To be frank, by "random" I mean under detailed. You rarely fill in anything, only doing so for your own characters, instead leaving the rest in tempplate form. You're right, I couldn't make that in 4 hours. . .Because I'd shoot myself if I had to post something like that. If you gave me 4 hours, I wouldn't be finished, but the parts I did finish would be up to snuff.
You also leave us wondering what happened to Falco. He stayed behind for Fox. . .And then is never seen again. Are you going to tie up all the loose ends you've made all over the place?
That said, I really don't mean to bash, as even if your SSE is less detailed then TwiltHero's, at least it's still got a remote amount of seriousness (While still having some funny stuff - even if some of it is over the top, i. e. Chuck Norris Captain Falcon), and you actually finished the bloody thing.
I suppose I'll include the actual Brawl characters in my next SSE as well as give dialougue to further challenge myself. The only real problem I see myself having is linking the chapters together, as the chapters in my previous miserable pile of secrets were tied together by a very thin thread, the chapters having little relevance to each other and mostly making sense on their own.
Perhaps the first chapter can make use of the ridiculous amount of Link forms throughout the contest and let you follow Link, but him changing forms throughout it? Link/Young Link/Fierce Diety Link/Wolf Link/Etc. . .
I'm also going to let you all see how to use Meta Knight in a SSE, he'll have a big role for sure. God I love that character, even if I hate his moveset.