Best chapter yet. Here's some things I loved:
-Ganondorf, Zant, Vaati, and Shadow Beast being in it
-Shadow Beast ****** Midna
-Cave of Ordeals
-Cinderblock Boss
-Zelda bosses
-The bit about Jafar and the Heart Container
The Spinner levels were genious.
The flying sword dragons are called Aeralfos. Like animated skeletons have the prefix "Stal", reptilian enemies with swords have the suffix "alfos". Stalfos is an animated skelton with a sword.
I was hoping the Zelda fans, particularly the Ganon ones, would be really fond of this chapter. Apparantely it looks like I've succeeded.
I would've literally put "Shadow Beast ****** Midna" if the SSBB were rated M.
The Spinner just came to me as a game mechanic, then I thought how it'd make for another great boss battle with Stallord.
This is as probably as close as we'll get to a Zelda chapter with with all the Zelda bosses and locations. . .Ironic considering no incarnatino of Link or Zelda are in it.
Who needs them when you have Ganon?
Thank you.
WWWHHHEEEE!!!!!
3 of my movesets are in this chapter =D!!!
Really cool chapter MasterWarlord! I like how Sagi fights the evil inside them, and how they team up with Ike!!! Yayy!!! Seriously, this chapter is wicked!!!
I put that bit in them just for you to mess with his mechanics and such. I didn't think of it. . .But yeah go figure you'd like your chars being paired up with Ike (And Marth).
Glad you like it! Thank you!
Although I thought you'd lol at the cat fight.
Great chapter! The army levels really lend to unique gameplay. However, where was Midna seen before? Her name isn't bolded anywhere...
I fixed her lack of a bold name and some other errors: I referenced Jafar, Iago and Zazu in some of the attack levels. . .Originally I intended for them to meet up with Ganon instead of Zant. Ugh. . .
Thanks though.
I honestly was worried I didn't put enough details into the army levels and such to make them unique.
nice chapter MW. I can't wait for Midna to get out of that cage & get her power back. & loved the whole part with the zelda villains & kawasaki
also, are you planning to include Spyro's Ripto boss? I don't know if u saw my post in the thread, but he is finished ~
Thanks.
This is just a minor appearance of Midna in this chapter. Don't worry, she'll be much more important in the chapters to come.
Well. . .Considering Spyro's main screen time is over, my prime chance to include him would've been earlier, but I can't say no to a free boss. I'll just include him without Spyro.
Your new chapter is excellent. My favorite so far by a lot.
Your use of the spinner and the chef event were genious. Stallord's implementation was clever.
The great battle, though Lord of the Rings-esque was epic.
The cat fight made me lol.
Ganon's implementation as a civilized villain was very in character.
Overall, it was very well done, even by your standards and I hope you'll keep up the good work.
I hoped this would be your favorite if anyone's.
The spinner, Kawasaki's role, and Stallord seem to be highlights for a lot of people in this chapter.
Glad somebody else thought that was funny.
I was without a doubt focusing on Ganon in this chapter. If anyone's the main character, it's him. He's one of the few people I can easily characterize without a second thought.
Thanks again, and I have no intent on letting down on the quality any time soon. My original outlines don't look nearly as flashy as this, I have to buff each section up individually to make each chapter worth reading. I'm gonna do some other work before I continue on my SM, but it'll still be MYM related.
Yay! Stallord came back!
And woot, Black Doom! And he... drains people's souls? News to me. *thinks of the times Black Doom could have done that in Playing God and shudders* lol
Ganondorf telling the woman to get back to work made me litteraly LOL, as did Bonkers wanting "poop" for his meal.
One thing I didn't like was the final boss, not because the battle was bad, but becuase I hate that look of Ganon. Oh well, not your fault it looks like ****.
Considering you said Stallord was your favorite Zelda boss, it only encouraged me all the more to give Stallord another boss fight.
Well. . .It's a creative liberty.
Really, any villain could've done it (Those without magic with a machine), just like how I have basically everybody able to open a portal in some way (Or at least the bad guys). I thought it fit Black Doom fine though and I liked the concept of him using his moves as running in gameplay above other characters. Black Doom's main role is yet to come. . .If you liked this, you'll like him even more later.
"GET BACK TO THE **** KITCHEN!". I was so tempted to literally have Ganon say that. . .And Bonkers has become another of my characters who's a constant scapegoat for humor off his stupidity.
Although Blitzkrieg is never gonna make him a moveset at this rate. . .
Kibble, if you're reading this, make Bonkers!
I honestly was the least pleased with how that boss fight turned out of the ones in the chapter as it was the least unique. I seem to rush the last boss too often because I just want to get the chapter out.
Anyway, thanks for reading.
