PIT_IS_BACK
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b! Is what i choose
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Yonder
Smashboard's 1st Sole Survivor
lol there i go, changing my avatar again. A transformer like Shang Tsung, from MK...
Lugia's are my favorite pokemon so it was cool that i could transform into one in the story.
I REALLY have to get around to posting the story I made soon...
Lugia's are my favorite pokemon so it was cool that i could transform into one in the story.
I REALLY have to get around to posting the story I made soon...
SuperLinkBrothers
Smash Ace
hey, pit is back, lol
great, its always a pleasure to have new people reading!
Yonder, you mean you got another section of Smash Island up? And what in the world is a scarecrow supposed to do? Im gonna go change my avatar right now though, hold on...
Edit: There, now Im a princess, that... is going to be.... hard to put in the story... very hard...
Plus Chains is a gorrila now, and Pit Is Back, would you like to be in the story, cuz that affects certain things.
Edit (again): alright, Im going to update again, so im gonna have to update this post (again) but right now Im gonna go update The Dark Day, but Ill be back.
great, its always a pleasure to have new people reading!
Yonder, you mean you got another section of Smash Island up? And what in the world is a scarecrow supposed to do? Im gonna go change my avatar right now though, hold on...
Edit: There, now Im a princess, that... is going to be.... hard to put in the story... very hard...
Plus Chains is a gorrila now, and Pit Is Back, would you like to be in the story, cuz that affects certain things.
Edit (again): alright, Im going to update again, so im gonna have to update this post (again) but right now Im gonna go update The Dark Day, but Ill be back.
Akiak
Smash Ace
Excellent story! I vote for B! I'm the author of "The Subspace Journey" but no one ever posts
It must stink.
It must stink.SuperLinkBrothers
Smash Ace
Section 2: chapter 7: Copy Cats
woh, another person! two in one day! holy cow! what a good day
Welcome to da group Kaiak and I thought I had posted one time, a long time ago on your story, meh, ill go check.
alright, so I was thinking that I should update again, lol.
Im gonna ask again, PIT_IS_BACK and Akiak, would you like to be included in the story or not?
okay, anyways...
Section 2: Chapter 7: Copy Cats
~~~~~~
The group looked at each other wondering what they should do.
Mario coughed.
Luigi coughed.
Mario looked at Luigi strangely, wondering why he had coughed too.
Luigi looked at Mario Starangely, wondering when he would realize he was copying him.
Mario suddenley realized and said "Super Mushroom"
Luigi did the same and said "Super Mushroom"
Mario knew for sure now.
Luigi knew for sure now.
Mario-"Link is stupid"
Luigi-"Link is stupid"
Link-hey, what the heck!
Samus laughed and said "hey, what the heck!
Link-This-this isnt funny.
Samus-This-this isnt funny.
Mario-hahaha
Luigi-hahaha
Mario-Good Job Luigi, You may of just started a fight
Luigi-Good Job Luigi, You may of just started a fight
Mario-Luigi is an annoying moron
Luigi-Luigi is an annoying moron, hey, wait a minute
Mario-hahaha, you didnt copy me that time
Luigi-hahaha, you didnt copy me that time
Mario-hmmm, your good
Luigi-hmmm, you good
Mario-but I know how to get you to stop copying me
Luigi-but I know how to get you to stiop copying me
Mario-syhtogndgduigp
Luigi-syhtogndgduigp
Mario-wow, you are good at this bro
Luigi-wow, you are good at this bro
Mario-thanks
Luigi-thanks
Mario-hm
Luigi-hm
Mario-hmmmmmmm
Luigi-hmmmmmmm
Mario-hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
Luigi-hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
Mario-hah! You said one extra m!
Luigi-hah! You said one extra m!
Mario-oh yeah, Mario is so great!
Luigi-oh yeah, Mario is so great!
Mario-Mario rocks!
Luigi-Mario rocks!
Mario-Mario is so much better then Luigi
Luigi-Mario is so much better then Luigi
Mario-Because Luigi is a wimpy, scared little kid
Luigi-Because Luigi is a wimpy, scared little..... I am not!
Mario-yes you are
Luigi-am not! I am so much better then you and I am not a wimp, I am not scared of anthing, and I am not A...LITTLE...KID!!! TAKE BACK WHAT YOU SAID NOW!! OR ELSE...
Mario-Luigi is so gay! Yes Luigi is so gay!
Luigi-SHUT YOUR FACE YOU STUPID ****ING ***
Mario-woh woh, calm down Luigi
Luigi-CALM DOWN...CLAM DOWN, YOU ****ING CALM DOWN
Mario-Luigi, it was just a joke
Luigi-GRRRRR....
Luigis face was bright red. He ran up to Mario and punched him right in the face
Mario-Luigi, what-a-is the matter with yoiu?
Luigi-You! that's what the problem is! You!
Luigi kicked him in the croch and pulled out a super mushroom.
Mario-L-lUigi, what are you doing
Luigi ate the mushroom
Luigi-I THINK IT'S TIME I STAND UP FOR MYSELF!!
Luigi grew bigger
Luigi-but maybe thats not good enough!
Luigi kicked Mario who was lying on the ground in pain
Luigi pulled out of his pocket a mega-shroom and ate it
He was humongous now, he stepped on Mario, crusing him, Mario couldnt stand it and surely would have a full set of broken bones...or worse...
Samus yelled at Luigi to stop and started shooting missiles at the Huge Mario Bro.
Link-Hey, um, whats your name, Marios bro, stop it!
Luigi-Marios... BRO!! I will not stand for this, no one ever knows who I am because of this stupid brother of mine, but maybe with him out of the way, I will be able to take the spotlight
Link-Look L-Guy, just stop now
Luigi-L-GUY!! YOU ARE SOOOOO DEAD!!
Luigi stepped off the crying Mario in agony and started to try to crush Link. Samus charged up her missles and set off five at once
Luigi-OW! THAT PINCHED ME!
Luigi started using his other foot to try to crush Samus
Pit flew up
Pit-God, I leave to get Icecream for five minutes and one of our group members turns huge and tries to kill the other ones, hey, wheres Fox
Fox-I was walking Gary!
Gary-meow
Everone except Mario was attacking Luigi
~~~~~~
Meanwhile the evil group had decided that there would be no leader. Then Yonder, with his great Scarecrow hearing heard Luigi attacking the others. Yonder explained what he had herad. For some reason I was now a young girl, I was very diaapointed with myself. I flew off to take advantage of Luigi anger.
~~~~~~
A gorrila walked into Legolastoms Secret Room.
Chains-Hi, Im The reincarnation Of Chains, Im a Gorrila
Legolastom-yeah, you want to see what I look like under neath this space marine outfit and mask?
Chains-sure, let me get my camera
Legolastom took it off revealing a man with a green sword and angel-like wings.
Legolastom-so now what
Chains-well, due to a time warp, I knew that you would reveal your true self today, but due to a time warp, today is actually next month. Also due to a time warp, I got these pictures tommorow. Well, I've got to get back to the fan club two days ago, which is Friday, bye
Chains ran off
Legolastoms Powers detected Luigis Ander rising as he thought to himself, but two day ago is monday.
Legolastom called for his apprentice, Darth Vader
Legolastom-go now my apprentice
Darth Vader-Of course sir, but what do you want me to do?
Legolastom-do what you always do Vader
Darth Vader-Of Course sir
Darth Vader Left
Legolastom-now what
Chains-well sir, due to a time warp, I know that your minions are planning to gang up on you.
Legolastom-I thought you had to get back to the fan club.
Chains-I allreaddy did in three years because of a time warp. So now I can stand right by your side all the time, I;; go wherever you go, because I love you
Legolastom-what the ****
Chains-hahaha, It was a joke, I dont love you, hahaha, due to a time warp, I knew I would make you freak out
Legolastom-so, you arent standing by my side all the time
Chains-well, Ill be hanging out with you a lot, but no
Legolastom-why doesnt aanyone else come from the fan club?
Chains-due to a recent time warp....i dont know
Legolastom-huh?
Chains-due to a recent time warp... who am I?
Legolastom-huh?
Chains-due to a recent time warp, I knew that would freak you out as well, hahahaha
Legolastom-*sigh* you're really getting on my nerves
Chains-Due to a not so recent time warp ,I alrready knew that tommorow
Legolastom-Gah!
Chains-heh heh
~~~~~~
Luigi was stepping all over his friends
I came fying up as well as Darth Vader.
Link-Zelda, You're alive!
Link hugged me
Me-ew! get off of me!
I pushed him away.
Link started spazing out agin and crying behind a bush.
Darth Vader-Luigi, keep that up, your anger pushes you to the dark side!
Luigi-Mwaa ha ha
Darth Vader-Luigi, I am Your Mother
Luigi-huh?
Pit-what?
Me-ooookay then
Darth Vader-I..uh..I mean Father
Luigi-oh
Pit-ok
Me-I was worried for a second there
Mario-Father...stop it...
Darth Vader-never! Now join me Luigi, and we will rule the galaxy as Father, Son, and Legolastom!
What should Luigi do?
A. Join Me
B. Join Darth And Legolastom
C. Join Darth And Not Legolastom
D. Keep on Stepping On Mario and Ignore Darth and Me
woh, another person! two in one day! holy cow! what a good day
Welcome to da group Kaiak and I thought I had posted one time, a long time ago on your story, meh, ill go check.
alright, so I was thinking that I should update again, lol.
Im gonna ask again, PIT_IS_BACK and Akiak, would you like to be included in the story or not?
okay, anyways...
Section 2: Chapter 7: Copy Cats
~~~~~~
The group looked at each other wondering what they should do.
Mario coughed.
Luigi coughed.
Mario looked at Luigi strangely, wondering why he had coughed too.
Luigi looked at Mario Starangely, wondering when he would realize he was copying him.
Mario suddenley realized and said "Super Mushroom"
Luigi did the same and said "Super Mushroom"
Mario knew for sure now.
Luigi knew for sure now.
Mario-"Link is stupid"
Luigi-"Link is stupid"
Link-hey, what the heck!
Samus laughed and said "hey, what the heck!
Link-This-this isnt funny.
Samus-This-this isnt funny.
Mario-hahaha
Luigi-hahaha
Mario-Good Job Luigi, You may of just started a fight
Luigi-Good Job Luigi, You may of just started a fight
Mario-Luigi is an annoying moron
Luigi-Luigi is an annoying moron, hey, wait a minute
Mario-hahaha, you didnt copy me that time
Luigi-hahaha, you didnt copy me that time
Mario-hmmm, your good
Luigi-hmmm, you good
Mario-but I know how to get you to stop copying me
Luigi-but I know how to get you to stiop copying me
Mario-syhtogndgduigp
Luigi-syhtogndgduigp
Mario-wow, you are good at this bro
Luigi-wow, you are good at this bro
Mario-thanks
Luigi-thanks
Mario-hm
Luigi-hm
Mario-hmmmmmmm
Luigi-hmmmmmmm
Mario-hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
Luigi-hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
Mario-hah! You said one extra m!
Luigi-hah! You said one extra m!
Mario-oh yeah, Mario is so great!
Luigi-oh yeah, Mario is so great!
Mario-Mario rocks!
Luigi-Mario rocks!
Mario-Mario is so much better then Luigi
Luigi-Mario is so much better then Luigi
Mario-Because Luigi is a wimpy, scared little kid
Luigi-Because Luigi is a wimpy, scared little..... I am not!
Mario-yes you are
Luigi-am not! I am so much better then you and I am not a wimp, I am not scared of anthing, and I am not A...LITTLE...KID!!! TAKE BACK WHAT YOU SAID NOW!! OR ELSE...
Mario-Luigi is so gay! Yes Luigi is so gay!
Luigi-SHUT YOUR FACE YOU STUPID ****ING ***
Mario-woh woh, calm down Luigi
Luigi-CALM DOWN...CLAM DOWN, YOU ****ING CALM DOWN
Mario-Luigi, it was just a joke
Luigi-GRRRRR....
Luigis face was bright red. He ran up to Mario and punched him right in the face
Mario-Luigi, what-a-is the matter with yoiu?
