Okay I don't have a lot of time right now and I will definitely come back to this but three things
1) your avatars are boss
2) After watching about 6 seconds I've noticed that [as you said] your tech skill needs improvement [mostly L canceling]
and that 3) your DD is bad
I don't mean that in the way that it's not performed correctly but in the idea that you're not using it for it's intended purpose. I was actually just talking about this yesterday to a new player as well so it's still fresh in my mind
Basically your DD is used for mindgames
Pulling in, baiting an attack, moving out to make them whiff, and then moving back in for the punish
You did a DD in place pretty much, and Tim just kinda...hit you out of it. You never moved your DD wider, or attempted to get out of the way, you just got hit by it.
So remember to use the DD to move out of the way of that ftilt/dair/fsmash/whatever and then come back in
When you get that you'll make giant leaps.
I'll come back to this later but right now I'm hungry D:<
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Okay well after watching a few matches
I have to say this for both of you:
You do have a lot to work on, but you're doing fairly well at this point.
You should probably focus on two to three things at a time, but overall you'll get some general improvement across the board.
So for both of you, improvement is needed in these areas:
Movement, neither of you really moved in a way that was necessary imo. It was a lot of really stiff movement, and a lot of movement through attacks. So focus on wavedashing/platform dashing/dding/etc
L canceling, self explanatory
Off stage stuff
George in particular:
Work on that DD stuff I was talking about
Getting more grabs is good
Chasing dairs with knees, that upB was...no. Just no.
Consistent wavedashing/platform dashing
Punishing dash attack on shield with dair or shield grab
every time he does it
I liked your offstage stuff and your platform game, you showed a lot of eagerness in going off stage which was great, you just need to tighten that up a bit. Remember Falco doesn't have an upB hitbox.
Your platform stuff was really cool, I especially liked the uthrow->drop->uair
You do need to work on tech skill as far as I could tell you dropped through the platform to DJ back up but couldn't get it
Tim:
You need to do more sidebs. upb recovery = death
Not killing yourself. obviously.
Movement, keeping things moving, you kind of stood there then fsmashed his shield a lot.
You need to mix up your platform stuff more, start DIing away from throws [down and away at 9 degrees below the horizontal is the best DI] and stuff like that
Flaunt your utilt and it's amazingness
Don't dash attack shields
Grab more, you let George get really comfortable in shield and that's just not good
You did a lot of things well but you're playing a character with a high learning curve. You need to start being able to shine his shield and get away, either by wavedashing back or nair/dair/grab. Keep that pressure going
Other than that
Cool stuff
Keep it up
Hope I helped