Luco
Smash Hero
- Joined
- Jan 4, 2011
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- The isle of venom, Australia
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Awww Frostwraith, I wanted to imagine a funny sneaky section where mars follows you two around. Suppose your power don't allow for that. Aww well.
Okay, here's my third chapter. And this, is, where, I, start, networking, so to speak. You'll see why but this is an important chapter for everyone in the pokeworld/close to the pokeworld to read.
Whether you incorporate it in to your story, though, or leave it, that's up to you!
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A knock on the door at the cabin is heard throughout the forest. A girl of about fourteen years opens the door and exclaims at the wearied Luco with Mewtwo in his hands. "Help... him..." Luco mutters, before they both go down. All the stops further harm from being done is charizard who has Luco's shirt in his teeth.
It was early morning when he woke. The sunlight was shining through the glass and he could hear humming alongside the smell of what must be breakfast. He opened his eyes a little more. The cabin turned out to be one large room, the kitchen taking up a side, the main area in the middle and four beds on the other side. He was on one of them. Mewtwo was on another. A pokemon of great power reduced to this? What happened?
He turned his head over and met the eyes of the girl he saw the night before. She beamed at him. "Breakfast! Bet you want something to eat, don't you?"
"Not sure if i'm that hungry right now but... okay."
He got up, slowly, and went to the table. I wonder what my new powers are? He hadn't tested anything out since the met Mewtwo yesterday. With the girl's back turned, he quickly experimented with a barrier. It was a lot stronger than his first one. Good.
"So what's your name?" Luco asked the girl, as she cooked.
"Oh, uh, mine? I'm Elle!"
"How nice to meet you." Luco was still a little too tired to really mean it but he knew he would later on, besides it only paid to be courteous.
"And..." She prompted.
"Hmm?" Luco stared at her blankly for a few seconds. "Oh, right, sorry. Yes, my name is Luco."
"Well how NICE to meet you, L-u-c-o!" She said, tasting the name, feeling how it went. "And uhh..." She came closer to Luco and whispered in his ear. "Is that really who I think it is?"
The voice inside their heads answered at once.
"I have a name."
In the blur of an eye, Luco was at the wall. The voice inside his head was overwhelming.
"Where is it!? Where is my crystal?"
Oh dud. How did he begin to explain to him what happened?
"I don't have your crystal! I can't get it back! It... it disappeared."
"Disappeared?"
"It dissolved as I touched it... it's hard to explain but I can't explain it if i'm against the wall." Elle's voice came from the kitchen. "Yea! Let him explain..."
He was let down shortly there-after and began to explain his powers to mewtwo. He also explained why he couldn't go straight back and how his power was all throughout the world, likely in people's possession. "That would coincide with when I found the jewel... either way, you won't be free of me until you find me another."
Luco groaned in despair.
"Or one like it."
That was better.
Though he realized when mewtwo woke up that he could use telepathy again, he kept the conversation in the open, as Elle didn't pose a danger and he wanted to keep the conversation open.
"First of all, I need to build this place up. I need a place I can come back to in this world."
Elle spoke up.
"Build up!? Nono, this place is beautiful, how could you bui-"
Luco interrupted her. "Ha, no, not build up in that way. I want this place to be a place where travelers can rest, is all. Gardens and pokemon all around, I've been to the caves here and I think I can make things really great!"
"But... there isn't a lot of variety here, only numbers in the few species that are around this place."
"Yes... and I intend to change that."
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The work took a long time. Day by day, they found themselves building this or improving that, keeping this in condition or thinking up plans for more.
The idea was to have a structure in the centre of the valley, as well as one nearby in the treetops which served as a kind of inn. The building in the middle (along the dirt road that was already there) would be a place people could eat. They wanted a bridge across the river to connect the valley with the rest of the region, as the other side only led out to plains and the ocean. The road came to an intersection next to the cafe where it split all four ways. As far as Luco knew, three actually went somewhere while the fourth trailed off in to one of the forests near the lake. He decided hat might be useful for something later on. Two of the paths took routes out of the valley where it opened up and the fourth led to a cave which was nearly empty except for a few zubat living in it. Across from the cafe was a grass clearing. Luco had plans for that but he didn't want to spoil anything for Elle so all he did was construct a park bench alongside a small pond around the side of the clearing and left it at that. The inn was at the edge of the forest, next to the grass clearing and would feature both inside and outside rooms. It was building the inn one day that they stumbled upon a Chancey in the woods... it didn't take very long for the Chancey wanting to help them when Mewtwo explained what was going on.
