PCHU
Smash Lord
Critique, please?
I just want to know what I'm missing.
I feel that something could be better, but I'm confused as to what.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3U0Hzm7cuyw&feature=channel
I watched it over, and I saw a few areas I could've done better in.
My pillaring needs a bit of work, I guess.
But there's something else.
I dunno what it is.
I just want to know what I'm missing.
I feel that something could be better, but I'm confused as to what.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3U0Hzm7cuyw&feature=channel
I watched it over, and I saw a few areas I could've done better in.
My pillaring needs a bit of work, I guess.
But there's something else.
I dunno what it is.