucks or otherwise doesn't matter. Obviously. So what we have to do here is tell you what you must work on.
As a matter of fact, I have just the suggestions to give you ideas on what to work on for next time!
*Ahem.*
You like to spotdodge a lot. Rolling moreso. Can we get you to stop just for a tiny bit? Please? I promise; especially with Falco, that if you can learn to hold the shield button more (if you can't avoid being in shield all-together (easier said than done ya know)), you'll see a lot more success in your future.
Also this is cute. Fourty-five seconds into the Match, and you Throw an USmash outta nowhere. Wanna tell me why~!(?) He wasn't anywhere near you, and it's not like it would've punished a Phantasm you could've potentially predicted, or even been a good punish at that. so if we can also get you to use fewer attacks at more appropriate times, that would just be SUPER delightful.
Same tihng happens a minute and five seconds where you just FSmash. *Hic.* I hate FSmash, it's so slow, and not worth the commitment, especially not at that percent.
Oh... This is also quite annoying. Dis Falco player is disrespecting your assault almost everytime and whenever he mispaces or an attack or after one attack from you, he spotdodges. He did this a lot, and got away with it almost, if not every time. Gotta study your opponent and PUNISH their habits like the fist of an angry God. I'd know what that'd look like too, because I'm a messed up individual ( ;_; ), but I think you get me point regardless.
Going back onto what I said about appropriate attacks... Two minutes into the video, he whiffs an USmash, and you run.
Tell me why~! That also makes me sadface

. I'm not gonna repost the image because I'd just be wasting space but imagine a sad little rabbit girl here for me 'kay? You should feel bad for making that happen ;_;. As long as now you know better and don't go out of your way to make it happen you shall be forgiven *Hic.*.
... Actually, your second stock loss... You didn't even try to avoid it it seems. I'm curious as to what happened at that moment, like you didn't even try to Airdodge or Fair, you just let him boot you to the heavens.
*Spit.*
Did he just die from a Back-Throw... at that percent... with THAT DI?
Okay... *Dead.*
Meh, either way, anti-climatic ending is anti-climatic.
Keep trying Income! I'm going to give the benefit of doubt and assume that because you don't get many chances to play, and haven't been playing for long at that, you just haven't got the concept of spacing and commitment down. Once you can pick up on those things, I'm almost sure you'll be a force to be reckoned with!
Now if you'll excuse me, I'm about ready to pass out, so good night Cleveland~!
Though I do know that I wanna fight this guy someday! It'd be a nice break from having Kyle like, JV3-stock me errdai all dai. His Falco is too good. ;_; MAH SAWNEEK NEEDS LESS IMPROVEMENT AND LESS SUCK!
