yeniths - booney baby it was nice seeing you again at joes mate, hope you got to your lecture alright and didnt fall asleep on the train back. your really getting good now, duncan must have gotten alot better if he beat you in pools at ph2. and from what me and charlie could gather you improved alot just in the 2 days you were up here. read up some more and work on your di, i think thats definitely your weakest area at the moment, but thats actually the natural progression for most players so dont worry about it.
also your quite safe when you play your defensive game, and in general i advise you use that defensive aspect as it obviously suits your style more, just work on making your offensive game that bit safer and you should see another big improvement in your performance.
lastly mix up your edge guarding abit, if you keep trying to keep someone off the stage the same way everytime your just gonna make it easier for them to get back.
ps - dont attack from the ledge, dont jump into the ****!