I'll start with the flower.
The best flower to me is in the first model (from the comparison picture, the first model on the left).
I know, and that's why it's the final model, as I call it.
The boots also are perfect in the first model (assuming that this is a Brawl model and everything is a bit more "realistic").
Boots are basically the same of the first and third model, just the flower is different. The boots were planned like this from the beginning and only the so-called "classic" model (middle one) has different ones.
The skirt, I think that it's better in the third model; it simply look better, even if is different from the artwork. Maybe it would be better if you make it a little longer, like in the other two models, and the additional layer that you made in the first model is a good idea. (smash always adds lots of additional details to the characters, for an example look at Peach).
I actually prefer the simplicity of the first skirt while still making it appear more modern with the petticoat underneath. As for making the third skirt longer, you might not see it due to the angle, but it's already knee long. Any longer and I'd say it would be too long for a Lip model.
The belt is better in the third model, the metallic part added in the first model is a bit unfitting and makes it less girly.
Disagreed, I don't think a belt buckle on a belt makes something or someone appear less girly.
The beads on her tail are a bit too big. I agree that 2 big beads are better than 4 small, but I think that they're way too big.
Looking at official art (I went by my instinct and terrible memory when I made them), I agree they are a bit too big, but I wouldn't exactly say "way too big". Looking at artwork, they are roughly half as tall as the ponytail...tail. I'll shrink them down a bit.
The shirt is good, but looks like if something is still missing... maybe it's just because of the textures, but I think that the shirt looks a bit bland compared to the rest of the model (i'd try adding some more details, like for the skirt of the third model).
Suggestions? If it's textures, I already said textures aren't my strength and I'll just concentrate on the model. Also I don't think I'll add anything to the shirt either, the polygon count is already 13.5k (~14k with both Lip's Sticks). It's best to never exceed 12k, although higher polys can work in Smash, too, but I don't wanna go overboard.
Also, the sleeves of the shirt are a bit strange: I think that the upper part should be a little "puffy" too, in a similar way as they are on Peach's dress (look at the 1 picture in
this link for an example)
I'll see what I can do without making it look weird.
Everything else is perfect!
Thanks.
I want to point out that this is just my feedback and I'm not saying that you "should" or "must" modify the model, they're just some suggestions, you can ignore them if you want.
You talk like feedback wouldn't be appreciated, haha. I'm not one of those ultra-defensive people who can't take critism. But it's 9pm already, so don't expect to see anything soon. I'll probably get to it tomorrow.
It would be awesome if Lip will become part of Project M thanks to this model, good job!
I still don't get the fixation on Project M everyone has, a simple model import for vanilla Brawl would be more than enough for me already. It's better than nothing, at least.