So they built and worked for a while. It was one day, as they were building a wooden platform next to the cafe that something drastic happened. Elle was still unsure about what would happen after the place got running and didn't really want to be seen with it too much. Luco was working at the platform when...
"Do you notice that?" Mewtwo's familiar voice in his head didn't provoke an action from him at once. It took him a moment to realize that mewtwo was bugged by whatever it was he was noticing. Luco turned around, where mewtwo was standing in the grass clearing. "Hmm?" He replied.
"Notice what?" Luco was sure he was talking about some kind of bug or something else.
"A disturbance-" He was cut off abruptly, looking up.
Above them was a small, pink, pokemon.
Above them was mew.
Immediately Mewtwo lashed out in rage at the legendary pokemon watching them. "What's going on!?" Luco had no idea why they were fighting. "We battled before..." That was all mewtwo said before he was back in battle, teleporting and launching spheres at Mew. They need to stop or they'll risk damaging what we've done. Indeed, that was exactly what happened. A missed attack when soaring past mew... and straight in to Elle's cabin. Five minutes later saw Elee running towards Luco wondering what all the commotion was about.... then she saw her cabin. "Oh no!!" she cried, starting towards the cabin... but Luco held her back. He wasn't sure whether they'd stop if she was in the cross-fire.
"Wait here." He told her. He jumped, slowly going higher and higher until he was at level with the tops of the trees around him. Dang this is gonna be harder than usual. He focused in ward and amplified his voice.
"Stop it! STOP IT NOW!!!!!!"
He caught the attention of the two. They turned toward him mid-air, blinking in surprise.
"See what you have done! Elle's cabin is ruined. Her home is gone. And you fly around like idiots blasting at one another? How could this have all started?"
"We fought before and he won. I need my revenge. I must destroy him."
"And yet have you considered that he did not kill you? When he could have? He sent you away, damaged... but he did not kill you."
That gave mewtwo pause. Mew looked at Luco with eyes that suggested he would have stopped as soon as mewtwo had.
"Then so be it. I do not want him here though."
"But, why? If you two stop fighting, he'll only he-"
"I do NOT want him here."
He floated to the ground and began to stride away. Luco floated to the ground along-side Elle. "What was that about?" She asked. "Why is he walking away?"
"Oh... he'll get over it, I wouldn't worry."
Mew began to giggle above them.
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Eventually the valley was in good condition. The cafe and inn had been built... but there was no-one to run them, nor to work there.
"We still need people here... even if it looks like I am working with you." Elle looked at him and stuck her tongue out.
"That won't be a problem. Come with me."
They walked up the hill to where Mewtwo was. Though he had relented towards mew, Luco still often found him on the hill where he had been found not so long ago, staring in to the distance. It was on this day that he found him on a rock not too far away from the site.
"Mewtwo... I think it's time. I need you to send out a message. To anything and everything throughout these lands. Nothing specific, just to let pokemon know that there is a place they can find happiness, freedom, all such things if they feel they do not already have it. Include some memories of this place. Remember the warmth, the feel of sunlight, the lake and cave, the snowy hills, the plains beyond... it's time."
"You are sure? We could attract unwanted attention."
"I know... and I am sure. I do not want to risk the message not getting to anyone that needs it. We can deal with unwanted attention. Let's do it."
"Alright."
Mewtwo began to focus. Luco noticed Mew concentrating as well, a small way away. The force of the power emanated almost knocked Luco and Elle over. "I hope it's not so strong further away from the source! You almost burned my brain out with the strength of those thoughts!"
Even Charizard behind him seemed to be covering his ears. It seemed like the others had hid behind rocks. He was sure if he looked he'd find Pikachu and the others there.
So now... now it begins.
The message was sent.