Luigi-You! that's what the problem is! You!
Luigi kicked him in the croch and pulled out a super mushroom.
Mario-L-lUigi, what are you doing
Luigi ate the mushroom
Luigi-I THINK IT'S TIME I STAND UP FOR MYSELF!!
Luigi grew bigger
Luigi-but maybe thats not good enough!
Luigi kicked Mario who was lying on the ground in pain
Luigi pulled out of his pocket a mega-shroom and ate it
He was humongous now, he stepped on Mario, crusing him, Mario couldnt stand it and surely would have a full set of broken bones...or worse...
Samus yelled at Luigi to stop and started shooting missiles at the Huge Mario Bro.
Link-Hey, um, whats your name, Marios bro, stop it!
Luigi-Marios... BRO!! I will not stand for this, no one ever knows who I am because of this stupid brother of mine, but maybe with him out of the way, I will be able to take the spotlight
Link-Look L-Guy, just stop now
Luigi-L-GUY!! YOU ARE SOOOOO DEAD!!
Luigi stepped off the crying Mario in agony and started to try to crush Link. Samus charged up her missles and set off five at once
Luigi-OW! THAT PINCHED ME!
Luigi started using his other foot to try to crush Samus
Pit flew up
Pit-God, I leave to get Icecream for five minutes and one of our group members turns huge and tries to kill the other ones, hey, wheres Fox
Fox-I was walking Gary!
Gary-meow
Everone except Mario was attacking Luigi
~~~~~~
Meanwhile the evil group had decided that there would be no leader. Then Yonder, with his great Scarecrow hearing heard Luigi attacking the others. Yonder explained what he had herad. For some reason I was now a young girl, I was very diaapointed with myself. I flew off to take advantage of Luigi anger.
~~~~~~
A gorrila walked into Legolastoms Secret Room.
Chains-Hi, Im The reincarnation Of Chains, Im a Gorrila
Legolastom-yeah, you want to see what I look like under neath this space marine outfit and mask?
Chains-sure, let me get my camera
Legolastom took it off revealing a man with a green sword and angel-like wings.
Legolastom-so now what
Chains-well, due to a time warp, I knew that you would reveal your true self today, but due to a time warp, today is actually next month. Also due to a time warp, I got these pictures tommorow. Well, I've got to get back to the fan club two days ago, which is Friday, bye
Chains ran off
Legolastoms Powers detected Luigis Ander rising as he thought to himself, but two day ago is monday.
Legolastom called for his apprentice, Darth Vader
Legolastom-go now my apprentice
Darth Vader-Of course sir, but what do you want me to do?
Legolastom-do what you always do Vader
Darth Vader-Of Course sir
Darth Vader Left
Legolastom-now what
Chains-well sir, due to a time warp, I know that your minions are planning to gang up on you.
Legolastom-I thought you had to get back to the fan club.
Chains-I allreaddy did in three years because of a time warp. So now I can stand right by your side all the time, I;; go wherever you go, because I love you
Legolastom-what the ****
Chains-hahaha, It was a joke, I dont love you, hahaha, due to a time warp, I knew I would make you freak out
Legolastom-so, you arent standing by my side all the time
Chains-well, Ill be hanging out with you a lot, but no
Legolastom-why doesnt aanyone else come from the fan club?
Chains-due to a recent time warp....i dont know
Legolastom-huh?
Chains-due to a recent time warp... who am I?
Legolastom-huh?
Chains-due to a recent time warp, I knew that would freak you out as well, hahahaha
Legolastom-*sigh* you're really getting on my nerves
Chains-Due to a not so recent time warp ,I alrready knew that tommorow
Legolastom-Gah!
Chains-heh heh
~~~~~~
Luigi was stepping all over his friends
I came fying up as well as Darth Vader.
Link-Zelda, You're alive!
Link hugged me
Me-ew! get off of me!
I pushed him away.
Link started spazing out agin and crying behind a bush.
Darth Vader-Luigi, keep that up, your anger pushes you to the dark side!
Luigi-Mwaa ha ha
Darth Vader-Luigi, I am Your Mother
Luigi-huh?
Pit-what?
Me-ooookay then
Darth Vader-I..uh..I mean Father
Luigi-oh
Pit-ok
Me-I was worried for a second there
Mario-Father...stop it...
Darth Vader-never! Now join me Luigi, and we will rule the galaxy as Father, Son, and Legolastom!
What should Luigi do?
A. Join Me
B. Join Darth And Legolastom
C. Join Darth And Not Legolastom
D. Keep on Stepping On Mario and Ignore Darth and Me
Yonder
Smashboard's 1st Sole Survivor
err... my avatar's not a scarecrow.... he's a Black Mage from Final Fantasy called Vivi, so it would be nice if you can patch that up if im in the next chapter please and thank you. It's also nice for luigi to of had quite a big role in this chapter oh, and i choose D... bout time Luigi took stardom
oh, and i choose D... bout time Luigi took stardommarth-fan92
Smash Apprentice
I vote for c.
Legolastom
Smash Hero
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I chooooooooose.... B!!
And lmao at the "Not so recent" timewarp.
And lmao at the "Not so recent" timewarp.
SuperLinkBrothers
Smash Ace
Thanks for the comments and sorry about the scarecrow thing, but I dont pl;ay Final Fantasy Much and I thought it was from Legend Of Zelda Series, im so stpid, oh well.
Besides, I only have 1 Final Fantasy Game, and Im not playing it because Im hooked on Metroid Prime 3, which totally rocks, but anyways, I probably wont be able to update today, but, who knows!
Besides, I only have 1 Final Fantasy Game, and Im not playing it because Im hooked on Metroid Prime 3, which totally rocks, but anyways, I probably wont be able to update today, but, who knows!
SuperLinkBrothers
Smash Ace
Section 2: Chapter 8: 1001101011101101001010001110
Hey guys, Im back, and some how Im updating again today, lucky for you guys!
Chains-Due to a recent Time Warp, SuperLinkBrothers didnt put up the title. This isnt a good sign, who know swhat this chapter is about...
Legolastom-so, um, what now?
Chains-well sir, due to a recent time warp, I think that something very very bad is going to happen this chapter...or maybe the next one...or maybe both...
Legolastom-So...
Chains-so, be readdy.
Legolastom-ok then
Section 2: Chapter 8: 1001101011101101001010001110
Luigi looked around at Darth Vader and at Me.
luigi-Father, I shall join you and we can leave the Emporer, together, we will rule Father
Darth-of course son, now come to me
Luigi shrunk down to normal size. He walked over To Vader.
Mario-L-Luigi...dont....
Luigi-Dont Call me Luigi anymore, Im Darth Mr.L, the mysterious Darth Mr.L, Heh heh heh
Darth-Son, you need to work on your evil laugh, follow mine, Mwaa Ha Ha
Mr.L-Mwaa Ha Ha
Darth-Now we can start our own empire, well call it...the Empire!
Mr.L-that's a great name dad!
Darth-thanks
The two of them walked off.
I was now for some reason, Samus, I called to the rest of my group.
They came flying out from the hills.
Pit-Oh no!
They landed.
Me-Mwaa Ha Ha
Marth92-Mwaa Ha Ha
Yonder-Mwaa Ha Ha
Ganon-Mwaa Ha Ha
Snake-Mwaa Ha Ha
I was A Samus Aran
Marth92 was well... A Marth
Yonder was a mage
Ganon was...Ganon
Snake was...Snake
The real Marth walked up
Marth-???
Pit-???
Marth-???
Pit-???
Marth-???
Pit-I think he's starting to slowly understand English!
Marth92 ran for Marth. Their Swords Clashed.
I attacked Samus.
Wolf flew out of nowhere
Wolf started attacking Fox
Link hid in a bush
Mario hid in a bush,, wounded from Luigi
Yonder attacked Pit
Ganondorf attacked Gary
Iceman watched from the bushes, making sure nothing happened to Samus
But then Samus and I each got an encoded message, it read as the following:
10000001010100101110101001010100110101000100 10101 01111010010101001010100111101010101011101010110101 0 10 1 0 10 11 00 1010 10010101 1010010101010101010101. Neither of us understould what it meant.
As the battle raged on a large spaceship crash landed in front of the battle. Everyone stopped and looked carefully and cautionally over the ship. There were a couple clickin noises and the hatch creaked and slowly opened. A broken staircase struggingly made its way out to the ground. A Large Robotic Foot stepped out. It then slowly revealed its true self. It had three robotic eyes and a vent for a mouth. Its fists were large and bulky. It had shoulders like Samus Varia Suit and it could move its head 360 degrees! It looked at the group and started talking.
Robot-1001010101001010101100110101011010110
Gary-Meow?
Marth-???
Mario leaped out of the bushes after eating almost his entire supply of mushrooms.
Mario-Pit, do you understand it?
Pit-no, not even with my understandings of many languages. Fox, do you get it
Fox-um...no...it makes no sense to me
Pit-well.um... Sam-
Samus-nope
Pit-ah... I see... not good...
Robot-110100010101010101
Pit-hmmmm
Robot-I no understanding languages.
Pit-I...I think it..it is a robot that understands our language once we say it, is that correct mister?
Robot-It is correct
Pit-so once we say a word, he knows it!
Robot-It is correct
Pit-what is you name?
Robot-Name is 1010101
Pit-hmm...My...I am from.....
Robot-I am from 1010101
Pit-a different...Galaxy, Solar System, Universe, um.,...um...hello
Robot-Hello, My name is 10110. I am from a different Galaxy
Pit-see, it works, oh, um, lets see, yes, no
Mario-great idea! Its so cool!
Samus-Do you have something important to say to us?
Robot-Yes
Me-I am the fountain of dreams, do you know anything about me?
Robot-Yes
Mario-f...fountain of dreams
Pit-on no, holy ****
Robot-what is so ****?
Pit-He is evil!
Robot-yes, he is
Pit-matter...um..darkness.evil...good..light..help...distress...does that help mr. uh... mr.robot
Robot-I am 1010110. Yes, it is help
Pit-um....um..spaceship! heavens rain sky space
Fox-Blast blaster c=hide save safe
Mario-mushroom peach movies food
Marth-???
Robot-???
Gary-meow
Yonder-hmmmm...spell, magic, Luigi, Snake
Snake-Cool...I am great...I rule...sweet...awesome
Marth92-whipporwill...bad..hrrible...big small tiny medium
Pit-thank you please continue helping me oh, um, your welcome I me my you your them we us
Mario-babes food movies more food
Fox-hair krystal...death...dead...horror...cry...sad....depressed...
Mario-more food even more food
Marth92-Marth roy ike
Fox-Fox Falco Slippy
Wolf-Wolf Leonardo
Link-*sob* Link Zelda Tri-force
Mario-Mario Peach Daisy Wario
Samus-Samus Dark Samus ridley Mother Father Brain Evil Phazon
Gary-meow meow meow
Chains-Chains time warp due to a recent time warp I just got here, well, bye
Robot-Warp! Warp!
Pit-biuld on it?
Robot-yes, build on Warp
Ppit-lets see, build on the word Warp
Robot-yes, yes, build on the word warp
Yonder-yonder is amazing!
Me-Power um... um... worm hole...
Mario-food..milky way
Robot-way...build on way and warp
Ganon-I am pure evil
Robot-Pure! Pure! build on pure
Pit-does...oh, I know, space time continuim
Fox-Black Hole
Pit-ooh, thats good, white, red, orange, star, moon, yellow, green, dark, light, um, blue, purple, violet,medium,sun, planet, mars, hyrule
Mario-mushroom kingdom
Marth92-um, Fire Emblem
Yonder-ooh, uh, Pallet town
Me-Dreamland
Samus-Brinstar, Elysia, Bryyo, Norion, norway, kraid
Robot-Kraid, Kraid, build on Kraid
Pit-wierd
Robot-Wierd! wierd! build on wierd
Pit-s...start, stop, oh, I know, a b c d e f g h i j k m n o p q r s t u v w x y z
Robot-you...
Pit-alfabet...letter
Robot-you...letter
Mario-you skipped a letter! L
Robot-yes, you skipped the letter L
Pit-oh, yes I did...
