I like your edits, though the font is not consistent, so you might want to look into that.
Also, I have a question:
When it comes to retro/historical characters, do you see Daitoryo as a non-condender, or have you simply not considered him?
Also, should the "retro" category be split up into "Retro" and "historical" or "hardware" characters? Retros being like Ice Climbers or Pit and "historical" or "hardware" characters being like Mr. Game and Watch and R.O.B.? I think it's pretty clear that there's some sort of distinction, myself, but it's not entirely clear whether the second group is meant to be the "historical" characters or the "hardware" characters (although I certainly find historical to be more reasonable, myself). Do you have the same point of view, or...?