Im a scrub, plz criticize hard!
vs
(I was playing pretty slow and unsafe here)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QeStTCaq6vI
vs
(Probably one of my better matches, but lots of mistakes were still made)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EFtJLC0ANRU
Edit: My bad! Didn't know the videos were private. They should be good now.
I'm not sure about critiquing the first video since you said you played pretty bad and I'm sure you can spot where you could have improved~
Anyway,
Gohan, your Kirby is really great! I'm not sure about how much I can tell you to improve on. Any mistakes that you did, as far as I can tell, were wifi related. At this point, all I can say is try not to commit to a hard punish too much unless you have prerequisite knowledge of a habit (ie. trying to smash attack an air-dodge landing). From here it's all about sharpening your decision making skills. Ummm... Pretty much it just seems you just need more experience to also sharpen your match-up knowledge.
Vs Zero Suit, try not to roll in. There's only a small niche that rolling in has vs Zero Suit. That is pretty much only when she side-B's AND when you can space it so you roll behind her. Crouching is beautiful vs Zero Suit because you can duck dash attack, jab and her grab. Which in turn, can force her to start doing side-b/down smash. Also, armor pieces... Everyone will tell you to just toss 'em out. I'll say it, too. Even though I consider myself very good with items. Just toss em out... (>.<) When getting hit by strings at low percents just try to SDI up and away to minimize damage at this point. Try to stay grounded often because ZSS beats us in the air. Space yourself away from her aerials and burst range of her second jumps.
Keep it up man, DAS is a good wifi player and Zero Suit is a tough match-up~
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AHWPrJ8zaZ8
I need some Tips.
(and yeah its Wifi. :< )
Damn button-mashing, shuttle-looping, down smashing wifi Meta Knights getting wins without even a lick of thought process. >_>
Gaah, lemme at 'im!
Ah-hem, anyway, hah, sorry! Rant aside, I saw that you did a lot of unnecessary smash attacks where a grab or tilt would have been more successful--especially at low percents. Also, less B moves (Hammer/Stone/Final Cutter) and more A moves (b-air/tilts). Kirby's special moves have slow start up and/or lot's of cool down. They are mostly used for punishing mistakes or reads. Kirby's tilts and aerials are fast and quick which is a safer way to get rack up damage. The only aerial I would say to be careful of utilizing is d-air because of it's big start up. Anyway, try to implement this to your play for safer outcomes.
Congrats on making it to winners semis~
Vs DFat1 
