Alright, any advice you could give other than don't give up?
Advice hmm its gonna be hard considering you didn't have any real habits, but it came down to experience more than anything I'll try though.
Let's see I think you had a problem staying outside the range of my moves. Learn more baits and mindgames with Kirby those jumps can be used for a bit of confusion. Also I think you should use some more tilts as well instead of looking to get me with smashes sometimes. Don't use the hammer that much either. Learn how to cut off more options when I'm off stage, so take a few more risks at times. Work on those reads I believe. Also be more patient here and there just for those opportunities.
Vs Peach you do have to be somewhat more patient in the matchup, and it be very slow paced.
Vs ZSS you can't have her getting you where she wants, and its good to not let her move around so much. Quick reflexes are good vs her too with the whole front b and stun stuff going on. In the air its better to be directly under her than any where else. Since she really just got down b to attacks with which isn't a useful move.
Keep me guessing. I tend to look to see what makes my opponent what they are.