All right, I'll give it a shot.
I don't have any real complaints about the way you played, though, as you definitely seemed to know what you were doing, for the most part. You followed up well with some of Kirby's follow-ups and placed some well-spaced bairs there. I would probably only advise you to work some more on your grounded/aerial strings a bit, like whenever you get in an utilt, try and follow up with another bair or an uair, or to maybe even to mix things up more, chase to wherever you feel your opponent will land and shield to grab/reverse grab or whatever you think you could get in at that moment for a finishing touch. Also, you probably could've use some more ftilting in there as well. I noticed a lot of perfect opportunities for you to have gotten in with it, spaced and all, but I don't recall you using it once (but this is just a minor criticism; you probably do use it, but I'm just sayin' I didn't see it that match). Well done overall, though.