Robot-that 101010 of 10110101110101
Pit-reminds, forget, remember
Robot-No L reminds me of a 01010101010100010100110001010
Pit-um....recreation, past time
Robot-No L reminds me of a Recreation
Samus-huh?
Mario-Song! Christmas!
Robot-Yes, no L reminds me of a Christmas Song!
Samus-Christmas, whats a christmas?
Voice-Did somebody say Christmas?
Samus-um, yes, I did, the robot did, and so did Mario
Pit-and now I said Christmas as well
Voice-great! dont worry, I, Lorenzo the..ow, ow
The Robot shot down the thing in the sky talking
Samus-good, it was getting on my nerves
Mario-I love holidays, oh I love Easter, Haloween, Haunkah, Kwaanza, Christams, Thanksgiving is good as well
Pit-STOP SINGING!
Robot-Holiday! Holiday!
Pit-um...New Years, April Fools....Election Day?
Robot-no no
Pit-hmmm...flag day?
Mario-flag day, what is flag day?
Robot-Flag Day! Flag Day! beep beep beep 10101011101010011
Me-Flag Day? thats my birthday!
Robot-FLAG DAY! FLAG DAY! BEEP BEEP BEEP, BIRTHDAY! BIRTHDAY! 10101000101010001111010100110101001010101010101011010110101001101001111010101010001110100110101011001100101011011110101001011010101010101
The Ship started sputting
A Smaller Orange Ship started to come down
Samus-My startship, its finally returned, maybe itll be able to tell us what this robot is saying!
She got in the ship.
Ship-Decoding Enabled
Robot-10011101000111000101-D ALERT! RED ALERT! SELF DESTRUCTION ENABLED! RED ALERT! RED ALERT!
Ship-Decoding Title of Chapter....
Section 2: Chapter 8: The Destruction Of The Entire Team.
Samus-oh no!
Mario-mama mia
Pit-noooooooo...
*crackle, crackle*
BOOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Three Months Later...
Legolastom-Chains, what is the situation of our ships?
Chains-Well sir, they are all readdy to launch oh mighty Lord Of Hyrule!
Legolastom-Good, good
Iceman-sir, sir, Samus has awoken from her comma, she is in Holding Bay Twelve!
Legolastom-good, good, you did a good job of protecting her!
Legolastom and Chains left
Iceman-darn, I had to say something this chapter...
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Darth-Son, there isnt much time, we must make our attack on Legolastom soon
Mr.L-I know Father.
Darth-Marth92, chop chop
Marth92-yes sir?
Darth-start the attack
Mr.L-Are you sure you want to go through with this?
Darth-uh...
How should Darth respond?
A. Yes, kill them all
B. lets wait for a month
C. Alright, I guess not.
I hope you enjoyed the newest Chapter!
Hey guys, Im back, and some how Im updating again today, lucky for you guys!
Chains-Due to a recent Time Warp, SuperLinkBrothers didnt put up the title. This isnt a good sign, who know swhat this chapter is about...
Legolastom-so, um, what now?
Chains-well sir, due to a recent time warp, I think that something very very bad is going to happen this chapter...or maybe the next one...or maybe both...
Legolastom-So...
Chains-so, be readdy.
Legolastom-ok then
Section 2: Chapter 8: 1001101011101101001010001110
Luigi looked around at Darth Vader and at Me.
luigi-Father, I shall join you and we can leave the Emporer, together, we will rule Father
Darth-of course son, now come to me
Luigi shrunk down to normal size. He walked over To Vader.
Mario-L-Luigi...dont....
Luigi-Dont Call me Luigi anymore, Im Darth Mr.L, the mysterious Darth Mr.L, Heh heh heh
Darth-Son, you need to work on your evil laugh, follow mine, Mwaa Ha Ha
Mr.L-Mwaa Ha Ha
Darth-Now we can start our own empire, well call it...the Empire!
Mr.L-that's a great name dad!
Darth-thanks
The two of them walked off.
I was now for some reason, Samus, I called to the rest of my group.
They came flying out from the hills.
Pit-Oh no!
They landed.
Me-Mwaa Ha Ha
Marth92-Mwaa Ha Ha
Yonder-Mwaa Ha Ha
Ganon-Mwaa Ha Ha
Snake-Mwaa Ha Ha
I was A Samus Aran
Marth92 was well... A Marth
Yonder was a mage
Ganon was...Ganon
Snake was...Snake
The real Marth walked up
Marth-???
Pit-???
Marth-???
Pit-???
Marth-???
Pit-I think he's starting to slowly understand English!
Marth92 ran for Marth. Their Swords Clashed.
I attacked Samus.
Wolf flew out of nowhere
Wolf started attacking Fox
Link hid in a bush
Mario hid in a bush,, wounded from Luigi
Yonder attacked Pit
Ganondorf attacked Gary
Iceman watched from the bushes, making sure nothing happened to Samus
But then Samus and I each got an encoded message, it read as the following:
10000001010100101110101001010100110101000100 10101 01111010010101001010100111101010101011101010110101 0 10 1 0 10 11 00 1010 10010101 1010010101010101010101. Neither of us understould what it meant.
As the battle raged on a large spaceship crash landed in front of the battle. Everyone stopped and looked carefully and cautionally over the ship. There were a couple clickin noises and the hatch creaked and slowly opened. A broken staircase struggingly made its way out to the ground. A Large Robotic Foot stepped out. It then slowly revealed its true self. It had three robotic eyes and a vent for a mouth. Its fists were large and bulky. It had shoulders like Samus Varia Suit and it could move its head 360 degrees! It looked at the group and started talking.
Robot-1001010101001010101100110101011010110
Gary-Meow?
Marth-???
Mario leaped out of the bushes after eating almost his entire supply of mushrooms.
Mario-Pit, do you understand it?
Pit-no, not even with my understandings of many languages. Fox, do you get it
Fox-um...no...it makes no sense to me
Pit-well.um... Sam-
Samus-nope
Pit-ah... I see... not good...
Robot-110100010101010101
Pit-hmmmm
Robot-I no understanding languages.
Pit-I...I think it..it is a robot that understands our language once we say it, is that correct mister?
Robot-It is correct
Pit-so once we say a word, he knows it!
Robot-It is correct
Pit-what is you name?
Robot-Name is 1010101
Pit-hmm...My...I am from.....
Robot-I am from 1010101
Pit-a different...Galaxy, Solar System, Universe, um.,...um...hello
Robot-Hello, My name is 10110. I am from a different Galaxy
Pit-see, it works, oh, um, lets see, yes, no
Mario-great idea! Its so cool!
Samus-Do you have something important to say to us?
Robot-Yes
Me-I am the fountain of dreams, do you know anything about me?
Robot-Yes
Mario-f...fountain of dreams
Pit-on no, holy ****
Robot-what is so ****?
Pit-He is evil!
Robot-yes, he is
Pit-matter...um..darkness.evil...good..light..help...distress...does that help mr. uh... mr.robot
Robot-I am 1010110. Yes, it is help
Pit-um....um..spaceship! heavens rain sky space
Fox-Blast blaster c=hide save safe
Mario-mushroom peach movies food
Marth-???
Robot-???
Gary-meow
Yonder-hmmmm...spell, magic, Luigi, Snake
Snake-Cool...I am great...I rule...sweet...awesome
Marth92-whipporwill...bad..hrrible...big small tiny medium
Pit-thank you please continue helping me oh, um, your welcome I me my you your them we us
Mario-babes food movies more food
Fox-hair krystal...death...dead...horror...cry...sad....depressed...
Mario-more food even more food
Marth92-Marth roy ike
Fox-Fox Falco Slippy
Wolf-Wolf Leonardo
Link-*sob* Link Zelda Tri-force
Mario-Mario Peach Daisy Wario
Samus-Samus Dark Samus ridley Mother Father Brain Evil Phazon
Gary-meow meow meow
Chains-Chains time warp due to a recent time warp I just got here, well, bye
Robot-Warp! Warp!
Pit-biuld on it?
Robot-yes, build on Warp
Ppit-lets see, build on the word Warp
Robot-yes, yes, build on the word warp
Yonder-yonder is amazing!
Me-Power um... um... worm hole...
Mario-food..milky way
Robot-way...build on way and warp
Ganon-I am pure evil
Robot-Pure! Pure! build on pure
Pit-does...oh, I know, space time continuim
Fox-Black Hole
Pit-ooh, thats good, white, red, orange, star, moon, yellow, green, dark, light, um, blue, purple, violet,medium,sun, planet, mars, hyrule
Mario-mushroom kingdom
Marth92-um, Fire Emblem
Yonder-ooh, uh, Pallet town
Me-Dreamland
Samus-Brinstar, Elysia, Bryyo, Norion, norway, kraid
Robot-Kraid, Kraid, build on Kraid
Pit-wierd
Robot-Wierd! wierd! build on wierd
Pit-s...start, stop, oh, I know, a b c d e f g h i j k m n o p q r s t u v w x y z
Robot-you...
Pit-alfabet...letter
Robot-you...letter
Mario-you skipped a letter! L
Robot-yes, you skipped the letter L
Pit-oh, yes I did...
Robot-that 101010 of 10110101110101
Pit-reminds, forget, remember
Robot-No L reminds me of a 01010101010100010100110001010
Pit-um....recreation, past time
Robot-No L reminds me of a Recreation
Samus-huh?
Mario-Song! Christmas!
Robot-Yes, no L reminds me of a Christmas Song!
Samus-Christmas, whats a christmas?
Voice-Did somebody say Christmas?
Samus-um, yes, I did, the robot did, and so did Mario
Pit-and now I said Christmas as well
Voice-great! dont worry, I, Lorenzo the..ow, ow
The Robot shot down the thing in the sky talking
Samus-good, it was getting on my nerves
Mario-I love holidays, oh I love Easter, Haloween, Haunkah, Kwaanza, Christams, Thanksgiving is good as well
Pit-STOP SINGING!
Robot-Holiday! Holiday!
Pit-um...New Years, April Fools....Election Day?
Robot-no no
Pit-hmmm...flag day?
Mario-flag day, what is flag day?
Robot-Flag Day! Flag Day! beep beep beep 10101011101010011
Me-Flag Day? thats my birthday!
Robot-FLAG DAY! FLAG DAY! BEEP BEEP BEEP, BIRTHDAY! BIRTHDAY! 10101000101010001111010100110101001010101010101011010110101001101001111010101010001110100110101011001100101011011110101001011010101010101
The Ship started sputting
A Smaller Orange Ship started to come down
Samus-My startship, its finally returned, maybe itll be able to tell us what this robot is saying!
She got in the ship.
Ship-Decoding Enabled
Robot-10011101000111000101-D ALERT! RED ALERT! SELF DESTRUCTION ENABLED! RED ALERT! RED ALERT!
Ship-Decoding Title of Chapter....
Section 2: Chapter 8: The Destruction Of The Entire Team.
Samus-oh no!
Mario-mama mia
Pit-noooooooo...
*crackle, crackle*
BOOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~~~~~~
Three Months Later...
Legolastom-Chains, what is the situation of our ships?
Chains-Well sir, they are all readdy to launch oh mighty Lord Of Hyrule!
Legolastom-Good, good
Iceman-sir, sir, Samus has awoken from her comma, she is in Holding Bay Twelve!
Legolastom-good, good, you did a good job of protecting her!
Legolastom and Chains left
Iceman-darn, I had to say something this chapter...
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Darth-Son, there isnt much time, we must make our attack on Legolastom soon
Mr.L-I know Father.
Darth-Marth92, chop chop
Marth92-yes sir?
Darth-start the attack
Mr.L-Are you sure you want to go through with this?
Darth-uh...
How should Darth respond?
A. Yes, kill them all
B. lets wait for a month
C. Alright, I guess not.
I hope you enjoyed the newest Chapter!
SuperLinkBrothers
Smash Ace
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marth-fan92
Smash Apprentice
I vote for A.
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Section 2: Chapter 9: The Split Team: Part A
Hey, im back!
I decided to have it so that the next couple chapters do have multiple choice!
