You did pretty good, but I did miss a lot of grab opportunities, like there was a part where you played on Battlefield and tried to side step his jabs; why not grab? Remember to down throw, regrab, than upthrow to dsmash. That usually knocks up their quickly and sends Falco/Fox up in the air, which enables you to fair, bair, upair, or whatever you feel like doing. Also whenever you block all of Falco's shine combos, and you feel like you want to dair. DON'T! Instead Oos bair to because most likely they'll follow it up with an up-tilt which can put you in a really nasty situation.
Additionally, if you're fighting a really campy Falco you can lure him my holding your shield and dair OoS, and then follow it up with grab to downthrow to tech chase. You did extremely well, and you're mad good at power shielding lasers. haha It feels weird as fvck giving advice to the guy that you look up to as a Ganon main, but it's all good, just remember that grabs are your best friend in the spacies matchup. Good luck out there Tommy.