nope, this is for tournament/competitive videos, video critique thread can be found here
http://www.smashboards.com/showthread.php?t=270140
anyway just from the first vid I'd say
- he's too aggressive, shouldn't run straight at DK constantly(or most characters for that matter)
- uses dair for vertical momentum cancel, FF uair or bair are both MUCH better and uair will let you live like 15-20% longer than dair vs vertical attacks
- he starts having his spot dodge and roll habits read a lot harder halfway through the game because he's constantly in DK's face, snake doesn't have good agro options and doing it will usually make you predictable eventually, this is why you camp like a mother ****er
- try to go for more grabs, if you just ftilt a lot you'll get shielded all day. snake's boost grab and pivot grab are really good, one situation I saw in particular he ran backward to shield and ftilt, DK rolled into him and blocked it, instead of stopping to ftilt, pivot grabbing would've gotten him
edit: ninjahalberd'd