Round 26 Results! Great to see a good turnout this time around.
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--- - Dark Dunsparce
Firus: I didn’t really realize just how significant a transformation this sprite was until I looked at Dunsparce side-by-side with your retype. The eye change in particular does a lot for the sprite, and the wings, teeth, and tail change all really get across the dark retype. The tail is a bit awkwardly bent, though. Both sides of the tail ought to bend with each other, or it ends up looking a bit awkward. Shading is also something the sprite could use more of. You did an excellent job shading the eyelids, but the wings and even the teeth (although to a lesser extent due to their small size) are a bit flat, as well as the torso of the body. If you could just add that shading and fix the awkward angle of the tail, this sprite would be excellent.
Neon Ness: A really thorough retype, I like what you've done with the colors and the small details like the eyes and teeth. The wings are a nice change but the execution falls a little short. They look out of place because there's no shading on them, and they're surrounded on all sides by a noticeable black outline. The left one seems crooked as if it's placed a bit higher than the other. The tail suffers from similar issues in that it has no real shading, and the outline makes it stand out as opposed to the softer outline on the bottom of the head. The red gem on the tail isn't quite a perfect circle and looks rough around the edges, and I think it would have looked better to use the same red as the markings on the body. The main issue with this sprite is consistency, but aside from that it is really good work.
Firus: 8/10
Neon Ness: 7/10
FINAL: 7.5/10
yani - Stansir
Firus: I think you had an interesting concept with this sprite, but it has trouble standing as a retype. Because I recognize the horns as being Pinsir’s talons, I can assume this is supposed to be a bug retype, but due to the appearance of Pinsir’s horns, you might be able to make an argument for steel. I do like the idea of turning the deer horns into bug pincers, though. If you just do some more minor changes – think of what features bugs tend to have and then apply them to the sprite – that’s what’ll really bring your sprites to the next level.
Neon Ness: A decent start, it just needs to be pushed further, and I think there should be more specific details about what type it's supposed to represent. Technically spiked horns could go on a Normal type, so it might be helpful to think about what type you want to go for instead of simply taking parts from another Pokemon. If you were going for Bug, you could have changed the antlers to antennae, or given Stantler compound eyes, or made the legs thinner like an insect's. From a technical standpoint not much was changed, and the transition between the antlers and the horns should be less obvious. Try to remember to keep a consistent outline and shading when splicing different parts together.
Firus: 3/10
Neon Ness: 4/10
FINAL: 3.5/10
Varist - Zapgoose
Firus: This was a good type correlation you spotted. The zigzag-type design of Zangoose definitely lends itself towards the electric type, and you expanded on that with some great, subtle changes. You added a more spiky element to the ears, the arms, the zigzag on his chest, his shoulders, and particularly with his tail. I like the blue, spark-y claws and the sparks on the edge of his shoulders, too. The only issue I have with this, in fact, is the yellow colors that you used. The bright yellow on top of the white is hard to look at. It’s hard to get a yellow color that isn’t too bright, of course, but I’d recommend either trying to darken the yellow a bit, darkening the overall body a bit, or perhaps a bit of both. But aside from that, excellent job.
Neon Ness: This is really clever. I like how you've taken the jagged parts of Zangoose's design and turned them up to eleven. I especially like the glowing blue wire protrusions on the shoulders, it has a very nice color scheme overall. No complaints about the technique, this is a very polished sprite with a solid concept.
Firus: 9/10
Neon Ness: 9/10
FINAL: 9/10
Kantrip - Vamplax
Firus: You have a good start here, but aesthetically, the sprite is lacking in a few places. For one, the eyes, while a good touch, would likely be more effective if it were the pupils that are red instead of the whites, since that’s generally the “evil” look. The wings are a good touch for the vamp look, but the shading on the lining seems to be reversed, which makes for a very bizarre effect. The outline should be darker than the color on the inside. Other than that, I don’t have any complaints – I think the removal of the feet, while subtle, lends itself to that dark idea – but I wish you’d done a bit more to get the dark aspect across than just eyes, teeth, and wings. I can tell that it’s trying to be dark, but it doesn’t really have the intimidating factor dark types generally have.
Neon Ness: The batwings are a very nice addition for this retype, but the light outline looks out of place in the style most Pokemon sprites are drawn in. Maybe instead of having pure black on the inner parts of the wings you could have used a darker gray, and saved black for the outermost outline. Besides the outline issue the shading of the wings is very good outside of a few stray white pixels here and there. No complaints about the recolor of the torso--although the fur around the feet still looks too even and clean for a Dark type. Making it more jagged/less even might have complimented the overall look more. The red eyes are a very nice touch; my only complaint about the teeth is I wish they stood out more--they're somewhat difficult to make out against the light orange fur. Nice work overall!
Firus: 5/10
Neon Ness: 7/10
FINAL: 6/10
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Congratulations to
Varist for being the winner of this round!
This week’s prompt:
Fuse any water-type Pokémon with any fire-type Pokémon.
The deadline is Friday, March 23th at 11:59 PM EST.