you could actualy make that a decent story... but you have to explain everything, ive done a lot of writing and the best tip i picked up is give details about everything, no one will ever tell you that you gave too much detail, not in highschool anyway. so like more background info, give the players themselfs fake names, like..
"sam was playing his best Super smash brothers melee (ssbm) charactor, Fox. playing fox is the most physicly demanding character available, and sam utalized this fact to its fullist with his insane combos that only a small percentage of players in the world could pull off. Some of sam's combos required 8 buttons a second to perform. This was against Jane's charactor of choice, Link. a charactor not held in high regaurd in the ssbm comunity. However jane substitutes combo potential with precision, finess and an artfull playstyle any player no matter what charactor they used would have a problem defeating. The onlookers later would say Jane showed more of her personal skill and enginuity as aposed to leaning on her charactors skill as they believed the Sam was doing with his fox.
But none could have predicted the outcome to this battle, A heated neck and neck melee3 with a bizare twist of fate... blah blah"
thats how you write a story....