[FBC] Papa Mink
Smash Legend
Blissard, i'd love to critique them. Just post them in here.
for kaptain:
4:05 - You need to work on your dair approach. Remember to foxtrot in the direction you want your legs to face.
4:19 - good boost grab
4:26 - don't hold your shield if you don't have to, remember you're puff and he's mario. He cant catch you if you jump.
4:39 - you spammed bair (good retreats btw) and then airdodged when bair would have hit : c
5:05 - please stop rolling. I hope you got out of that habit, our roll is so bad
5:19 - VERY nice usmash. A few seconds before this however, you watched as mario airdodged offstage. This was your moment to grab the edge, nair or bair.
5:24 - you rolled. bad sign.
5:25 - you have 103% and stock lead.. and you're approaching... bad sign.
5:26 - you died. called it.
5:30-6:13 - stop rolling. Good rollut attempt though. you should have aimed above your opponent, knowing that last time you used rollout they jumped away from it as opposed to shielding it. Remember to use that to your advantage.
6:13 - GOOD DI.
6:37 - you should have daired like a *****. Mario's ground game > our ground game. on a stage like FD, you need to be able to stop him when he's offstage.
6:50 - RETREAT YOUR AERIALS. don't fastfall fair on his shield
7:01 - please please please please. Kill him when he's offstage. You n eed to work on that. Even edgeguarding him . Practice makes perfect.
death - airdodged to the ground infront of mario. It happens :-\
Will critique the 2nd one later.
for kaptain:
4:05 - You need to work on your dair approach. Remember to foxtrot in the direction you want your legs to face.
4:19 - good boost grab
4:26 - don't hold your shield if you don't have to, remember you're puff and he's mario. He cant catch you if you jump.
4:39 - you spammed bair (good retreats btw) and then airdodged when bair would have hit : c
5:05 - please stop rolling. I hope you got out of that habit, our roll is so bad
5:19 - VERY nice usmash. A few seconds before this however, you watched as mario airdodged offstage. This was your moment to grab the edge, nair or bair.
5:24 - you rolled. bad sign.
5:25 - you have 103% and stock lead.. and you're approaching... bad sign.
5:26 - you died. called it.
5:30-6:13 - stop rolling. Good rollut attempt though. you should have aimed above your opponent, knowing that last time you used rollout they jumped away from it as opposed to shielding it. Remember to use that to your advantage.
6:13 - GOOD DI.
6:37 - you should have daired like a *****. Mario's ground game > our ground game. on a stage like FD, you need to be able to stop him when he's offstage.
6:50 - RETREAT YOUR AERIALS. don't fastfall fair on his shield
7:01 - please please please please. Kill him when he's offstage. You n eed to work on that. Even edgeguarding him . Practice makes perfect.
death - airdodged to the ground infront of mario. It happens :-\
Will critique the 2nd one later.