Hello all. I have a couple of mario match videos and I was hoping to get some input. (pat on the back, tear it up, whatever you want)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I32IT8lgeB4
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CYdR9iRJj5c
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NhNErYIKQ9w
The quality is not the best, but it is not terrible.
Not even three minutes into the first video, and already there are very noticable problems.
You spam smash attacks way too much. There are safer, and more efficient methods of getting damage. Try to use more Tilts/Jabs/Grabs into your game to replace that habit.
You roll too much. Add that your movement is very "sto-and-go" like, and it's just not that "artistic" to put it at the least. It will help if you can cut down on the rolling, andt he foxtrotting; though granted you may just be messing up Dash-Dance Pivots and those are very difficult, even I have trouble being consistent with them. For now, just get around using Sonic's normal speed, and screechstop if you must.
Stop using so mucjh Spring -> Dair. You lost your first stock because your opponent
finally readt hat correctly. You may get away with it against some people, but very quickly things can turn ugly against others. Please also consider cutting down on Homing Attack...
A LOT! That's why you lost your 2nd stock, and it makes me really sadface.

You don't like me when I am sadface

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You ought to start pummeling more. If you're not familiar with that term, when you grab your opponent with Sonic, you knee them for 3%. Sonic's pummel DPS (Damage Per Second, MMORPG term) is top 5 in this game. It's a lot, and even if it doesn't seem like it, the damage lost adds up, and why give yourself a harder time, right? Im' not even going to cover other reasons why pummeling is so great, there's too many of them to go over in such a short amount of time.
Are you new to using Sonic? Seems like it. If you are, welcome aboard! I hope my advice helps.
Anyway, we're not done, we still have the 2nd and 3rd video, hehe. Let's just see if anything new comes up, I won't have you read the same thing again.
Nothing different from what I see. I should take this time to ask though, do you know what iSDR is? You're playing on YI, so this ought to help you:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GbTdOoSz7Vc
Stop D-Throwing so much.
http://www.smashboards.com/showthread.php?t=259275
3rd video... Hmm...
You should learn to edgehog. I don't know why I mentioned this sooner, but it helps a lot to know.
That's it I believe. Let me know.
They will most likely be uploaded to this channel...here is one of your team matches that I found while looking through my subs.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gSUlTUkbEmk
X and Commander Beef vs DSF and Tyrant
Thanks Malcolm.
Thanks Infzy. Also for critiquing Tails. I already spoke to him on AIM, but anymore criticism is appreciated.