I'm just doing match 1.
0:11- Pretty obvious shield he's doing there imo. You kinda look like you want to go in for shield pressure but also to fadeaway too. Either way, you get shield grabbed. Work on the tech skill or just see him shielding and grab next time.
0:15- try not to laser in on ganon when he is fairly high in his jump. Bait him into falling toward you and then laser his butt off. Make sure you watch him. Oh, and I guess you can beat the Bair with lasers/Fsmash?
0:18- Shine to Dair was not only slow, but a mad idea. Shine to Bair is better here because you push your opponent away so they can't punish you like you were(even if you did it right then he would still have been able to hit you from the ground).
0:20- yeah you didn't get punished for it here, but Ganon's like to Bait stuff like that Dair from the edge. Regrab and watch a few times as necessary.
0:35- decent combo, but then you Nair'd. Dair alllll da way. Oh and then you standing lasered again.....
0:42- don't sit in your shield and let ganon fall onto you with aerials! You have to get out of the way and keep the laser pressure on him after he lands. RSHL in either direction probably would have done the trick. Just keep your eye on his falling momentum.
0:57- completely unnecessary full DJ to lasers which let Ganon just rush in on you. Keep it simple with your lasers so you can focus more on what your opponent is doing(you don't have to get all crazy to limit Ganon's movement....).
1:05- Those Bairs were really risky, if Jim had fallen back with a Fair at that least one your DI would've probably messed you up. Learn your spacing and know when you can't overextend yourself.
1:07- jab to....? If you're jabbing on a shield, then I'm really not sure why you're running away lol but I geuss it's not a huge deal.
1:whatever- you start comboing but only use Dairs and shines. Needs uptilt after like 50% or so, so Ganon won't fly off really far every time you send him back up.
1:31- WTF FH? Shield the getup attack and punish.
1:46- laser up to Ganon and shield. I don't think I understand. You need to grab him more and be more certain of your approaches. If Ganon keeps sitting in his shield, then just grab him. Don't try to aerial him if he isn't going to come out of it. Dat ain't Fox.
1:49- Should've sweetspotted. I guess Jim really wasn't paying attention so you got away with it.
2:03- just SH aerials. Why? Move off of your whiffed aerials so you can get momentum and use a laser or another one. Jim rolled behind you but you were just aerial'ing....
2:28- you got hit because you didn't shoot any high lasers to keep Ganon from coming in high and then you didn't move when he finally got over to you.
Okay yeah, so this is what it boils down to:
-utilt in combos/keep them going more/finish them
-laser higher if Ganon goes high, but don't get all crazy about it and let him go low and rush you
-read ganon in the air and adjust your spacing accordingly
-stop standing lasering!
-stop getting shield grabbed/grab him out of his shield more