1:40 - It's generally better to cover the high ground than the defend the ledge from that distance. It's a very difficult sweet spot for Falco, and easily covered by tilt. So if he goes high, you can just time your up tilt and have better success. You could've made the ledge successful, but it would've been really difficult and you would likely need to guess more than you need to if you just stood by the ledge and tilted.
But I can understand if the distance seemed ambiguous at first glance. When you've been in the Falco slaying business as long as I have, those distances become more certain.
2:00 good job avoiding invincible Falco.
2:28 Classic edgeguards :D
2:40 - Try to lightshield or SDI away so that you can avoid that shield pressure.
Also, try not to use dash attack against Falco at low percentage. Even if you connect, he can often turn it into bigger damage on you. You generally want to use it when it forces him to go into tumble animation and techs.
I can also understand wanting to use it so that you CAN get him to those percentages. It's generally pretty hard to land clean hits on Falco anyway.
3:09 - You gave him the 69%
That sequence started with a nice counter to his approach though. After you landed that second tilt you have to recognize that you're not going to beat Falco out from that position and a wavedash back to bait that approach or moving into him with shield up for the up B counter would have probably been better.
3:58 Don't reach against invincible Falco.
You want your presence to force him off stage again, or you just want to go over him. Getting that reversal is really hard after he just refreshes invincibility.
4:30 Watch for those extra high down airs on shield, almost all new school Falcos will start doing those fade-aways.
4:49 You should be able to punish Falco with Up B OoS when he tries to cross up like that.
5:20 Down airs will be the death of you.
6:54 This is one of the toughest things to teach, but when you see Falco go high, you want to meet him before you neutral air so it minimizes where can he go to avoid it. You want to put yourself in a position where the worst-case scenario is that your neutral air reverses him (which is fine at that percentage) and so he's either on top of you or in front of you when you throw it out.
By the way, most of this "advice" could be tech skill makes or whatever, but I'm just throwing them out assuming that they were just oversights or lapses in judgement.
7:50 **** sucks.
You can try buffering your tech as you're rising and smash DIing, but I think he just had you screwed at that height.
8:18 You're lucky he didn't just full hop down air you there, be careful returning to the stage at that height.
8:30 nice cross up shield stab. I prefer using tilts against the forward B as opposed to jabs. Though, the second hit of jab is still pretty nice for edgeguarding Falco. At least you got the skill though.
9:00 He gave you that stock! Don't be afraid to go for that HERO drop kick, you just gotta jump and up B immediately because he likes to instant forward B you. I'm pretty sure it's still safe. I was doing it to him without dying the last time I played him at least.
Toward the end, he was just zoning you out with lasers. That's when it's most important to be able to powershield about 20% of the time. It can give you the space you need to get back in and mess up his timing and rhythm.
Overall- Hitting Falco is hard, most of your REAL damage is going to come from countering his approaches with WD back smashes and Up B OoS. Otherwise, you're doing a good job of scratching him when you can, but try not to swing for the fences too much. (Down air) Eventually they're going to be looking for it and that's when the laser camping becomes even more of a problem. They're just gonna start baiting you out, because you haven't fully demonstrated that you can deal with it yet.
So try to keep your focus, shield DI those lasers and try to move between them with your WD OoS in between the ones and you can't power shield, and don't be afraid to go to the ledge if he pushes you from that distance to reset yourself and your shield to get easier powershields.
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Ok, my turn. :D
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FJkRNlM1AcY&feature=channel_video_title
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l-YhwJaODWg&feature=channel_video_title
I definitely need to learn what Samus' options are against Sheik on down throw with DI up and in.