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Okay! That's my part of the story, the last part is the proper part to read but you can read the rest of it if you want as well. Respond if you want, don't respond if not. Hope you enjoy! ^_^
Okay, here's my third chapter. And this, is, where, I, start, networking, so to speak. You'll see why but this is an important chapter for everyone in the pokeworld/close to the pokeworld to read.
Whether you incorporate it in to your story, though, or leave it, that's up to you!
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A knock on the door at the cabin is heard throughout the forest. A girl of about fourteen years opens the door and exclaims at the wearied Luco with Mewtwo in his hands. "Help... him..." Luco mutters, before they both go down. All the stops further harm from being done is charizard who has Luco's shirt in his teeth.
It was early morning when he woke. The sunlight was shining through the glass and he could hear humming alongside the smell of what must be breakfast. He opened his eyes a little more. The cabin turned out to be one large room, the kitchen taking up a side, the main area in the middle and four beds on the other side. He was on one of them. Mewtwo was on another. A pokemon of great power reduced to this? What happened?
He turned his head over and met the eyes of the girl he saw the night before. She beamed at him. "Breakfast! Bet you want something to eat, don't you?"
"Not sure if i'm that hungry right now but... okay."
He got up, slowly, and went to the table. I wonder what my new powers are? He hadn't tested anything out since the met Mewtwo yesterday. With the girl's back turned, he quickly experimented with a barrier. It was a lot stronger than his first one. Good.
"So what's your name?" Luco asked the girl, as she cooked.
"Oh, uh, mine? I'm Elle!"
"How nice to meet you." Luco was still a little too tired to really mean it but he knew he would later on, besides it only paid to be courteous.
"And..." She prompted.
"Hmm?" Luco stared at her blankly for a few seconds. "Oh, right, sorry. Yes, my name is Luco."
"Well how NICE to meet you, L-u-c-o!" She said, tasting the name, feeling how it went. "And uhh..." She came closer to Luco and whispered in his ear. "Is that really who I think it is?"
The voice inside their heads answered at once.
"I have a name."
In the blur of an eye, Luco was at the wall. The voice inside his head was overwhelming.
"Where is it!? Where is my crystal?"
Oh dud. How did he begin to explain to him what happened?
"I don't have your crystal! I can't get it back! It... it disappeared."
"Disappeared?"
"It dissolved as I touched it... it's hard to explain but I can't explain it if i'm against the wall." Elle's voice came from the kitchen. "Yea! Let him explain..."
He was let down shortly there-after and began to explain his powers to mewtwo. He also explained why he couldn't go straight back and how his power was all throughout the world, likely in people's possession. "That would coincide with when I found the jewel... either way, you won't be free of me until you find me another."
Luco groaned in despair.
"Or one like it."
That was better.
Though he realized when mewtwo woke up that he could use telepathy again, he kept the conversation in the open, as Elle didn't pose a danger and he wanted to keep the conversation open.
"First of all, I need to build this place up. I need a place I can come back to in this world."
Elle spoke up.
"Build up!? Nono, this place is beautiful, how could you bui-"
Luco interrupted her. "Ha, no, not build up in that way. I want this place to be a place where travelers can rest, is all. Gardens and pokemon all around, I've been to the caves here and I think I can make things really great!"
"But... there isn't a lot of variety here, only numbers in the few species that are around this place."
"Yes... and I intend to change that."
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The work took a long time. Day by day, they found themselves building this or improving that, keeping this in condition or thinking up plans for more.
The idea was to have a structure in the centre of the valley, as well as one nearby in the treetops which served as a kind of inn. The building in the middle (along the dirt road that was already there) would be a place people could eat. They wanted a bridge across the river to connect the valley with the rest of the region, as the other side only led out to plains and the ocean. The road came to an intersection next to the cafe where it split all four ways. As far as Luco knew, three actually went somewhere while the fourth trailed off in to one of the forests near the lake. He decided hat might be useful for something later on. Two of the paths took routes out of the valley where it opened up and the fourth led to a cave which was nearly empty except for a few zubat living in it. Across from the cafe was a grass clearing. Luco had plans for that but he didn't want to spoil anything for Elle so all he did was construct a park bench alongside a small pond around the side of the clearing and left it at that. The inn was at the edge of the forest, next to the grass clearing and would feature both inside and outside rooms. It was building the inn one day that they stumbled upon a Chancey in the woods... it didn't take very long for the Chancey wanting to help them when Mewtwo explained what was going on.
