I'm bored so i'm going to critique myself
(1st vid)
0:14, may have been able to hug the ledge here, but instead decided to play it safe and set up my ledge traps.
0:55, should have been obvious to me he would air dodge here, shouldn't have fsmashed and instead dash to grab or dash to dancing blade to get him off the stage again
1:05, he predicts my up b and am punished
1:34, was trying to set up a wall here but his fair will beat my dtilt, ftilt would have been a better option to keep him out
1:44, slow reaction on the edge hog, or i could have simply countered while still on stage.
1:52, up b would have worked fine here, unfortunately i didnt manage to reverse it and completely whiffed, thus losing a stock
2:00, just want those who care to notice here.. i set up my wall with multiple aerials. Brick walls are incredibly important to the brawl meta game. Don't let your opponent get past your sword
2:39, i tech right into his jab combo, should have been less aggressive and backed away to reset my spacing
3:01, can't remember why i even did this up b, either way i got punished
3:19, ike's ftilt is punishable, but instead i opted to dash away out of his range instead of rushing him with dancing blade
3:22, far too risky up b as we both had our shields up. either a shield grab or roll away would have worked much better.
4:07, messed up my dancing blade completely here, should have been an easy punish
4:09, the up b hits but it didn't sweet spot, i lose a stock
4:19, was a little too close to dtilt, should have rolled away/dashed away and reset myself
4:34, ike's up smashes are tasty. obvious counter situation here, or at least wait for the up smash and use a nair get up
4:44, tried a very risky dancing blade > up b set up, didn't work and i end up above Ike which is a bad spot to be. i'm not able to get on the ground safely and i lose my last stock.
Neo used a lot of fairs to set up walls in this match, i think if i spaced myself a little closer to him i would have been able to punish a few of them. Sometimes i think i was afraid to approach and instead just hung back and played patiently.. if i don't approach i give my opponent many more options while mine are limited. Not saying i should go crazy aggressive, that's bad. Also not saying patience is a bad thing, it's great and should be used even when approaching. Whenever you approach always be intelligent about it.