Ok PantyRaider here is some critique on the Marth vid, I only watched that one because I don't understand Peach I just know Uair owns her and I find her easy but idk what I'm doing. And Doubles is ********.
Techchasing was pretty decent. I like how you keep inside tipper range so you don't get hit sometimes, but you need to use UpB OoS as an escape technique when pressured, such as at 0:19. When you make a mistake or something you seem to go for panicky grabs which I don't advise, with a grab as terribly, terribly bad as Game and Watches you need to be thinking a bit beforehand to get one.
How you got the first KO was pretty legit. The Marth reacted badly sure, but that was quite good on your part anyway. Noice!
DUDE 1:12 to 1:14 was amaysun, idk if you meant it or not, but it was great either way.
When you lost your first stock was strange. You should of seen that Counter/DownB coming lol... then when u were off stage you used Uair, means you thought he was gonna Dair you? I dont think Uair is a good idea anyway, since u just wanna survive. Meh, not much to say there...
Stock 2 was bad you just used a bunch of random attacks that would have only worked if he did a CERTAIN thing when he had heaps of options, you should go a bit more defensive with your approaches, whilst still trying to pressure. Be more careful.
So you keep doing random badly thought out moves til 1:47. Do you know what RAR is? Reverse Aerial Rush Bair. WHERE IS IT?
I know it's marth but you still need more Bair, your use of Fair was getting too easy to punish. You need to time things better and move faster too btw, use fastfall more, use it efficiently, try more dashing, imo anyway that would help.
At 1:48 you use Fair when he's approaching from above. You need to understand Fair only works when the opponent is low on options or you have a REAL good read. It's a slow move that's quite punishable on landing or even if it hits a sheild. It's not a bad move, It's great. But it's no crutch. you are trying to use it far too much, ruining some nice situations; Nair would have been ideal here.
1:58 - should have UpB OoS, or even used Nair OoS. The latter may not have worked idk the frame data on marths jab.
2:00 - You roll'd, I lol'd
You didn't deserve the second KO. I feel your opponent has bad control over his character; Your spacing was much better then his, but worse choices of move and you are a bit slower. He moved fast which was good. Charged Usmash is good, but that situation was so obvious, it should only work when the opponent is pressured. Marth had lots of freedom there, really shouldnt have gotten hit.
When you were on the edge and he grabbed the edge, you can pressure him off with Nair, then UpB, instead of just UpBing onto the stage which is dangerous. Nice job with the string at 2:35, but at 2:40 you should have buffered UpB out of Nair instead of Dsmash. A bit too greedy I guess.
Your opponent just went stupidly aggressive after he got that second kill, and thats when your antics started to work (note that if he was a patient and better player, thats when your Fairs etc. start to lose out). He got so madly pressured by the bacon, which was funny because Marth can dolphin slash thems sausages. He tried to grab you when he was too far (pan would have hit him anyway) derp. Then a bacon hit him. Then you went to 9 and I think he tried to grab you again.
It was pretty good on your part though, most people play like that in those situations so you abused that well at the end, just note that on better players you'll need to tighten up your gameplay, space better and move faster and more efficiently, make better choices of moves, more Fair and less Bair and getting out of bad situations better by being less panicy (Quick! hold L! Don't let go!) and using more UpB OoS too.
Sorry my "critiques" are normally just like sub-par match reviews with snippets of tips located somewhere inside. I'm so sorry, but I hope it helps
Arisen im gonna watch your match vs Pika, if I pick anything up I'll tell you but probs wont critique cos its wifi and that stuff dont make sense, You arent even playing with stock so I dont understand the flow of the match.