"The Split Team" will take course over 12 chapters!
Here's The Extra Good News, Chapter 10 is here... right now!
Section 2: Chapter 9: The Split Team: Part A
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The Split Team: Part A: Plumbing Problems
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Mario-Im-a-trying to get your water back to working Mr. uh...
Mrs. Ruckle-Mr. Ruckle, Call me Mr. Ruckle
Mario-alright Mr.Ruckle, so, can you please stop-a-bothering-a-me?
Mrs.Ruckle-well sorry, Its not my fault that Plumbing Heaven doesnt have correct plumbing systems.
Mario-Yeah, I-a-know
Phone-ring ring ring
Mrs.Ruckle-be right back Mario
Mario-finally, some peace and quite
Mrs.Ruckle-yes, yes, Ill get him right away
Mario-what a good for nothing los-
Mrs.Ruckle-Its for you Mr.Mario
Mario-odd
Mario rushed for the phone. He picked it up
Mario-hello
Tom Nook-Hi there, is this Mario of the Mushroom Kingdom?
Mario-yes, who is this?
Tom-This is Tom Nook from the purchasing department.
Mario-ok, well what do you want
Tom-I have been instructed to alert you that you now take second place in best plumber in all heavens!
Mario-mama mia
Tom-So you'll have to challenge the Champ in a plumbing duel
Mario-mama mia!
Tom-He wants to meet you down-town in twenty minutes at the Boarshead Inn
Mario-mama mia!
Tom-well, see you there!
Mario-oh-a-my, wait!
The phone was hung up
Mario hung up
Mario-Mr.Ruckle, it-a-was a pleasure to clean your pipes, but I must get-a-going
Mrs.Ruckle-what, no, no, you didnt do a good job
Mario-sorry, im-a-second best, Ive got to-a-get going!
Mrs.Ruckle-Fine, Ill get the the third best to clean my pipes.
Mario-ok bye
Mrs.Ruckle-Ill never forget you Mario
Mario*walking away* ok then, I-a-got to go
Mario rushed away
Mrs.Mario-*sigh*
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18 minutes later...
Champ-where is that punk?
Tom-hes sure to come in soon
Champ-his time is almost up
1 minute later...
Champ-haha, Im going to win by default
Tom-That's not good sportsman ship sir
Champ-ah well
Tom-if he doesnt come I wont be able to advertise any of my products
Champ-oh, dont worry, when they're cheering for me advertise a product or two
Tom-I wanted to get more in then that
Champ-it doesnt matter, everyone knows that Im gonna win
10
9
8
7
6
5
4
3
2
1
3/4
1/2
1/4
Mario skidded trough the door just at the last milli-second!
Mario-phew, just made it-a-in time
Champ-grrrrr
Mario-Mama Mia, thats the champ!
Tom-dont worry, I have 0 faith in ya kid
Mario-why th- hey!
Tom-what, everyone knows you arent gonna win
Tom walked up to the large pedastool hanging way over the arena
Tom-Welcome one and all to the biggest match of the millenium!
Crowd-woooo!
Tom-Our three billion year champ is facing against the newbie Mario who just came in three months ago by being blown up by a large robot!
Crowd-ooh! ahh!
Tom-Speaking of explosions, you can try out our newest product, the hylian shield!
Crowd-ooh! ahh!
Tom-Great new metals will protect you from any dangers, including fires, explosions, and electrical failures in your plumbing! note: will not do that last one You can get this memorial shield for only 29.99$ plus 97467306592$ shipping & handling!
Crowd-ooh! ahh!
Tom-Our three billion year champ and Mario from the Mushroom Kingdom will be undergoing a series of tests involving different plumbing situations!
Crowd-ooh! ahh!
Tom-the first will to clean the pipes that our beuatiful assistants are bringing in to the arena now!
Crowd-ooh! ahh!
Tom-each opponet must clean three pipes, the first to accomplish this will win! There will be three tests, and the one that wins two of them will be the winner!
Crowd-ooh! ahh!
Six women came in with large pipes. They set them down. The women left.
Mario ran up to his three. The champ did so as well.
Another woman came out with a cloth for each of them. She handed them a cloth.
Tom-And the cloths they are now holding are made of genuine Racoon Company Cloth. You to can be like the stars and have your very own rag. Racoon cloth rags only cost 2$! In 945906782935701567 payments!
Crowd-ooh! ahh!
The bell dinged.
Mario licked his lips and started washing.
The champ got one done almost immediatley.
Mario finished his first.
Mario-phewee, thats some good cleaning there!
The champ seemed to not even care, he knew he would win. He sat there while Mario finished his second. The champ finished his second i a matter of seconds. Mario was half way down his last one when The Champion finished his.
Mario wwas tired out of his mind.
The Champ didnt even break a sweat.
Tom-And the Champion is the winner! For our next contest each contestant must fix the pipes our assistants are bringing out now. They must screw screws into holes on the inside and out!
Crowd-ooh! ahh!
Champ-*thinking to himself* oh no, this is wat Im worst at.
Mario quickly finished his first, and second in the time it took the Champ to do one. The champ was halfway done his third when Mario finished.
Tom-simply amazing! The best part is that you can buy these limited edition pipes for only 94670156790167916557460561509847596781397693815698573850163165897314865$ at the Nook-n-Go! So, for our second match, Mario wins!
Crowd-ooh! ahh!
Tom-for our final event, the tie breaker, Mario and The Champion must fight, in a match to the finish!
Mario-*gulp*
Mario looked at the large ugly beast facing him.
Mario-*gulp*
Champion-hahahaha
Tom-So, will The Champ pummel Mario or will the puny Mario show his glory and destroy The Champ?
The Champ-Enough! stop calling me the champ, call me by name, for I am tyagerno
Tom-Tyagerno(well just call him Ty from now on) verses Mario, our wonderful assistants that you can go to bed with for only 9357467982769276$ a night are brining out their weapons. Each contestant will get a large staff and an extra weapon of their choice!
The asistants brought out the nicely decorated staffs.
Tom-You can even buy a staff just like them for the low low price of 987654321$, but wait, Ill cut the price down to only 912345678$ plus 9367407516897 shipping & handiling with the discounted price. So Mario, what is your weapon choice?
Mario-I want-a-beam sword!
Tom-very well, and Ty?
Ty-Same here!
Tom-very well, assistants, bring out their beam swords!
They got their beam sowrds.
Ty cut Marios Staff in half and accidentley did the same to his...
Star Wars music started as their beam swords clashed.
Slash Slas Slah, Left right left
Mario leaped over Ty and stabbed him in the back
Mario-mama mia, that was a quick fight!
Ty fell to the ground
The disk jockeys accidentley switched the music to Star Wars Cantina music
The Crowd started dancing
Tom was amazed
Tom-...and Mario is the winner!
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Please note, I will put the votes in from last time into the next chapter. And the multiple choice for this one will be for Chapter 11!
Should Pit be excepted as leader of The Angels Temple?
A.Yes
B.No
C.Yes, for one minute
D. Yes, for one month
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Tom-ok Mario, that was a test
Large doors swuing over the arena so no one could see anything going on inside or hear anything going on inside.
Tom walked up to Mario
Tom-I'd like to congratulate you, I didnt think you could do it! This was a test for you as I said before though. A test to see if you could be excepted back to living.
Mario-mama mia
Tom-You and the others in your gang have been excepted to go ack to Earth. All of you must pass a test and then meet up at The Tri-Arena. Afterwards, anyone that has gotten there and wants to go back will head down to the Angels Temple to be sent back to Hyrule. I must warn you though, there will be great changes for you when you get back and it might be quite devestating! This alsomight not be happening for quite some time depending on how things work out.
Mario-this-a-is great!
Tom-Im glad you think so, Im sure you're aware that Samus Aran escaped the explosion due to a man who works for Legolastom, correct
Mario-I heard about it breifly, but I have no idea why
Tom-It is part of his plan. Although, you dont have to worry about that evil team of characters, they are all dead and are at, well, the opposite of heaven...
Mario-ah, I see
Tom-about your brother, he is working with your father, they are apparentley planing a full scale invasion on Legolastom, so who knows, maybe the time you are back, one of them will be gone.
Mario-mama mia, so much information
Tom-yes, well, are there any questions before you make your way to Tri-Arena?
Mario-oh my, I must know why I have this-a-tri-force on my hand, what does it mean?
Tom-It is the fourth, and thought to be lost, Tri-Force, It is what holds the Tri-foce together and balances it. Without it, it wouldnt be balanced. The five tri-forces are Courage, Wisdom, Power, Balance, and Gravity
Mario-five?
Tom-yeah, sure, Im the fifth, look
He held out his paw, it had a sharpie makered on Triangle
Mario-what....is this some kind of joke?
Tom-haha, yes, a simple joke, nothing mean, dont worry, there are only four tri-forces, but I do have control over Gravity on the plumbing heaven.
Mario-cool
Tom-it is, but back to the tri-force, although most think there are only three tri-forces, there are four. The fourth was lost so long ago once Ganondorf stole his piece of the tri-force long, long ago, it unblanced things and the hero with the baance tri-force lost his power. You are a descendant from that man. Slowly over time, people symbolized the tri-force as only three, with a whole inbetween, but we were unaware that Balance still was very much around.
Mario-woh
Tom-can I continue?
Mario-yes
Tom-good, well, I guessim pretty much finished, there is still more on the subject, but I dont feel like thoroughly discussing it and wasting time you could be traveling to the Tri-Arena
Mario-one more question
Tom-yes
Mario-Why is it the tri-force if there are four
Tom-same reason the balance triangle was lost over time, people forgot about it, it is actually meant to be the called the Four Forces of Light and Darkness, but its better this way, its a much shorter name!
Mario-oh, another question
Tom-get going!
Mario-ok...
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Please comment and criticise and all that...eh whatever...
I hope you enjoyed it.
Edit: Legolastom, I didnt say they wer going to kill them all, Luigi is going to say that.
Yes they are going to attempt to killl them all, but you wont know whether they do or not untill tommorow(or later if I dont update tommorow)
Hey, im back!
I decided to have it so that the next couple chapters do have multiple choice!
"The Split Team" will take course over 12 chapters!
Here's The Extra Good News, Chapter 10 is here... right now!
Section 2: Chapter 9: The Split Team: Part A
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The Split Team: Part A: Plumbing Problems
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Mario-Im-a-trying to get your water back to working Mr. uh...
Mrs. Ruckle-Mr. Ruckle, Call me Mr. Ruckle
Mario-alright Mr.Ruckle, so, can you please stop-a-bothering-a-me?
Mrs.Ruckle-well sorry, Its not my fault that Plumbing Heaven doesnt have correct plumbing systems.
Mario-Yeah, I-a-know
Phone-ring ring ring
Mrs.Ruckle-be right back Mario
Mario-finally, some peace and quite
Mrs.Ruckle-yes, yes, Ill get him right away
Mario-what a good for nothing los-
Mrs.Ruckle-Its for you Mr.Mario
Mario-odd
Mario rushed for the phone. He picked it up
Mario-hello
Tom Nook-Hi there, is this Mario of the Mushroom Kingdom?
Mario-yes, who is this?
Tom-This is Tom Nook from the purchasing department.
Mario-ok, well what do you want
Tom-I have been instructed to alert you that you now take second place in best plumber in all heavens!
Mario-mama mia
Tom-So you'll have to challenge the Champ in a plumbing duel
Mario-mama mia!
Tom-He wants to meet you down-town in twenty minutes at the Boarshead Inn
Mario-mama mia!
Tom-well, see you there!
Mario-oh-a-my, wait!
The phone was hung up
Mario hung up
Mario-Mr.Ruckle, it-a-was a pleasure to clean your pipes, but I must get-a-going
Mrs.Ruckle-what, no, no, you didnt do a good job
Mario-sorry, im-a-second best, Ive got to-a-get going!
Mrs.Ruckle-Fine, Ill get the the third best to clean my pipes.
Mario-ok bye
Mrs.Ruckle-Ill never forget you Mario
Mario*walking away* ok then, I-a-got to go
Mario rushed away
Mrs.Mario-*sigh*
~~~~~~
18 minutes later...
