Well since nobody seems to be replying to these I'll give it my shot, but take all of my advice with a hefty grain of salt as I'm new to the competitive scene. Just want to post something to try and get more people to respond to posts.
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I only had time to watch the Sheik match and should probably have watched the Fox one since that's where you lost once skimming through it. It's a bit hard to give advice when your mistakes aren't being punished and things are working out for you. Ah well, here's what I observed, more or less sequentially:
- Several times you just sat in shield until sheik grabbed, seem to get better at this later or avoid the situation. You seemed to be spot dodging a lot which is neat and probably great practice but didn't seem to always work out for you, don't know enough to critique.
- You sometimes randomly throwing out a dair or b-up mostly in the first match but still sometimes just seemingly trying to get lucky, would try to be a bit more sure before tossing those out since they have such bad end lag.
Using upsmash a few times, guessing those were supposed to be u-tilts
Throwing out a lot of moves when it's really unecessary, might want to take a look at
this thread in reddit, might be able to use the advice:
General lack of nairs except as a warm up of sorts. Is that because they're bad vs Sheik or do you just not use them much? Only times I really saw you use them was when you were keeping your fingers warm between deaths.
Very aggressive edge guarding (jumping off etc) is great to practice but obviously doesn't always work out for you. Think you should continue practicing it though, as it seems most SDs/deaths from it are just judgement based which you will improve on from using it.
In general though was fun to watch, as someone who is new to competitive smash I think I learned a few things I wouldn't have watching the top pros. Hope I was at least somewhat helpful, but as I said I'm a newbie so can't give in depth advice. The things I hear all the time are spacing and using your sword as a threat and to my eye your spacing seemed pretty good the whole fight, maybe a little overly-aggressive but it seemed to work well vs your opponent and that's a stylistic thing anyhow.
EDIT: In some of the other games I've played there's a rule in threads like this that if you're posting a video you want critiqued you have to post a critique of a previous video in that same post before you post your own. If we could implement that it might help the activity factor a bit. Currently seen a lot of threads for critique elsewhere since this one never gets replies.