A. I do agree, people are human so they do make mistakes. Telling him to not bite on a spot dodge or a fake or something is the same as telling him not to drop his cgs. If we looked into specific gameplay errors, we could just extrapolate it to "every time you got hit, you shouldn't have and that's bad."
B. Telling him to change how he approaches the match up would ultimately be a disservice to him. Does he need refining? Debatably so does everyone. But that isn't to say at a core I liked what I saw.
C. What I would do may or may not be helpful. I'm pretty set in my style of play, and if I told him little things that I would do that fit "my style" more than his, it might be a detriment to his game rather than a benefit.
So essentially what you're telling me to tell him to fix is the part where I thought was winning the match for him. Which would be dumb. If it works don't fix it. As opposed to what I said, which is telling him what I saw as the ONLY reason he lost.
you honestly cant see play errors, wrong move choice selections, or even different or alternate options he could have used in many situations?
just from watching the video once you i immediately noticed
A. he rarely powershields nado, which allows me to poke him multiple times much easier
B. a lot of the reason he misses powershields is because he just auto pilot dashes back and forth, walking in this matchup in some intervals is extremely important because once you dash your options are obviously limited.
C. he doesnt respond to glide attack. the move clanks with everything, so even at the end w/ sopo he couldve naired instead of just taking a hit (note how he also got hit right at the start)
D. at 1:04 he pushed himself to the ledge when i tornadod, i backed off because i mispaced the nado for an auto cancel, however he buffered the roll before the nado even came out. its a bad habit because if i nado there he is FORCED onto the ledge, and there he has crap options
E. 2:31 charging fsmash is cool with a read but i was SOOOO far away that it was easy to react to. your response to it was to side b? either with sopo thats a poor option, and if you wanted both it was kinda obvious you where desynced
F. at 3:45 you missed a grab. and instead opted to go for side b? even if you wanted to punish me for going on the platform uair is better, because if i mixed up (which i did) you couldve reacted and grabbed me anyway
G. at 3:49 you where to slow at dropping shield. the second you see me rise w/ up be drop it and look at where im going, i cant instantly hit you from where i am w/out gliding like an idiot into you
this is watching it ONCE after i just woke up before i go out with friends. if youre incapable of noticing gameplay errors like this, then why are you bothering to comment? its not a detriment to his gameplay if he takes insight from how someone else plays. he doesnt HAVE to take what you say and do it, but looking at things from another perspective is good, which is why most people post their vids.
everything else you said in 1-3 was pretty much bull**** like youre afraid to give your own opion, and everythings debatable. obviously everythings debatable, so is your existence, opinion and your intelligence, BUT if youre going to comment anyway, you might as well give something more than what you did. you should learn to be assertive with your ideas, and if you can give solid input, then it would help the community improve.
(and even better when i call you out on it stop making crap responses and actually look at the match you are doing him a disservice)
obviously if he lost a match there are errors. its not like he ONLY dropped grabs for 4 minutes.
anyway, my 2 cents on what you could improve on, hope it helps
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