Champ-where is that punk?
Tom-hes sure to come in soon
Champ-his time is almost up
1 minute later...
Champ-haha, Im going to win by default
Tom-That's not good sportsman ship sir
Champ-ah well
Tom-if he doesnt come I wont be able to advertise any of my products
Champ-oh, dont worry, when they're cheering for me advertise a product or two
Tom-I wanted to get more in then that
Champ-it doesnt matter, everyone knows that Im gonna win
10
9
8
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6
5
4
3
2
1
3/4
1/2
1/4
Mario skidded trough the door just at the last milli-second!
Mario-phew, just made it-a-in time
Champ-grrrrr
Mario-Mama Mia, thats the champ!
Tom-dont worry, I have 0 faith in ya kid
Mario-why th- hey!
Tom-what, everyone knows you arent gonna win
Tom walked up to the large pedastool hanging way over the arena
Tom-Welcome one and all to the biggest match of the millenium!
Crowd-woooo!
Tom-Our three billion year champ is facing against the newbie Mario who just came in three months ago by being blown up by a large robot!
Crowd-ooh! ahh!
Tom-Speaking of explosions, you can try out our newest product, the hylian shield!
Crowd-ooh! ahh!
Tom-Great new metals will protect you from any dangers, including fires, explosions, and electrical failures in your plumbing! note: will not do that last one You can get this memorial shield for only 29.99$ plus 97467306592$ shipping & handling!
Crowd-ooh! ahh!
Tom-Our three billion year champ and Mario from the Mushroom Kingdom will be undergoing a series of tests involving different plumbing situations!
Crowd-ooh! ahh!
Tom-the first will to clean the pipes that our beuatiful assistants are bringing in to the arena now!
Crowd-ooh! ahh!
Tom-each opponet must clean three pipes, the first to accomplish this will win! There will be three tests, and the one that wins two of them will be the winner!
Crowd-ooh! ahh!
Six women came in with large pipes. They set them down. The women left.
Mario ran up to his three. The champ did so as well.
Another woman came out with a cloth for each of them. She handed them a cloth.
Tom-And the cloths they are now holding are made of genuine Racoon Company Cloth. You to can be like the stars and have your very own rag. Racoon cloth rags only cost 2$! In 945906782935701567 payments!
Crowd-ooh! ahh!
The bell dinged.
Mario licked his lips and started washing.
The champ got one done almost immediatley.
Mario finished his first.
Mario-phewee, thats some good cleaning there!
The champ seemed to not even care, he knew he would win. He sat there while Mario finished his second. The champ finished his second i a matter of seconds. Mario was half way down his last one when The Champion finished his.
Mario wwas tired out of his mind.
The Champ didnt even break a sweat.
Tom-And the Champion is the winner! For our next contest each contestant must fix the pipes our assistants are bringing out now. They must screw screws into holes on the inside and out!
Crowd-ooh! ahh!
Champ-*thinking to himself* oh no, this is wat Im worst at.
Mario quickly finished his first, and second in the time it took the Champ to do one. The champ was halfway done his third when Mario finished.
Tom-simply amazing! The best part is that you can buy these limited edition pipes for only 94670156790167916557460561509847596781397693815698573850163165897314865$ at the Nook-n-Go! So, for our second match, Mario wins!
Crowd-ooh! ahh!
Tom-for our final event, the tie breaker, Mario and The Champion must fight, in a match to the finish!
Mario-*gulp*
Mario looked at the large ugly beast facing him.
Mario-*gulp*
Champion-hahahaha
Tom-So, will The Champ pummel Mario or will the puny Mario show his glory and destroy The Champ?
The Champ-Enough! stop calling me the champ, call me by name, for I am tyagerno
Tom-Tyagerno(well just call him Ty from now on) verses Mario, our wonderful assistants that you can go to bed with for only 9357467982769276$ a night are brining out their weapons. Each contestant will get a large staff and an extra weapon of their choice!
The asistants brought out the nicely decorated staffs.
Tom-You can even buy a staff just like them for the low low price of 987654321$, but wait, Ill cut the price down to only 912345678$ plus 9367407516897 shipping & handiling with the discounted price. So Mario, what is your weapon choice?
Mario-I want-a-beam sword!
Tom-very well, and Ty?
Ty-Same here!
Tom-very well, assistants, bring out their beam swords!
They got their beam sowrds.
Ty cut Marios Staff in half and accidentley did the same to his...
Star Wars music started as their beam swords clashed.
Slash Slas Slah, Left right left
Mario leaped over Ty and stabbed him in the back
Mario-mama mia, that was a quick fight!
Ty fell to the ground
The disk jockeys accidentley switched the music to Star Wars Cantina music
The Crowd started dancing
Tom was amazed
Tom-...and Mario is the winner!
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Please note, I will put the votes in from last time into the next chapter. And the multiple choice for this one will be for Chapter 11!
Should Pit be excepted as leader of The Angels Temple?
A.Yes
B.No
C.Yes, for one minute
D. Yes, for one month
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Tom-ok Mario, that was a test
Large doors swuing over the arena so no one could see anything going on inside or hear anything going on inside.
Tom walked up to Mario
Tom-I'd like to congratulate you, I didnt think you could do it! This was a test for you as I said before though. A test to see if you could be excepted back to living.
Mario-mama mia
Tom-You and the others in your gang have been excepted to go ack to Earth. All of you must pass a test and then meet up at The Tri-Arena. Afterwards, anyone that has gotten there and wants to go back will head down to the Angels Temple to be sent back to Hyrule. I must warn you though, there will be great changes for you when you get back and it might be quite devestating! This alsomight not be happening for quite some time depending on how things work out.
Mario-this-a-is great!
Tom-Im glad you think so, Im sure you're aware that Samus Aran escaped the explosion due to a man who works for Legolastom, correct
Mario-I heard about it breifly, but I have no idea why
Tom-It is part of his plan. Although, you dont have to worry about that evil team of characters, they are all dead and are at, well, the opposite of heaven...
Mario-ah, I see
Tom-about your brother, he is working with your father, they are apparentley planing a full scale invasion on Legolastom, so who knows, maybe the time you are back, one of them will be gone.
Mario-mama mia, so much information
Tom-yes, well, are there any questions before you make your way to Tri-Arena?
Mario-oh my, I must know why I have this-a-tri-force on my hand, what does it mean?
Tom-It is the fourth, and thought to be lost, Tri-Force, It is what holds the Tri-foce together and balances it. Without it, it wouldnt be balanced. The five tri-forces are Courage, Wisdom, Power, Balance, and Gravity
Mario-five?
Tom-yeah, sure, Im the fifth, look
He held out his paw, it had a sharpie makered on Triangle
Mario-what....is this some kind of joke?
Tom-haha, yes, a simple joke, nothing mean, dont worry, there are only four tri-forces, but I do have control over Gravity on the plumbing heaven.
Mario-cool
Tom-it is, but back to the tri-force, although most think there are only three tri-forces, there are four. The fourth was lost so long ago once Ganondorf stole his piece of the tri-force long, long ago, it unblanced things and the hero with the baance tri-force lost his power. You are a descendant from that man. Slowly over time, people symbolized the tri-force as only three, with a whole inbetween, but we were unaware that Balance still was very much around.
Mario-woh
Tom-can I continue?
Mario-yes
Tom-good, well, I guessim pretty much finished, there is still more on the subject, but I dont feel like thoroughly discussing it and wasting time you could be traveling to the Tri-Arena
Mario-one more question
Tom-yes
Mario-Why is it the tri-force if there are four
Tom-same reason the balance triangle was lost over time, people forgot about it, it is actually meant to be the called the Four Forces of Light and Darkness, but its better this way, its a much shorter name!
Mario-oh, another question
Tom-get going!
Mario-ok...
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Please comment and criticise and all that...eh whatever...
I hope you enjoyed it.
Edit: Legolastom, I didnt say they wer going to kill them all, Luigi is going to say that.
Yes they are going to attempt to killl them all, but you wont know whether they do or not untill tommorow(or later if I dont update tommorow)
Legolastom
Smash Hero
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Hmph. The overused 4th Triforce thingy... but good idea on it being of balance.
Anyways I vote C... because he will be... until I return *shakes fist*
Anyways I vote C... because he will be... until I return *shakes fist*
SuperLinkBrothers
Smash Ace
XD, you arent leader of the Angles Temple, hahahahahahahahahahahaahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha, you crack me up, Legolastom, leader of the Angles Temple, hahahahahahahahahahahaahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha, you are hilarious! ok, no really, um, thanks for the comment about Balance, and um, I wanted everyone to fully understand why Mario has a tri-force on his hand, so...yeah...
alright, hope somebody else posts as well
alright, hope somebody else posts
as wellLegolastom
Smash Hero
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Yhea I know.
But AFTER I raid the temple and declare myself leader then I will be.
But AFTER I raid the temple and declare myself leader then I will be.
SuperLinkBrothers
Smash Ace
Its in heaven, so, um, you'll have to die before doing that, but ok, first you're going to die...
SuperLinkBrothers
Smash Ace
One vote for B and one vote for C, keep it coming
SuperLinkBrothers
Smash Ace
two votes for C, one for B.
SuperLinkBrothers
Smash Ace
wooo, it seems C is going to win
Three Cs and One B
Three Cs and One B
Blackadder
Smash Master
Yo, SLB.
I've started reading your story, but I gotta go now.
This is just a heads up to say I'll be finishing reading your story tonight, with any luck, so hold tight!
(I should note that I don't pretend to be an expert at this shiz, but I'll try my best. I'm sure Demon's review will be at least 5672841 times better than mine will be. And I didn't even carry the 1.
)
Oh, and also, your sig bothers me, it looks messy. You don't have to use this, but it looks neater:
Nintendo Adventure: Starring Mario -click to go to a nintendo character story starring Mario where YOU decide what happens: Now over 1,950 views!
The Dark Day - click for my newest multiple choice story, The Dark Day!
I have to much time on my- Crap, I'm late! Gotta go!
I've started reading your story, but I gotta go now.
This is just a heads up to say I'll be finishing reading your story tonight, with any luck, so hold tight!
(I should note that I don't pretend to be an expert at this shiz, but I'll try my best. I'm sure Demon's review will be at least 5672841 times better than mine will be. And I didn't even carry the 1.
)Oh, and also, your sig bothers me, it looks messy. You don't have to use this, but it looks neater:
Nintendo Adventure: Starring Mario -click to go to a nintendo character story starring Mario where YOU decide what happens: Now over 1,950 views!
The Dark Day - click for my newest multiple choice story, The Dark Day!
I have to much time on my- Crap, I'm late! Gotta go!
SuperLinkBrothers
Smash Ace
I wish I could do that but Im a stupid moron and dont know how to make an URL that has different words then the actual URL
Take for example
I know how to do ]http://website.com
But I don't know how to do Website and have the same thing happen when you click on it, thanks for the idea though.
Also, what was up with the I dont have any time on my hands? jus' wondering
Take for example
I know how to do ]http://website.com
But I don't know how to do Website and have the same thing happen when you click on it, thanks for the idea though.
Also, what was up with the I dont have any time on my hands? jus' wondering
Blackadder
Smash Master
Oh, you can easily just quote what I said there and copy/paste it into your sig. XD
The "Time on my" thing was when I relised I had to go. I should have made it clearer, but I kinda typed that up, saw the time, cut it short, and nicked off.
EDIT:
I just finished my review for this story. I'll be getting the one for your other tale in tommorow, I assume.
The "Time on my" thing was when I relised I had to go. I should have made it clearer, but I kinda typed that up, saw the time, cut it short, and nicked off.
EDIT:
I just finished my review for this story. I'll be getting the one for your other tale in tommorow, I assume.
Blackadder
Smash Master
Slackbladder's In-depth
Hey SLB, I’m done reading your story!
I should really just stretch now; I don’t pretend to be a professional. I’m not a legendary poet, I’m not going to be serving up the best darn tips you’ve ever heard in your life.
