asianaussie
Smash Hero
it was actually ok when rereading from start-to-finish, it was a lot more coherent than i remembered it
however, it was terrible when you read it chapter by chapter - everything was just so forgettable, nami and hachi had reconciled basically all the problems that would have formed the 'build-up' of which you speak - it was more or less a standard 'strawhats-save-island' thing, except this time it was atlantis with uninteresting bad guys
however, it was terrible when you read it chapter by chapter - everything was just so forgettable, nami and hachi had reconciled basically all the problems that would have formed the 'build-up' of which you speak - it was more or less a standard 'strawhats-save-island' thing, except this time it was atlantis with uninteresting bad guys