Oh boy, what a load...
Let me do this in parts, as in what I saw in each specific video.
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b9sYWaeQl5U&t=00m10s Had he not went for an USmash, that Dair would've been punished. In the case that Marth is waiting for you down below in a neutral position... yeah, this isn't the first thing you want to do in a match.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b9sYWaeQl5U&t=00m42s Would've been a nice ledgehog opprtunity. Not sure why you just ran to the other side.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b9sYWaeQl5U&t=00m50s I hope you simply messed up a shieldgrab. There was nothing he could do from that position.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b9sYWaeQl5U&t=01m15s Why did you run to where he could hit you? You shouldn't run around like a chicken without it's head, try to outlast their invincibility.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b9sYWaeQl5U&t=01m20s Trying to ASC back on stage without your second jump against Marth was asking for that.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b9sYWaeQl5U&t=01m40s Yes, because FSmashing when it isn't even going to kill at the very edge of the stage is worth it... Especially when it whiffs (it usually will). /sarcasm.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b9sYWaeQl5U&t=01m45s Okay, I'll let this one slide. You may have been expecting a ledgeroll... too bad it's Marth, against Sonic.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b9sYWaeQl5U&t=02m20s Another shieldgrab opportunity gone just like that...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b9sYWaeQl5U&t=02m30s Do I need to stay it again?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b9sYWaeQl5U&t=02m35s Aww, perhaps just a brainfart.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b9sYWaeQl5U&t=02m40s And the one time something like FTilt OoS might've worked. Do you perhaps have spacing issues as well? I guess I'll see... maybe.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b9sYWaeQl5U&t=03m03s What... happened... here...~? Everything that could've went wrong did. ;_;
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b9sYWaeQl5U&t=03m12s Once again, Marth was just waiting for that one.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b9sYWaeQl5U&t=03m40s Augh, Jab is horrible for boxing. It makes a great GTFO move, and that's it.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b9sYWaeQl5U&t=04m10s Is it becoming apparent by now?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b9sYWaeQl5U&t=04m15s I suppose not...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b9sYWaeQl5U&t=04m25s okay this is getting ridiculous. I don't think Nike would've expected you to continue with your ASC on his shield. The least that would've happened was justa Dolphin Slash If that was the case, but since it wasn't you could've pokes his shield or left it really low. Instead you go for the same tried and tested follow-ups, which up until now has had mixed results for you.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b9sYWaeQl5U&t=04m30s Yes, and had he just been a bit further away this would've been the moneymaker...[/collapse]
This is taking me an awful while. If I didn't have to eat...
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EjwcX_3HxLI&t=00m09s WTF FSmash OoS?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EjwcX_3HxLI&t=00m25s That really wasn't suppose to work... Conditioning I guess...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EjwcX_3HxLI&t=00m52s Orz... meh, that reminds me, I need to work on my DDPing. At least that could've been a Dash Attack, but a grab would've definitely been nice too... I also like how you're just charging FSmash waiting for him to fall on it. I would think Nike's better than that. thankfully he is.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EjwcX_3HxLI&t=01m18s Oh about this, just grab after the third variant. Tends to work a lot of the times, if not all the time. I can't say for sure but that's what everybody else seems to be on.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EjwcX_3HxLI&t=01m48s Really, it isn't doing you any favors...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EjwcX_3HxLI&t=01m53s gduigduigbuipd All those platform pressure/techroll punish opportunities... ;_;
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EjwcX_3HxLI&t=02m14s No I'm serious. Not doing you any favors at all.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EjwcX_3HxLI&t=02m30s. *Sigh.*
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EjwcX_3HxLI&t=02m42s And there we have it. I should probably make this into a drinking game too, but I'd not only probably die of alcohol poisoning but I have Pre-Calculus after this.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EjwcX_3HxLI&t=02m56s Oh I'm sorry, we weren't finished?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EjwcX_3HxLI&t=03m10s Ah here we go. For once I'll give you some actual advice. That ledgehop Fair was too slow to punish him properly. Go for a ledgedrop DJFair. It's faster and in the case that still doesn't hit, you can either try to land to get in your shield, or Spring-Jump. You could even see some success doing a retreating Fair and going for the ledge, but again these are options. None of them are 100% foolproof. I'll leave that to you to find the right one at the right moment.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EjwcX_3HxLI&t=03m37s Ah okay, I'll give you this much. Had you just waited a tiny bit instead of getting desperate like you have been, that would've been a nice read.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EjwcX_3HxLI&t=04m07s I'm guessing my last comment was just the commercial break. Season finale on the next episode![/collapse]
Halfway done with brunch...
