@ Lucia:
So...
I'm not really experienced with matchups, having nobody to play with, but I can tell you
Don't use smashes so much:
1: Not when you're really far away from the opponent. He's probably not going to run into it.
2: Don't use your upsmash early in the game. It's supposed to be saved for killing. You used it only once though, just pointing it out.
Lasers:
Use SH Airdodge, jump around to avoid lasers. If there are platforms, use them to get away. Try to use your projectiles to attack him at the same time as avoiding his lasers.
General attacks:
Your main attacks should be Nair, bair, utilt, zair.
Don't use dair and dash attack so much.
Your approach should not be 'run up, stop, dsmash' or dash attack
It should be Nair/zair
Projectiles:
Short hop most of your projectiles. This lets you quickdraw bomb throws and bomb pulls, and it's just better in general for angling and stuff
Killing:
Don't spam randomly.
@ Doom Link:
Quite solid, yet somehow doesn't feel like very Toon Linky. Maybe because I'm used to the standard zair-> nair routine.
Since it was a CPU I can't really say so much...
Usually, using Usmash a lot is a bad idea, though you managed to kill him easily enough. It's a matter of playstyle, but don't use your kill moves (fair, Usmash, Uair) too much before kill percent.
Work on using zair and short hop and quickdraw, yet preserve some uniqueness so that you don't become predictable.
Wait, I didn't say you were exactly predictable
I said avoid in the future because in my experience I play too predictably
