First game:
At around 2:30, an edguard bair would've been perfect.
Not enough tilts, especially utilt.
Not enough bair at first, then too predictable afterwards.
Grabs. Same as bair problem.
A lot of the times when you neutral a-d, a tilt would've been better.
This is more of a decision on my part, but your kirbycide attempts make you look bad. Here are the only 3 situations I would use one in:
1. You are in the perfect position, both of you are offstage. It doesn't matter who's edguarding who.
2. You're at 1 life, they're at more. You admit defeat and Kirbycide.
3. They're being cheap with -cides, so you show them a lesson.
In general, I don't like Kirbyciding because your at a high percent and they're low. It's one of the best times to use it, but I don't like the unfairness. I try to keep myself as "uncheap" as possible.
You had a bunch of good dtilt trip>fsmash set ups, but didn't use them. Around 3:30.
At 4:05, you just randomly Vulcan Punched in the middle of nowhere. Probably a stupid mistake, but just wanted to point it out.
Rolling behind people is generally not a good idea.
At the very end, you got a little smash-happy trying to kill him. Bad habit to get into.
Second Game:
Marth on battlefield? Not a good choice IMO.
Rolling behind people is
still a bad idea, though you didn't get punished this time.
You started Vulcan Punching in the middle of nowhere... again.
That Kirbycide fail; I wouldn't have done it in the first place (my principles), but once you did it, you should have spit out. Better to be safe and lose the stock like a man.
You just stood there when he was recovering. At least go in there and put some pressure on him. That hammer might've landed if you did...
You really look like some cheap n00b when you try to kirbycide so much.
At 7:45, you got punished again when rolling towards him.
Nice dtilt to fsmash a little after 7:45(not sarcastic).
When you had to jump in order to dair them, bairs were a better choice (when edguarding).
Not too many grabs in this match altogether.
Despite all of that, you're pretty good. I've critiqued a lot of Kirbies; all of them need to work on their tilt usage
, including you. You've got it in you to become good. You've got it in you to become a pro. Feel free to brawl me any time, then I can critique you better (it's hard to critique someone fighting against someone you've never played). Also brawl Asdioh and Fromundaman, and Galaxy. Any other Kirbies I left out, I'm sorry! It was just me forgetting! Please don't hurt me!