Time for some JesiahTEG patented strats.
VIDEO 2
0:07- You were swinging at nothing. Don't do that, you could have pressured with an aerial instead.
0:10- Started the Bair combo, nice, but then got interrupted by a nair. Nothing you could have done there really.
0:14- She pulled a turnip out. She's going to glide toss. We both know this. You should have avoided it.
0:18- Heh, got the Dair spike off at a low percent. Good reflexes, nice and precise. Way to abuse the Dair.
0:38- You attacked his shield directly. Keep your spacing, and be careful not to do that.
0:50- Your spacing was poor for your Fsmash, and you got Dsmashed because of it. I don't know why you Fsmashed, but if you're going to, make sure to have good spacing when you do it. Get out of range of punish.
0:53- Peach had her shield up, and you Dsmashed. Next time, wait for your opponent to spot dodge or roll, and then Dsmash. Like I stated before, don't hit your opponent's shield.
0:57- Stage spiked yourself with your bomb. You shouldn't have died there, but you lived till like 140 though so it's all good.
1:08- Personally I'm not a fan of the bomb drop to Dair. I wouldn't use it unless I know it's going to hit.
1:14- You started a Bair combo, but ended it by pulling out a bomb? You should have kept going.
1:16- Got a few Bairs in, next time you end your combo, end it with a reverse Nair. It has more knockback and will deal more damage due to attack decay on the Bairs.
1:19- Your off the stage game is really good, and you know how to abuse Toon Link's great manuevarability. Props.
1:44- Peach is all up in your face, smacking you around. Regain your spacing by grabbing, jab combo, or just rolling.
1:55- Ah, a little too overzealous. You were ahead by a stock, no need to play risky like that. Only go for that kind of stuff if you need it, or are sure you will hit.
2:35- You knocked her off the platform, and she didn't tech. Capitalize on this, you could have won with an Fsmash right here.
You have a good Toon Link. Your flashiness sometimes is unnecessary. If I were you, I'd work on capitalizing on your opponent's mistakes more, and a bit less unnecessary things. Good Toon Link though.