Recent content by Ninja-Z

CHAPTER 3 Millions of light years away, in a galaxy named by the gods after their favorite candy, there existed a planet known as Earth. Compared to other celestial bodies such as the Mushroom Planet, it was largely insignificant in its size and reputation. Mushroomers were far more likeable...

Hm...this sounds like a pretty cool idea, and I have had trouble with writing lately so I might as well give it a shot. ~~~ It was empty. All empty. There was not a soul in sight in the Godforsaken hotel room, #49. It was said to be haunted by several ghosts from its past, but nobody...

THE CAT EMPIRE - THE CAR SONG (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8uI_4Uc-XKY) The weekend is the weekend And it’s sunny in the park I’ll stay here with my beer and fish and chips till it gets dark I’ve got a lot of homework But homework he can wait I never start my homework till its already...

Regardless of what the translation explicitly states, I doubt Ness will be in based on what we know. Lucas has several of Ness's old moves and several new ones, so it seems to me like putting Ness in would be redundant, seeing as Lucas is a new-and-improved version of him.

When I say "interesting," I mean something that at least holds true to the original material.

Sun shining through my window It gleams like honey so golden and so sweet You can almost taste it… “Dribble, do we have to listen to this song over and over again?” Dr. Crygor asked. “This is the fifth or sixth time we’ve heard it!” “I thought that was how you made it,” Dribble said...

It's not just the bad resume that video game movies have that make a Brawl movie unthinkable, but the fact that it's a fighting game involving several key Nintendo franchises. Its only plotline comes in the form of SSE, which isn't movie material and only serves to set up the fights. Heck, an...

I've taken quite a liking to Full Metal Panic as of recently. I've seen all three seasons and desperately want more in the near future. Lots of anime cliches, but still addictive. Other personal favorites are Cowboy Bebop, Trigun, NGE, .//Hack Sign (my first serious anime after a childhood of...

You still need to work on the story flow. Don't make most of your sentences so short; it would benefit you to lengthen them or connect several together. Now that you've got paragraphs instead of one-liners, make use of it! Read over what you've written until it sounds natural. That's the key...

Okay; there are several things that need to be fixed here, so I'll try to take in chronological order from the prologue to the end of chapter one. 1. If Mario is sitting under an apple tree with its shadow covering him, then he's not in the sun. Those two sentences can be condensed to "One...

It's got potential, but along with the problems already listed, you seem to have trouble with punctuation. As a rule of thumb, all quotes followed by "said (character name)" that don't end in an exclamation or question mark require a comma. For example: "We're here for you, Miss Toadstool."...

CHAPTER 2 Only one person had seen the portal and known its purpose. He sat in an old, Gothic mansion on the outskirts of Diamond City, overlooking the metropolis on a forested hill that was in perpetual twilight. The multi-colored dimensional rift hovered above the city, jerking back and...

Personally, I see no point in getting frustrated over the Dojo updates. It's one thing if I've been looking forward to a game for a long time and I find out prior to its release that it sucks; that I can understand venting about. But lack of information? Disappointment, sure. Elimination of some...

I checked out Youtube to see who CocoRosie are, and from what I found, aside from the usage of a trumpet in some songs, there's no real similarity. The Cat Empire is really hard to explain, and my description hardly does them justice. I'll have to check out Captain Beefheart, though. I've...

Let me ask you, then, what classifies as a quality update based on its proximity to the game's release. Some would say it is a new character, but others believe it's a new mode, stage, etc. Some even welcome the new details such as the trophy shooter, which turned a luck-based procedure in Melee...