This seems like as good a place as any, could you guys critique my Wolf.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Br-2WOx0ujQ
Any advice would be appreciated
Thanks
Your uses of shine were getting you punished, as well as the onstage UpB. You need to camp a little more, and work on getting back to the stage, because that MK was really giving it to you; that MK wasn't really all that good either.
Watch Fsmash, you're getting punished when you use it.
DI out of your opponents hits, tech after getting hit, etc. It's really easy to follow up on you after the simplest attacks.
Never roll behind or around an opponent.
Unless I'm mistaken, all your fairs were lagged. Try and AC your fairs. Also use them to retreat as well. Work on that UpB when getting back to stage, and also work on putting yourself in a position where you don't have to use UpB. Most wolves can't use it right for some reason (it also just sucks).
Do not jump into the ****.
^ When you're getting thrown offstage by an MK, it's not wise coming back to him for more **** time.
If I didn't already say it, start camping. Spam blaster, run away, use wall of bair, etc...
I just started to use wolf back 2-3 weeks ago, and I played a match vs my cousin Vex Kasrani(the best bowser) Critique and post comments on the video as you wish
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OlTgWhOjdpo
First thing, how well did you know Bowser/Wolf MU at the time?
Watch that fsmash. You'll get punished, and when you're playing Bowser, getting punished might have dire consequences.
Don't get too ambitious with the wolf flash. Usually, when you have to jump to make it connect, it never connects. This is just something I noticed, but when you do a wolf flash, make sure it's gonna hit in a way that you're punishing. This usually only happens with platforms (Ie, you hit someone, they land on a platform).
@ 2:38 I'm a hyopcrite, but, never use UpB on stage unless you know you're going to lose and want to lol. Hell, don't use it offstage unless you must.
Second stock was taken by the same move as the first. So I ask, do you know Bowser? I don't know the MU as far as experience goes, but definitely watch out for that DownB. It'll really **** you up.
Bowser was done second stock, there was no reason to jump offstage (although I would have done the same because I'm an *** that likes to gimp those that have already been gimped). But make sure that, when leaving to supposedly gimp someone, you can gimp them and you will gimp them. Wolf sucks offstage as far as recovering goes, so watch it. You don't want to end up the gimpee.
So I'm assuming that was Bowser's win? Those are the rules I believe of the standard rules. Anyway, he didn't really try to Bowsercide, but that doesn't mean he won't. Which, in that case, space those bairs and don't come in contact unless you're punishing.
See now, I was going to critique, but it's a doubles match, and I honestly don't even want to look at it. Sorry.
If you can, record a singles match of your Wolf. I'll critique that.
Thanks Omniswell! I was hoping for more feedback than that, but your criticism is more than enough. Fair, retreating fair, spacing bair and don't roll. Got it. So can I be pro now? Afterall, I doesn't afraid of anything.