So they built and worked for a while. It was one day, as they were building a wooden platform next to the cafe that something drastic happened. Elle was still unsure about what would happen after the place got running and didn't really want to be seen with it too much. Luco was working at the platform when...
"Do you notice that?" Mewtwo's familiar voice in his head didn't provoke an action from him at once. It took him a moment to realize that mewtwo was bugged by whatever it was he was noticing. Luco turned around, where mewtwo was standing in the grass clearing. "Hmm?" He replied.
"Notice what?" Luco was sure he was talking about some kind of bug or something else.
"A disturbance-" He was cut off abruptly, looking up.
Above them was a small, pink, pokemon.
Above them was mew.
Immediately Mewtwo lashed out in rage at the legendary pokemon watching them. "What's going on!?" Luco had no idea why they were fighting. "We battled before..." That was all mewtwo said before he was back in battle, teleporting and launching spheres at Mew. They need to stop or they'll risk damaging what we've done. Indeed, that was exactly what happened. A missed attack when soaring past mew... and straight in to Elle's cabin. Five minutes later saw Elee running towards Luco wondering what all the commotion was about.... then she saw her cabin. "Oh no!!" she cried, starting towards the cabin... but Luco held her back. He wasn't sure whether they'd stop if she was in the cross-fire.
"Wait here." He told her. He jumped, slowly going higher and higher until he was at level with the tops of the trees around him. Dang this is gonna be harder than usual. He focused in ward and amplified his voice.
"Stop it! STOP IT NOW!!!!!!"
He caught the attention of the two. They turned toward him mid-air, blinking in surprise.
"See what you have done! Elle's cabin is ruined. Her home is gone. And you fly around like idiots blasting at one another? How could this have all started?"
"We fought before and he won. I need my revenge. I must destroy him."
"And yet have you considered that he did not kill you? When he could have? He sent you away, damaged... but he did not kill you."
That gave mewtwo pause. Mew looked at Luco with eyes that suggested he would have stopped as soon as mewtwo had.
"Then so be it. I do not want him here though."
"But, why? If you two stop fighting, he'll only he-"
"I do NOT want him here."
He floated to the ground and began to stride away. Luco floated to the ground along-side Elle. "What was that about?" She asked. "Why is he walking away?"
"Oh... he'll get over it, I wouldn't worry."
Mew began to giggle above them.
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Eventually the valley was in good condition. The cafe and inn had been built... but there was no-one to run them, nor to work there.
"We still need people here... even if it looks like I am working with you." Elle looked at him and stuck her tongue out.
"That won't be a problem. Come with me."
They walked up the hill to where Mewtwo was. Though he had relented towards mew, Luco still often found him on the hill where he had been found not so long ago, staring in to the distance. It was on this day that he found him on a rock not too far away from the site.
"Mewtwo... I think it's time. I need you to send out a message. To anything and everything throughout these lands. Nothing specific, just to let pokemon know that there is a place they can find happiness, freedom, all such things if they feel they do not already have it. Include some memories of this place. Remember the warmth, the feel of sunlight, the lake and cave, the snowy hills, the plains beyond... it's time."
"You are sure? We could attract unwanted attention."
"I know... and I am sure. I do not want to risk the message not getting to anyone that needs it. We can deal with unwanted attention. Let's do it."
"Alright."
Mewtwo began to focus. Luco noticed Mew concentrating as well, a small way away. The force of the power emanated almost knocked Luco and Elle over. "I hope it's not so strong further away from the source! You almost burned my brain out with the strength of those thoughts!"
Even Charizard behind him seemed to be covering his ears. It seemed like the others had hid behind rocks. He was sure if he looked he'd find Pikachu and the others there.
So now... now it begins.
The message was sent.
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Okay! That's my part of the story, the last part is the proper part to read but you can read the rest of it if you want as well. Respond if you want, don't respond if not. Hope you enjoy! ^_^