Toby.
Smash Master
Zier your corrections show a lot of basic misunderstandings that make me chuckle every time you 'fix' a post.
I'm assuming that your poor improvements are simply trolling.
If you actually believe in the corrections you're supplying, do yourself a favor and brush up on your English skills. I suggest reading Strunk and White's "Elements of Style", or George Orwell's "Politics and the English Language".
In other news: you Canberra folk are all great! Come to Sydney sometime <3
I'm assuming that your poor improvements are simply trolling.
If you actually believe in the corrections you're supplying, do yourself a favor and brush up on your English skills. I suggest reading Strunk and White's "Elements of Style", or George Orwell's "Politics and the English Language".
In other news: you Canberra folk are all great! Come to Sydney sometime <3