Hey Zack, Im not exactly a regular of the Sonic Boards so dont know if you wanna listen to my advice but what the hell...
First off dont use Homing Attack as an offensive approach unless your certain its gonna hit and its humliating when you miss... you see that hilariously big landing lag at 0:19? (and 1:59, 2:13, 2:51, 3:00, 3:49) That was just free damage % for Snake, luckily enough for you he just rolled away >.> but at 1:22 he caught on and grabbed you. 1:44.. was just... unbearable
I thought that would've put you off using it but you still used HA as if it was from SA1 or SA2.
0:22 = missed grab oppurtunity and why are you approaching by rolling towards Snake and spotdodging? He was just shielding there. You could've ran instead of rolling again at 2:56
I know SpinDashing is a lovely fast approach but your spinning right into grenades (2:22, 2:41, 3:41, 3:59, 4:24) run towards him instead.
Less use of Homing Attack,
Roll less; Run more
Grab more, this Snake was really shield happy. He could've been grabbed multiple times.
Dont Spindash from the other side of the stage (2:38, 3:41)
The ending was hilarious though.