I’d recommend getting Scav or Matt or Virg to scan over yours if you want a really sweet and sexy opinion. But I’ll try my best here. Demon’s review will be the one to look out for though.
Anyways, without further epic a due, I give ye:
“Slackbladder’s totally ZOMG review for SLB’s story of Uber”
First off, I’d just like to start off with my gripes of the story, what could be improved, and some just plain out nitpicks.
It’s really manly the banal fighting/action/this is wots happening parts of your story. I think there’s an old saying with writing… “Show don’t tell”.
Lines such as “DK grunted and Daisy sobbed. E.Mario then started to twitch” come of as to straight forward and dull. Split second rewrite from me now would be summat like
“DK began to grunt heavily over Daisy’s neck, while she lay and sobbed at the ground. E. Mario began to violent twitch. His left arm shook sporadically while his legs seemed to move to more of a beat…”
I’m really not happy with that, it’s shocking…ugh. But I hope you get my badly made point of trying to beef up your writing a bit. Try and add flare to it. Check out other stories like yours, and see how those writers try and make the writing more interesting.
You don’t need to rush through and jump in like that all the time.
Another thing that bugs me deeply is the lack of emotion in the story. Now, when I say “Emotion” I don’t mean that the story needs epic moments of love, and crying women and their homeless children, I mean that I don’t feel anything from your characters.
You switch back and forth between showing emotions, actually. Lines like “Dude, You're starting to creep me out, oh, and thanks for killing Luigi” could be better written as
“Dude, you’re uh, startin’ to me out…
Oh, and thanks for helping me kill Luigi.”
I didn’t change much, but I tried to make the latter part of the line sound like Mario was thanking Link in a slightly mundane way. I can change that to a far happier and estatic way like this:
“Dude, you’re uh, startin’ to me out…
Oh, and thanks for helping me kill Luigi!”
All I did was add an exclamation mark, but see how it can add so much more emotion?
Another line that’s a bit iffy is
“It doesn't matter, he was my brother, and plus, I absolutely despised him, mama mia, he was so mean to-a-me”
Which can be better done as:
“It doesn't matter, he WAS just my brother, and plus, I absolutely despised him! Mama- mia, he was so mean to-ah-me…”
Again, I didn’t alter much of the line, just added a bit here and there. If I did it correctly, the “WAS” should come off as “Well, he WAS a ****er,” and the “…” at the end should give the reader a feel Mario was slightly reminiscing, or trailing off.
If I did it right, that is!
My last real gripe is a simple one to fix. Write your stories up in Microsoft Word, and spell and Grammar check ‘em. A lot of mistakes can be found in your story. I noticed many “They’re was no gun…” or “I cant be held responsible!”
Very subtle grammar errors, but they’re there none the less.
Oh, and Mario’s jet-pack-pal in Sunshine is called “Fludd” … not “Fluud”. XD
But those are just the bad points. Don’t feel too downhearted, as I DO have some nice things to say as well! Have no fear!
One thing that stood out to me was the often admittedly funny Comic Relief you had going. While some of it (Such as Fawful’s lines) were almost taken right out of the games, some of the little one liners and side jokes were actually pretty funny. But it’s good that you keep them to a relative minimum, so that the story isn’t solely a romp through lulz-land. (That’s not a bad thing, but I don’t think you’re aiming for that type of story!)
Keep that up.
Another good point is that, the story, despite what you may think from me, isn’t that awful. It has some clichés, but many stories do. And considering this is an early adventure into the creative world for you, it’s pretty sturdy. You have a nice fan-base going on, I can’t see any glaring plot tumours, the characters are a little undeveloped, but maintain their basic personalities. You really do have talent. As a reviewer once said to me about my Story in its early days “I sense talent in you; if I didn’t, I would just be writing “Good j0b d00d” instead of writing a review” so you’re doing something right.
I’d say the decent foundation of the plot is because you have real determination. It’s very clear you do enjoy writing, (Even if your profile doesn’t even mention it!) and have a real love for this story. I doubt I’ll have to tell you to try and not let this tale go down the toilet, as I don’t think it’s in danger of that.
And that’s that. I know much of this review seems negative, but I really would like to see you improve for the best.
Remember:
- Show, don’t tell.
- Give characters emotion when writing what they say, think, and feel.
- Use spell/Grammar check. On that note, when characters are talking, you change how that works often, Sometimes it’s like a script, other times it’s tradition dialogue other times you just jump in to what they say with not forewarning, and it sounds like were not even reading dialogue.
Hey SLB, I’m done reading your story!
I should really just stretch now; I don’t pretend to be a professional. I’m not a legendary poet, I’m not going to be serving up the best darn tips you’ve ever heard in your life.
I’d recommend getting Scav or Matt or Virg to scan over yours if you want a really sweet and sexy opinion. But I’ll try my best here. Demon’s review will be the one to look out for though.
Anyways, without further epic a due, I give ye:
“Slackbladder’s totally ZOMG review for SLB’s story of Uber”
First off, I’d just like to start off with my gripes of the story, what could be improved, and some just plain out nitpicks.
It’s these parts of the story that my eyes really just ended up skimming right over and left me with nothing taken in to think of.
It’s really manly the banal fighting/action/this is wots happening parts of your story. I think there’s an old saying with writing… “Show don’t tell”.
Lines such as “DK grunted and Daisy sobbed. E.Mario then started to twitch” come of as to straight forward and dull. Split second rewrite from me now would be summat like
“DK began to grunt heavily over Daisy’s neck, while she lay and sobbed at the ground. E. Mario began to violent twitch. His left arm shook sporadically while his legs seemed to move to more of a beat…”
I’m really not happy with that, it’s shocking…ugh. But I hope you get my badly made point of trying to beef up your writing a bit. Try and add flare to it. Check out other stories like yours, and see how those writers try and make the writing more interesting.
You don’t need to rush through and jump in like that all the time.
Another thing that bugs me deeply is the lack of emotion in the story. Now, when I say “Emotion” I don’t mean that the story needs epic moments of love, and crying women and their homeless children, I mean that I don’t feel anything from your characters.
Read that. Now, I’m sure you know exactly what tone of voice Mario is using, and exactly what emotions he is conveying. But I., the random reader, don’t.
You switch back and forth between showing emotions, actually. Lines like “Dude, You're starting to creep me out, oh, and thanks for killing Luigi” could be better written as
“Dude, you’re uh, startin’ to me out…
Oh, and thanks for helping me kill Luigi.”
I didn’t change much, but I tried to make the latter part of the line sound like Mario was thanking Link in a slightly mundane way. I can change that to a far happier and estatic way like this:
“Dude, you’re uh, startin’ to me out…
Oh, and thanks for helping me kill Luigi!”
All I did was add an exclamation mark, but see how it can add so much more emotion?
Another line that’s a bit iffy is
“It doesn't matter, he was my brother, and plus, I absolutely despised him, mama mia, he was so mean to-a-me”
Which can be better done as:
“It doesn't matter, he WAS just my brother, and plus, I absolutely despised him! Mama- mia, he was so mean to-ah-me…”
Again, I didn’t alter much of the line, just added a bit here and there. If I did it correctly, the “WAS” should come off as “Well, he WAS a ****er,” and the “…” at the end should give the reader a feel Mario was slightly reminiscing, or trailing off.
If I did it right, that is!
My last real gripe is a simple one to fix. Write your stories up in Microsoft Word, and spell and Grammar check ‘em. A lot of mistakes can be found in your story. I noticed many “They’re was no gun…” or “I cant be held responsible!”
Very subtle grammar errors, but they’re there none the less.
Oh, and Mario’s jet-pack-pal in Sunshine is called “Fludd” … not “Fluud”. XD
But those are just the bad points. Don’t feel too downhearted, as I DO have some nice things to say as well! Have no fear!
One thing that stood out to me was the often admittedly funny Comic Relief you had going. While some of it (Such as Fawful’s lines) were almost taken right out of the games, some of the little one liners and side jokes were actually pretty funny. But it’s good that you keep them to a relative minimum, so that the story isn’t solely a romp through lulz-land. (That’s not a bad thing, but I don’t think you’re aiming for that type of story!)
Keep that up.
Another good point is that, the story, despite what you may think from me, isn’t that awful. It has some clichés, but many stories do. And considering this is an early adventure into the creative world for you, it’s pretty sturdy. You have a nice fan-base going on, I can’t see any glaring plot tumours, the characters are a little undeveloped, but maintain their basic personalities. You really do have talent. As a reviewer once said to me about my Story in its early days “I sense talent in you; if I didn’t, I would just be writing “Good j0b d00d” instead of writing a review” so you’re doing something right.
I’d say the decent foundation of the plot is because you have real determination. It’s very clear you do enjoy writing, (Even if your profile doesn’t even mention it!) and have a real love for this story. I doubt I’ll have to tell you to try and not let this tale go down the toilet, as I don’t think it’s in danger of that.
And that’s that. I know much of this review seems negative, but I really would like to see you improve for the best.
Remember:
- Show, don’t tell.
- Give characters emotion when writing what they say, think, and feel.
- Use spell/Grammar check. On that note, when characters are talking, you change how that works often, Sometimes it’s like a script, other times it’s tradition dialogue other times you just jump in to what they say with not forewarning, and it sounds like were not even reading dialogue.
SuperLinkBrothers
Smash Ace
Thanks
Hey, thanks, criticsm is needed to make the story better.
About the spell checking thing, well, I am lazy, and as so, I dont do that(you're lucky I even write this story) but I guess I might start doing that soon enough.
I see your point on how should beef it up, but for some reason you kept on saying "Dude, you're uh startin' to me out" I think you kept on forgetting the word creep. You dont go around saying your starting to out or I think is hould soon. You're missing a key word, but still you're the one trying to help me out. The other thing about how Im lazy, well, thats why I dont write like this:
"I dought it" mario said
and instead write like this:
Mario: I dought it
I think it's easier that way, and Im sticking with it. Now on the other hand, my other story, The Dark Day, I have everyone talking correctly with qoutations and stuff, and I spell check it on Word, but I dont always have that ability. A lot of the time I am on my home computer, which desnt hae Word, now my labtop on the other hand does. So when I want to use Word I have to go on my labtop. I appreciate your comments as well as your constructive criticsm. Thanks, oh and I would appreciate it if you would check out The Dark Day, it's a very strange story, Ill say that. Not many people post on it though. In fact only one person really does... But I might be starting up a fanfic soon enough. I have some ideas thrown together. Maybe my new fanfic will actually work unlike the other two fanfics Ive done. One of which(if you want to read some of y work) is still on Smashboards. I wrote the first three chapters of Smash Island, but I gave it to Yonder(one of my readers).
Thanks again for the review, and um, I'm planning on updating here again today!
Hey, thanks, criticsm is needed to make the story better.
About the spell checking thing, well, I am lazy, and as so, I dont do that(you're lucky I even write this story
) but I guess I might start doing that soon enough.I see your point on how should beef it up, but for some reason you kept on saying "Dude, you're uh startin' to me out" I think you kept on forgetting the word creep. You dont go around saying your starting to out or I think is hould soon. You're missing a key word, but still you're the one trying to help me out. The other thing about how Im lazy, well, thats why I dont write like this:
"I dought it" mario said
and instead write like this:
Mario: I dought it
I think it's easier that way, and Im sticking with it. Now on the other hand, my other story, The Dark Day, I have everyone talking correctly with qoutations and stuff, and I spell check it on Word, but I dont always have that ability. A lot of the time I am on my home computer, which desnt hae Word, now my labtop on the other hand does. So when I want to use Word I have to go on my labtop. I appreciate your comments as well as your constructive criticsm. Thanks, oh and I would appreciate it if you would check out The Dark Day, it's a very strange story, Ill say that. Not many people post on it though. In fact only one person really does... But I might be starting up a fanfic soon enough. I have some ideas thrown together. Maybe my new fanfic will actually work unlike the other two fanfics Ive done. One of which(if you want to read some of y work) is still on Smashboards. I wrote the first three chapters of Smash Island, but I gave it to Yonder(one of my readers).
Thanks again for the review, and um, I'm planning on updating here again today!
