I liked your video Rubyiris, but I think as a player trying to learn from your commentary, it would be more beneficial to hear what your short-term goals are at certain points during the stocks. I felt like too often you were summarizing what happened, and I was just like "Okay, I realized he parried your nair, but that doesn't help me." You could instead say something before it actually happens like "Right now, I want to approach with a nair, but I have to be careful not to telegraph it so Vman does not anticipate it and react with a parry to nair OOS." So essentially I would recommend explaining thoughts prior to it being shown, and then if you wanted to rewind to explain what you SHOULD have done or what COULD have been done to counter it, you could do that. I feel like this would help make the commentary flow more as I felt like I was constantly trying to "catch up" to your thought processes. No doubt this is difficult because Melee is so fast, and I figured that would be one of the hardest parts of commentating. I look forward to watching some of you future videos!
Hopefully Hugs can keep the OP updated with a list of videos that have been casted, at least until we have enough that they are commonplace.