This is the only match I watched (the video quality is unfortunate
) Three comments:
1. You sometimes throw out attacks that have no hope of connecting, but are pretty punishable. I do the same thing and working on being more patient has really helped me improve.
2. Where are the eggs?! I think I only saw 2-3 over both games! Your playstyle is far more close-quarters than mine, which I think works in your favor, but you should at least be attempting to zone/trap people with them.
3. You, just like me, never use Yoshi's neutral-B. Watch some of Raptor's games - it's a great move. It's worth using as a mix-up at minimum.
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A friend of mine thought my approach was novel and wanted me to mention this... To improve, I've been watching some videos posted here and taking note of what people input. Here's some of the data I collected:
Raptor vs. Owsla G1 @ Smash Attack
* Uair: 2
* Nair: 9
* Fair: 16
* Bair: 1
* Dair: 4
* UpB: 19
* DownB: 1
* Utilt: 1
* Ftilt: 0
* Dtilt: 2
* Jab: 11
* Grab: 3
* NeutralB: 11
* SideB: 0
* Usmash: 4
* Fsmash: 2
* Dsmash: 1
* DashA: 0
* Roll: 1
Raptor vs. Owsla G2 @ Smash Attack
* Uair: 6
* Nair: 10
* Fair: 14
* Bair: 1
* Dair: 6
* UpB: 29
* DownB: 4
* Utilt: 2
* Ftilt: 0
* Dtilt: 3
* Jab: 11
* Grab: 6
* NeutralB: 17
* SideB: 1
* Usmash: 9
* Fsmash: 0
* Dsmash: 0
* DashA: 2
* Roll: 1
Raptor vs. Mike Kirby G1 @ Smash Attack
* Uair: 4
* Nair: 10
* Fair: 23
* Bair: 2
* Dair: 9
* UpB: 35
* DownB: 2
* Utilt: 5
* Ftilt: 0
* Dtilt: 11
* Jab: 18
* Grab: 4
* NeutralB: 25
* SideB: 0
* Usmash: 3
* Fsmash: 0
* Dsmash: 0
* DashA: 4
* Roll: 3
Raptor vs. Mike Kirby G2 @ Smash Attack
* Uair: 3
* Nair: 13
* Fair: 26
* Bair: 3
* Dair: 9
* UpB: 32
* DownB: 2
* Utilt: 0
* Ftilt: 0
* Dtilt: 10
* Jab: 13
* Grab: 9
* NeutralB: 22
* SideB: 2
* Usmash: 9
* Fsmash: 0
* Dsmash: 0
* DashA: 2
* Roll: 3
YelloRello vs. Akiro G2 @ Smash 4 Worldwide
* Uair: 12
* Nair: 23
* Fair: 4
* Bair: 4
* Dair: 4
* UpB: 51
* DownB: 3
* Utilt: 7
* Ftilt: 2
* Dtilt: 17
* Jab: 5
* Grab: 4
* NeutralB: 8
* SideB: 1
* Usmash: 11
* Fsmash: 1
* Dsmash: 2
* DashA: 5
* Roll: 0
Flow-Yo vs. Fye G1 @ STL BarWarz
* Uair: 9
* Nair: 12
* Fair: 48
* Bair: 9
* Dair: 4
* UpB: 40
* DownB: 4
* Utilt: 6
* Ftilt: 5
* Dtilt: 12
* Jab: 13
* Grab: 9
* NeutralB: 10
* SideB: 3
* Usmash: 5
* Fsmash: 2
* Dsmash: 1
* DashA: 2
* Roll: 0
It's kinda interesting to look at. YelloRello looks like he spams eggs WAY too much. Flow-Yo does the same in addition to spamming Fair. Raptor NEVER uses Ftilt for some reason and almost never uses Fsmash or Dsmash (I understand the lag on Fsmash, but why no Dsmash?). He also uses far more egg lays than anyone I've watched (many of them reversed).
The observation that probably helped me the most, though, was seeing how often people roll (8 rolls in 6 games!) or use dash attacks (only 12 total!). The video I posted above is after my having made these observations. If you watch any of my earlier stuff (same channel), you'll see just how bad I was with these. It makes sense, too - rolling and dashing take away options and neither of them will get you kills.
Thoughts?