SuperLinkBrothers
Smash Ace
Yo, I just tried copy and pasting what you said, but it didnt work and now there arent links to the stories... good job
but really, I would like to have it so that ou could click on the words Nintendo AdventureL: starring Mario and actaull have it go to this story, can someone tell me how? Legolastom, I know you know how, I remember when you had it on your sig(well, actually you had pictures) but still, im fine with knowing how to do pictures; but Id much rather know how to do words
and yes, I know the way I just worded that paragraph was wierd, but oh well
one more thing, sorry for double posting, but if someone doesnt post again Im going to be triple posting with the next update for the story...
but really, I would like to have it so that ou could click on the words Nintendo AdventureL: starring Mario and actaull have it go to this story, can someone tell me how? Legolastom, I know you know how, I remember when you had it on your sig(well, actually you had pictures) but still, im fine with knowing how to do pictures; but Id much rather know how to do words
and yes, I know the way I just worded that paragraph was wierd, but oh well
one more thing, sorry for double posting, but if someone doesnt post again Im going to be triple posting with the next update for the story...
Legolastom
Smash Hero
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- 5,267
Quote his reply and then copy and paste it...
SuperLinkBrothers
Smash Ace
Section 2: Chapter 10: The Split Team: Part B
alright, I'll try that in a sec
Sorry I was gone for so long, I Had to go, but now Im back, with more of the story
crowd-ooh! ahh!
Section 2: Chapter 10: The Split Team: Part B: The Attack
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Darth-of course my son, we must go through with the plan. We must be the only Empire. We must destroy Legolastom and their entire team
Mr.L-very well sire
Darth-It is the only way, now, tell them to begin the attack!
Mr.L-heh heh heh, of course father
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Legolastom-oh, you're so precious Samus, look at you, trying to break free from your bars, ha ha ha
Samus-what-what do you want with me?
Legolastom-you don't know? My god, you're one of the keys to unlocking something very special, much more precious than you
Samus-what do I have to do with anything?
Legolastom-well, you mam are the only chozo close enough for me.
Samus-yeah, so? What the he*l does that have to do with anything you sleazy ba**ard
Legolastom-Well, seeing as I am a bad guy and all bad guys act stupid and tell their prisoners their plans so that when they escape they can tell the rest of their group; ill tell you. Well, you see, Samus, in your time period, you are the last of the chozo. But now that I understand time warps, I understand that you went through one and now you're back in time where the Earth is still around. Now in your time period, the Earth was the biggest and best planet for Galaxies, but they quickly collapsed and the planet exploded. The earth was gone. But today the Earth is still around, we are not the biggest and best planet for galaxies, in fact at our current state, we are the puniest and worst one for galaxies, but the human race quickly will learn and develop. We aren’t supposed to know anything about time warps or the future or the Chozo. But...
Chains-due to a recent time warp, we do
Legolastom-exactly, the chozos are a thriving race right now, but they are so far away, it is just my luck that you and your suit are here, it is absolutely perfect for my plan. Samus, I don’t know what I'd do without you
Samus-woohoo, you basically just told me everything I know, how about you tell me your plan
Legolastom-sorry, I just got a little carried away there, well, yhea, you see, um, yhea, yhea, the thing is, uh, yhea, I forgot
Chains-due to a recent time warp, he forgot his plan, so Ill tell you it
Legolastom-yhea
Chains-so, Legolastom’s evil plan-
Legolastom-super evil!
Chains-super evil, whatever, so anyways, Legolastom’s SUPER evil plan is to take over all worlds by enslaving them with his advanced technology. You are key because of your suit and your chozo knowledge.
Legolastom-oh yhea
Chains-due to a recent time warp, Legolastom got his memory back
Legolastom-yhea
Chains-so, you can tell the rest
Legolastom-um, yhea, that’s the entire plan I want to tell her
Chains-oh, of course sir
Legolastom-well, maybe a little more, you see I-
He was interrupted by a loud explosion coming from outside. Legoastom and Chains ran to the window and watched as TIE fighters were attacking their fleets.
Legolastom-what-what is this madness
Chains-due to a recent time warp, I’m getting’ the he*l out of here!
Legolastom-hey! Get back here!
Chains turned the corner and fled
Legolastom-so, it’s all up to me, figures
Samus-you cant get away with this
Computer-RED ALERT! RED ALERT! HOSTILES DETECTED IN HANGAR BAY 12!
Legolastom-what in the world?
Computer-[][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][]
Legolastom-this is madness!
He watched as large spaceships landed. Each one held two…humanoid…things
Legolastom-oh my god, backup troops
Those things started attacking the Stormtroopers and started heading inside the building, they attacked Legolastoms troopers as well, and they seemed to have some sort of blaster inside their… claws!
Legolastom-my god! What are those things! Computer, call down Iceman
Computer-right away sir, RED ALER! RED ALERT!
Iceman skidded down the hallways and into the prisoner’s chamber
Iceman-you called for me sir?
Legolastom-I want you to move your troops to position Beta, and find out who and what those…things…are.
Iceman-right away sir
He ran off and called in for positions Beta
Computer-THEY’VE BREACKED THE FIFTH LINE OF SECURITY, HOSTILES NOW HAVE COMPLETE ACCESS TO STATION! RED ALERT! RED ALERT! HOSTILES INVADING ENTIRE STATION!
Legolastom-*sigh* I better ready myself…
Samus-ya know, I could help you if you gave me back my chozo suit
Legolastom-bah, you look better in you zero-suit and I need your suit anyways
He put the suit on. It was remade slightly for a guy (think about it) so it worked perfectly.
Legolastom-see, it looks a lot better on ME!
Samus-grrr…
Legolastom left the room for a better defensive and offensive position.
Samus struggled to break free when all of a sudden Chains walked back in
Chains-due to a recent time warp, you’re saved!
He unlocked the chains and locks from Samus. She jumped down.
Samus-bu-but why…?
Chains-you must understand that due to a recent time warp, Ive always been a good guy, but I must leave now
He sped off
Samus-great! Now I have to escape this place with just my emergency pistol, god I hate having to use physical attacks.
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Mr.L-They need help out there father
Darth-fine, get our TIE’s ready, it’s time we destroy them all!
~~~~~~
Samus ran down the halls, not to farther until she reached the landing site and was free. She looked out, no ships left for her to take, she had to get to one pf the escape pods immediately. As she made her way to Escape Pod Access E she saw a man standing there.
Man-I cannot let you pazz
Samus looked strangely at the man, he looked like Ganondorf, in fact, exactly like him!
Man-I’m zure you are wondering who I am?
Samus-well yes
He had a large sword in his hands that he leaned on.
Samus-so…who are you?
Man-I am none other than the great Blackadder!
Samus-Black……adder?
Blackadder-well, yez, you mean….you mean you’ve never heard of me before?
Samus-not…really…
Blackadder-oh my, well, hmmmm, thiz iz not good…
Samus-soooo, can I go pass or not?
Blackadder-yez, I guezz zo…
Samus ran past the man thinking how that was extremely weird.
She stopped before she turned a corner for she heard voices down the hallway. She peered down. Darth Vader, Mr.L, and a few stormtroopers were there
Samus(to herself)-*gasp* Luigi is still alive and with Vader, so that’s what is going on here.
Boom boom boom, crash
Samus peered down the hallway again, she saw the stormtroopers shooting down the other corridor. Darth was heading the pther way and Luigi started heading down towards…HER!
She readied herself, she never thought she’d have to fight Luigi or anyone on her old team like this. Luigi reached the corner, turned and gasped
Mr.L-s-s-samus, it-it’s YOU!
Samus-that’s right Luigi, Ive been captured here ever since that day
Mr.L-who, three years since Ive seen you, I miss-I mean, heh heh heh, Im Mr.L now, and you are in big trouble now! Heh heh heh
Samus stood back
Luigi just kept on staring at her.
Samus-um… why are you looking at me like that
Mr.L-who, y-you’re purty
Samus-oh my god, this is going to be easier then I thought!
She kicked him in the face and ran down the hall. The Stormtroopers will still shooting down the hall. She peered down that hall and saw….
Samus-SPACE PIRATES!!
They kept on shooting, the Stormtroopers were all killed. The space Pirates started running down the hall.
When they reached the hall she was at she kicked one of the three of them with a hi-kick, it got knocked down
Space Pirate 2-tahw ni eht dlrow?
Space Pirate 3-kool, s’ti sumas nara!
Space Pirate 2-ho tihs!!!!!!!!!!
Samus shot the second one and then kicked it, as well as the third one
Samus-this is not good!
She reached the escape pod, she got in it and flew off.
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Legolastom stood at his large window, watching the Space Pirates, Stormtroopers and Plastic Army Men fight(legolastoms fighters). Then he saw an escape pod leave
Legolastom-my god, that was near Samus’s spot, she escaped! oh well, I’ve still got her suit.
Legolastom’s door was burst open.
Legolastom- ah, a bunch of Stormtroopers!
Legolastom looked at Darth Vader
Legolastom waslooked at by Darth Vader
Legolastom realized all of these paragraphs were being started with the word Legolastom.
Legolastom was suspicious about why nobody was attacking each other
Legolastom was told to by Vader that he was stupid and his time was up
Legolastom-I disagree with this
Legolastom, was told that he should surrender now
Legolastom was still wondering why all of these sentences were starting with the word Legolastom.
Legolastom looked at the floor and realized that he was in the Legolastom room; where every paragraph starts with the word Legolastom.
Legolastom-welcome to the Legolastom room
Legolastoms room was decorated with pictures of Legolastom.
Legolastom’s pictures were of him without any suits, with his blue suit, his gray suit, his mask, and his Dragonball Z costume on
Legoastom was getting tired of every paragraph starting with the word Legolastom.
Legolastom-lets leave the Legolastom room
Legolastom and the others left the room
Legolastoms room was now empty
Legolastom-finally, now we can finally talk normally!
Darth-good, so, as I was saying, surrender or die
Legolastom-never!
Legolastom pulled out a green beam-like sword
Darth Vader pulled out his red lightsaber
Darth-leave us be, we shall fight in this Legolastom room, I shall kill him off
Legolastom and Darth entered the room again, leaving the door closed
Legolastom swung his sword. Vader blocked
Legoastom was told by Vader that he had no skill
Legolastom-what, and YOU do?
Legolastom blocked the attack by Darth and swung back
Legolastom somehow damaged Vader.
Legolastom swung his sword wildly in Darth’s direction
Legolastom was swung at wildly from Darth’s direction
Legolastom was slowly losing, he got pierced on the back
Legolastom was pierced again on the back by Darth
Legolastom hit Vader’s saber with such force that it got pushed away
*Legolastom’s fight, I think you should know that Star Wars music is playing, only appropriate*
Legolastom started flying in the air, Vader was choking him
Legolastom broke free and stabbed Vader in the chest
Legolastom-well, that was easier then I thought
Legolastom looked at Vader, it was only a robot!
Legolastom was shocked
Legolastom-ok, whoever is narrorating this story, can you please turn this into the turnip room, just for fun?
Turnip room? The narrorator said, ok!
Turnips said Legolastom as he looked at the body
Turnip’s room’s door was opened by Legolastom
Turnip Room had Legolastom in it, who was looking at the Stormtroopers outside.
Turnip room did not have Stormtroopers in it, until right now, where they walked in and were killed by Legolastom
Turnip room was left there by Legolastom
Legolastom-finally, I left the room again!
Legolastom-um, turn it into a sexy room
Narrorator-um…ok
Sexy room was opened again as Legolastom entered
Sexy room had a window in it that Legolastom was peering through.
Sexy room had weird powers and it turned Legolastom into Yoda
Sexy beast I am, yessssssss said Yoda
Sexy Beast, I am, said Captain Falcon, who was brought there by the weird powers in the room
Sexy you are not, and I thought you could only say words like yes, and falcon said Yoda
Sexy I am said Legolastom, Sexy is in my vocabulary, the words in my vocabulary are yes, captain, falcon, punch, kick, yessss, sexy, beast, I, am, is, in, my, vocabulary, the, and, words!