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oSMq5Y8k4MU&t=01m40s I'm surprised it took me this long to find something. Yeah by now you already lost a stock and whatnot, but I guess it's a ompliment that even I couldn't have found anything better to do. But that's why I suck. Anyway, as for this particular moment, eh~... Maybe if it wasn't so far away from the edge this could've worked, I dunno.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oSMq5Y8k4MU&t=02m00s And that's why I'll never commit myself to spotdodging against Marth. That's not even the worst that could happen.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oSMq5Y8k4MU0&t=2m49s There you go! Yes~! AUGH~! Feelsgoodman.jpg. *Writes notes.*
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oSMq5Y8k4MU&t=04m49s A shieldgrab isn't punishing a FSmash, lol.[/collapse]
Alright yeah, that last stock was just a combination of bad guesses, terrible position, and yeah. Nothing I can say about that except just perhaps just being aware of any and every option given to you at every single moment. An example would be when you tried to shieldgrab but you were facing the wrong way. How you ended up that I don't know and I'm too lazy to look back, but I suppose that can be your homework assignment. Just as it will be mine whenever I play.
I won't bother commenting on the first match of the next set. it's moreorless the same thing, except that the other player couldn't take advantage of the same habits as often, and not nearly with the same dominating presence.
I know that for whatever silly reason though, you didn't edgehog his last stock. Instead you... opted for a FSmash edgeguard...
Oh I will also say this.
Second match, first stock... you just got cumhmed on and you were probably better off not landing next to Meta Knight, or at least not airdodging into him... Lol, cumhm.
And wow, you just got cumhmed on again that second stock. What are you doing trying to shieldgrab a DSmash without some running momentum? You just can't get enough can you?
... Sexual jokes and video references aside...
Y U NO PUMMEL~!?
This is the next set BTW, just in case hat wasn't obvious.
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him her! FFFFFFF-
... Okay, I said I'd cut the crude humor a while ago, so let's get down to business. There's really no reason not to pummel unless he tends to break out of grabs like inhumanly quickly.
Oh my... I'm gonna remember that myself, for ZSS no Ground-to-air follow-up attempts. That first stock was painful all the way from over here...
... And everything after that was just as pitiful. You had a very good lead up until that point, then you just fell apart. You seem to have a problem of... not running into things. Is it matchup inexperience or is this what I said earlier about not being aware of your spacing? I guess in this case, it also helps to know the opponents attack angles too... So how about it, learn to approach with shield or ASC moar?
... >MFW you techchase with FSmash at 51%.
... Okay, you keep shielding, then rolling back... do you plan on attacking anytime soon? Like I said, learn your options; this includes offensive.
Yeah I'm sorry, I'm not picking moments. At this point, the things are universal I've already mentioned, now I'm just getting into specifics such as with MUs or really bad mess-ups.
I guess it's okay that you won, but still~...
... And that first stock of the snext set... Just do yourself a favor and stop Dairing, ugh.
Other than that, eh, why do you keep going for Popo? I'm not even bothered by the failed displacements, that's probably from MU inexperience or fear, but do you really need to go for the player-controlled IC?
Next set, and you couldn't just grab him? Why does it always have to be FSmash? IDC if he still died for some unknown reason, that shouldn't have happened actually.
And again... dodged a bullet with that C4 though.
Okay this is getting ridiculous. also I'm falling asleep here so I need to have some fun with this.
Here's what you're going to do:
You're gonna take it easy, you're gonna stop approaching like it's an obligation (it's not), you're going to stop getting blown up, you're gonna stop running into things and condition your opponent so that you can stop running into thins an punish more, you're gonna stop FSmashing so much, and... you're gonna finish this YukkurReimuburger. If not I want what's left.
Are we clear?
Good.
Next match, let's see if anything new happens.
Holy @#$% this @#$% is seven minutes long, GDI.
Okay, so you punish a laggy Dair with... a SDR... Awesome... How about a running grab, or even a DA? That would've hit at least, not something that takes 30+ frames to get rolling, lol.
Okay, so I'm three minutes in, he misses the mortar slide and you... run to the other side... again, that's awesome.
... Why? If he didn't bother to detonate the C4, I imagine that could've gone worse
And that second stock... Seriously what happened? I'm not even
trying to come off as a jerk, did your shield button just not work?
Once again 4 minutes fifty-five seconds he misses a mortar slide and you let the punish opportunity go~... *Sigh.*
... and I'm not surprised you lost the second match like that. alright~, I think we're just about done he-
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Yeah I'm not even gonna bother. Get a % lead, camp like a b****, win.
If you lost, then I can't help you. Learn the character, that's really all there is to the ditto. Maybe you also got outplayed if you two are of equal skill level, but then that just goes back to learning your options with Sonic and getting better.
