http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TGWBOTS8JIc
This was maybe 4-5 months ago. This match is just funny.
If I posted this in the wrong thread I apologize. <_>
Crap quality btw.
No offense or anything, but there really isn't too much to critique in that match; there was some stuff in the first minute or so, but then after that it sort of fell apart with the QD stagespike. Also, the match was over Wi-fi; it's not that big of a deal if you can't play any matches otherwise, but it's preferable to get matches up that are from offline play. Post a different and more complete video so that you'll get more useful feedback
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Might as well bump this old thread, lol.
Unfortunately, all my other matches vs him weren't able to be uploaded (non-hacked wii for the second set, someone's SD card got corrupted for all the other matches).
I wanted to get some of the matches where I lost (got timed out on green greens lol) but here's something I guess. I can see mistakes a lot easier through other people's eyes than my own.
VS MK at brinstar
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wHo7Ixro6dA&feature=related
VS MK at battlefield
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f3rDY0b_0jY&feature=related
Brinstar
0:20 - It's not too big of a deal, but I would recommend being more careful about using aerials on the little orb things that bring the platforms together; it might seem like a good idea because hitlag causes you to be stuck in your attack animation, but in the case of an aerial like NAir, the prolonged hitbox doesn't protect you at all. Maybe using UTilt at that location is safer?
0:30 - Powershield -> turnaround BAir was incredibly sexy.
0:43 - Aether is too easy to see coming and is easily punished if it misses, unlike Shuttle Loop; you can't really abuse it like other up+Bs, so going for the edge would've been a better move.
2:06 - Shuttle Loop is a serious pain on this stage (and in this match-up in general); I haven't actually tried this out before offline, but you may want to consider using Aether to counter it, whether it be out-of-shield (in addition to turnaound BAir) or just whenever he's gliding above you and you think he's going to drop down with a glide attack.
Wow... I didn't say much at all. As a general overview, you got hit a lot by up+Bs from under the stage and Tornado when he used it as a recovery method. To edgeguard against the up+B from that angle, I would try waiting him out from the upper platform, then drop down with an airdodge when he gets close to the ground. If he up+Bs or attacks, then the airdodge will protect you and you'll (hopefully) be able to counterattack. If he airdodged, then hopefully you'll be able to attack him first when he lands.
As for the Tornado, retreating USmash has worked well for me both online and offline against spammers; you may want to try that out and see if it works for you. Overall though, you played very solidly; I couldn't find anything big to pick on. Great job with the set. Out of curiosity, who counterpicked that stage?