Sexy movie time, yesssss, said Yoda
Sexy, yesss said Captain Falcon
Sexy move time Yoda said, yessss, narrorator should end chapter, yesss
Sexy Idea, the narrorator said
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Should Zelda be brought back to life with Link in chapter 12?
A. Yep
B. Nope
C. Yes-siree
D. No-siree
E. Yes
F. No
G. Ya
H. Na
I. Yeah
J. Nay
K. Nine
L. Yhea
M. Si
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I hope you all enjoyed that update, as said above, the question is for chapter 12, not chapter 11! yes, I know the ending was wierd, but, whatever
alright, I'll try that in a sec
Sorry I was gone for so long, I Had to go, but now Im back, with more of the story
crowd-ooh! ahh!
Section 2: Chapter 10: The Split Team: Part B: The Attack
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Darth-of course my son, we must go through with the plan. We must be the only Empire. We must destroy Legolastom and their entire team
Mr.L-very well sire
Darth-It is the only way, now, tell them to begin the attack!
Mr.L-heh heh heh, of course father
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Legolastom-oh, you're so precious Samus, look at you, trying to break free from your bars, ha ha ha
Samus-what-what do you want with me?
Legolastom-you don't know? My god, you're one of the keys to unlocking something very special, much more precious than you
Samus-what do I have to do with anything?
Legolastom-well, you mam are the only chozo close enough for me.
Samus-yeah, so? What the he*l does that have to do with anything you sleazy ba**ard
Legolastom-Well, seeing as I am a bad guy and all bad guys act stupid and tell their prisoners their plans so that when they escape they can tell the rest of their group; ill tell you. Well, you see, Samus, in your time period, you are the last of the chozo. But now that I understand time warps, I understand that you went through one and now you're back in time where the Earth is still around. Now in your time period, the Earth was the biggest and best planet for Galaxies, but they quickly collapsed and the planet exploded. The earth was gone. But today the Earth is still around, we are not the biggest and best planet for galaxies, in fact at our current state, we are the puniest and worst one for galaxies, but the human race quickly will learn and develop. We aren’t supposed to know anything about time warps or the future or the Chozo. But...
Chains-due to a recent time warp, we do
Legolastom-exactly, the chozos are a thriving race right now, but they are so far away, it is just my luck that you and your suit are here, it is absolutely perfect for my plan. Samus, I don’t know what I'd do without you
Samus-woohoo, you basically just told me everything I know, how about you tell me your plan
Legolastom-sorry, I just got a little carried away there, well, yhea, you see, um, yhea, yhea, the thing is, uh, yhea, I forgot
Chains-due to a recent time warp, he forgot his plan, so Ill tell you it
Legolastom-yhea
Chains-so, Legolastom’s evil plan-
Legolastom-super evil!
Chains-super evil, whatever, so anyways, Legolastom’s SUPER evil plan is to take over all worlds by enslaving them with his advanced technology. You are key because of your suit and your chozo knowledge.
Legolastom-oh yhea
Chains-due to a recent time warp, Legolastom got his memory back
Legolastom-yhea
Chains-so, you can tell the rest
Legolastom-um, yhea, that’s the entire plan I want to tell her
Chains-oh, of course sir
Legolastom-well, maybe a little more, you see I-
He was interrupted by a loud explosion coming from outside. Legoastom and Chains ran to the window and watched as TIE fighters were attacking their fleets.
Legolastom-what-what is this madness
Chains-due to a recent time warp, I’m getting’ the he*l out of here!
Legolastom-hey! Get back here!
Chains turned the corner and fled
Legolastom-so, it’s all up to me, figures
Samus-you cant get away with this
Computer-RED ALERT! RED ALERT! HOSTILES DETECTED IN HANGAR BAY 12!
Legolastom-what in the world?
Computer-[][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][]
Legolastom-this is madness!
He watched as large spaceships landed. Each one held two…humanoid…things
Legolastom-oh my god, backup troops
Those things started attacking the Stormtroopers and started heading inside the building, they attacked Legolastoms troopers as well, and they seemed to have some sort of blaster inside their… claws!
Legolastom-my god! What are those things! Computer, call down Iceman
Computer-right away sir, RED ALER! RED ALERT!
Iceman skidded down the hallways and into the prisoner’s chamber
Iceman-you called for me sir?
Legolastom-I want you to move your troops to position Beta, and find out who and what those…things…are.
Iceman-right away sir
He ran off and called in for positions Beta
Computer-THEY’VE BREACKED THE FIFTH LINE OF SECURITY, HOSTILES NOW HAVE COMPLETE ACCESS TO STATION! RED ALERT! RED ALERT! HOSTILES INVADING ENTIRE STATION!
Legolastom-*sigh* I better ready myself…
Samus-ya know, I could help you if you gave me back my chozo suit
Legolastom-bah, you look better in you zero-suit and I need your suit anyways
He put the suit on. It was remade slightly for a guy (think about it) so it worked perfectly.
Legolastom-see, it looks a lot better on ME!
Samus-grrr…
Legolastom left the room for a better defensive and offensive position.
Samus struggled to break free when all of a sudden Chains walked back in
Chains-due to a recent time warp, you’re saved!
He unlocked the chains and locks from Samus. She jumped down.
Samus-bu-but why…?
Chains-you must understand that due to a recent time warp, Ive always been a good guy, but I must leave now
He sped off
Samus-great! Now I have to escape this place with just my emergency pistol, god I hate having to use physical attacks.
~~~~~~
Mr.L-They need help out there father
Darth-fine, get our TIE’s ready, it’s time we destroy them all!
~~~~~~
Samus ran down the halls, not to farther until she reached the landing site and was free. She looked out, no ships left for her to take, she had to get to one pf the escape pods immediately. As she made her way to Escape Pod Access E she saw a man standing there.
Man-I cannot let you pazz
Samus looked strangely at the man, he looked like Ganondorf, in fact, exactly like him!
Man-I’m zure you are wondering who I am?
Samus-well yes
He had a large sword in his hands that he leaned on.
Samus-so…who are you?
Man-I am none other than the great Blackadder!
Samus-Black……adder?
Blackadder-well, yez, you mean….you mean you’ve never heard of me before?
Samus-not…really…
Blackadder-oh my, well, hmmmm, thiz iz not good…
Samus-soooo, can I go pass or not?
Blackadder-yez, I guezz zo…
Samus ran past the man thinking how that was extremely weird.
She stopped before she turned a corner for she heard voices down the hallway. She peered down. Darth Vader, Mr.L, and a few stormtroopers were there
Samus(to herself)-*gasp* Luigi is still alive and with Vader, so that’s what is going on here.
Boom boom boom, crash
Samus peered down the hallway again, she saw the stormtroopers shooting down the other corridor. Darth was heading the pther way and Luigi started heading down towards…HER!
She readied herself, she never thought she’d have to fight Luigi or anyone on her old team like this. Luigi reached the corner, turned and gasped
Mr.L-s-s-samus, it-it’s YOU!
Samus-that’s right Luigi, Ive been captured here ever since that day
Mr.L-who, three years since Ive seen you, I miss-I mean, heh heh heh, Im Mr.L now, and you are in big trouble now! Heh heh heh
Samus stood back
Luigi just kept on staring at her.
Samus-um… why are you looking at me like that
Mr.L-who, y-you’re purty
Samus-oh my god, this is going to be easier then I thought!
She kicked him in the face and ran down the hall. The Stormtroopers will still shooting down the hall. She peered down that hall and saw….
Samus-SPACE PIRATES!!
They kept on shooting, the Stormtroopers were all killed. The space Pirates started running down the hall.
When they reached the hall she was at she kicked one of the three of them with a hi-kick, it got knocked down
Space Pirate 2-tahw ni eht dlrow?
Space Pirate 3-kool, s’ti sumas nara!
Space Pirate 2-ho tihs!!!!!!!!!!
Samus shot the second one and then kicked it, as well as the third one
Samus-this is not good!
She reached the escape pod, she got in it and flew off.
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Legolastom stood at his large window, watching the Space Pirates, Stormtroopers and Plastic Army Men fight(legolastoms fighters). Then he saw an escape pod leave
Legolastom-my god, that was near Samus’s spot, she escaped! oh well, I’ve still got her suit.
Legolastom’s door was burst open.
Legolastom- ah, a bunch of Stormtroopers!
Legolastom looked at Darth Vader
Legolastom waslooked at by Darth Vader
Legolastom realized all of these paragraphs were being started with the word Legolastom.
Legolastom was suspicious about why nobody was attacking each other
Legolastom was told to by Vader that he was stupid and his time was up
Legolastom-I disagree with this
Legolastom, was told that he should surrender now
Legolastom was still wondering why all of these sentences were starting with the word Legolastom.
Legolastom looked at the floor and realized that he was in the Legolastom room; where every paragraph starts with the word Legolastom.
Legolastom-welcome to the Legolastom room
Legolastoms room was decorated with pictures of Legolastom.
Legolastom’s pictures were of him without any suits, with his blue suit, his gray suit, his mask, and his Dragonball Z costume on
Legoastom was getting tired of every paragraph starting with the word Legolastom.
Legolastom-lets leave the Legolastom room
Legolastom and the others left the room
Legolastoms room was now empty
Legolastom-finally, now we can finally talk normally!
Darth-good, so, as I was saying, surrender or die
Legolastom-never!
Legolastom pulled out a green beam-like sword
Darth Vader pulled out his red lightsaber
Darth-leave us be, we shall fight in this Legolastom room, I shall kill him off
Legolastom and Darth entered the room again, leaving the door closed
Legolastom swung his sword. Vader blocked
Legoastom was told by Vader that he had no skill
Legolastom-what, and YOU do?
Legolastom blocked the attack by Darth and swung back
Legolastom somehow damaged Vader.
Legolastom swung his sword wildly in Darth’s direction
Legolastom was swung at wildly from Darth’s direction
Legolastom was slowly losing, he got pierced on the back
Legolastom was pierced again on the back by Darth
Legolastom hit Vader’s saber with such force that it got pushed away
*Legolastom’s fight, I think you should know that Star Wars music is playing, only appropriate*
Legolastom started flying in the air, Vader was choking him
Legolastom broke free and stabbed Vader in the chest
Legolastom-well, that was easier then I thought
Legolastom looked at Vader, it was only a robot!
Legolastom was shocked
Legolastom-ok, whoever is narrorating this story, can you please turn this into the turnip room, just for fun?
Turnip room? The narrorator said, ok!
Turnips said Legolastom as he looked at the body
Turnip’s room’s door was opened by Legolastom
Turnip Room had Legolastom in it, who was looking at the Stormtroopers outside.
Turnip room did not have Stormtroopers in it, until right now, where they walked in and were killed by Legolastom
Turnip room was left there by Legolastom
Legolastom-finally, I left the room again!
Legolastom-um, turn it into a sexy room
Narrorator-um…ok
Sexy room was opened again as Legolastom entered
Sexy room had a window in it that Legolastom was peering through.
Sexy room had weird powers and it turned Legolastom into Yoda
Sexy beast I am, yessssssss said Yoda
Sexy Beast, I am, said Captain Falcon, who was brought there by the weird powers in the room
Sexy you are not, and I thought you could only say words like yes, and falcon said Yoda
Sexy I am said Legolastom, Sexy is in my vocabulary, the words in my vocabulary are yes, captain, falcon, punch, kick, yessss, sexy, beast, I, am, is, in, my, vocabulary, the, and, words!
Sexy movie time, yesssss, said Yoda
Sexy, yesss said Captain Falcon
Sexy move time Yoda said, yessss, narrorator should end chapter, yesss
Sexy Idea, the narrorator said
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Should Zelda be brought back to life with Link in chapter 12?
A. Yep
B. Nope
C. Yes-siree
D. No-siree
E. Yes
F. No
G. Ya
H. Na
I. Yeah
J. Nay
K. Nine
L. Yhea
M. Si
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I hope you all enjoyed that update, as said above, the question is for chapter 12, not chapter 11! yes, I know the ending was wierd, but, whatever
SuperLinkBrothers
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And LMAO at the sexy room thing XD
And LMAO at the sexy room thing XD