Damn Locke, you got pretty good. Good stuff.
You actually seem to have a pretty good grasp on the matchup, so the critique will be pretty limited. A few things I see off the bat that you need to work on:
Work on your edge guards. They weren't too bad, but you couldn't quite get that eddie / tipman spike you were looking for. Basically, if the falcon recovered low, he recovered safely... Falcon should never recover safely.
Work on your DI. You died at like 80% from a reverse knee. That shouldn't happen. He edge guarded you properly (aka wait until you get on stage and then knee you back off), but you can DI that up and recover.
Also, recover from the ledge more safely. You were punished a lot on the ledge and I think you should have stalled more / thrown in some empty RLD's.
10:22, when you're recovering and he's just chilling on the ledge like that, up air the **** out of him. It can be unsafe, but he did this before. It'll stage spike and he dies.
Overall good stuff, nice tech chases etc.